Taiwanrepublic1986

Sorry about the punish: gray raven, the phone is lagging and have two time to accidently punish the unfinished story, it is my fault to do this trouble.

Addict8163

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To be honest, u r an incredible author, tho I do have 2 things to criticize;
          
          1. Your grammar... your fucking grammar... it hurts me...
          
          2. How u space out your words, like bro dont just make an entire 5k word chapter into one paragraph

Lt_Ace

the return button I presume?
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Addict8163

@Taiwanrepublic1986 bro I use phone too just press the thingy on the bottom right
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Taiwanrepublic1986

Plus I use phone to write story
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