hey i'm kinda new to wattpad and would like some constructive criticism, don't hold back! hope you enjoy my story!

goals at the moment:

1 vote: [ X ]
10 votes: [ X ]
15 votes: [ X ]
25 votes: [ X ]
50 votes!: [ X ]
75 votes: [  X ]
100 votes!: [ X  ]

1 read: [ X ]
15 reads: [ X ]
25 reads: [ X ]
50 reads!: [ X ]
75 reads: [ X ]
100 reads!: [ X ] yay i reached one of my goals!!!!!

1 comment: [ X ]
15 comments: [ X ]
25 comments: [ X ]
50 comments!: [ X ]
75 comments: [ X ]
100 comments!: [ X ] another goal crossed off, is it bad that I have more comments than votes? :O

be number 100 in any category(romance, watty awards): [  ]
be number 75 in a category: [  ]
be number 50 in a category:! [  ]
be number 25 in a category: [  ]
be number 1 in a category: [  ]

be on the what's hot list!!!!!!!!!!: [ X ] it may be number 826 on page 55 but it means a lot to me!
be number 500 on the what's hot list: [  ]
be number 250 on the what's hot list: [  ]
be number 100 on the what's hot list: [  ]
be number 75 on the what's hot list: [  ]
be number 50 on the what's hot list: [  ]
be 25 on the what's hot list: [  ]
be number 1 on the whats hot list!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!: [  ]  <-------------- lol my ultimate goal in life!