Kpfan12

Welp published my first actual story which the prologue is done but any ideas for the first chapter? 

Kpfan12

@ Snip-6969 well that seems like a good idea i might put the boxs P.O.V during the teleportation 
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Snip-6969

@Kpfan12 also some criticism, I don't consider "oh no the portal has brought us into another world with 0 context" but it's easily fixable in later chapters if you can get creative, but NOT "god called you for help" neither "scientists made a portal and accidentally got you here" I myself have an example, the portal can be the enemies attempt to capture them by teleporting them to their base but instead got them to another world cuz some goofy box accidentally dropped a cup of coffee to the teleportation crystal energy stone thing or such because bully box decided to do a funny, the box facility went into a panic outrage trying to figure out a way to NOT teleport the Titans into a unfavorable spot in the facility so in a last ditch effort decided to teleport them to another dimension instead which forbids them from ever stealing the advanced technology in the Titans but also erases their presence and ability to turn the tides of war.
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Kpfan12

@ Snip-6969 thanks and i Will try to not imidietly make them destroy a whitefang outpost even though they are terrorists
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Kpfan12

Welp published my first actual story which the prologue is done but any ideas for the first chapter? 

Kpfan12

@ Snip-6969 well that seems like a good idea i might put the boxs P.O.V during the teleportation 
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Snip-6969

@Kpfan12 also some criticism, I don't consider "oh no the portal has brought us into another world with 0 context" but it's easily fixable in later chapters if you can get creative, but NOT "god called you for help" neither "scientists made a portal and accidentally got you here" I myself have an example, the portal can be the enemies attempt to capture them by teleporting them to their base but instead got them to another world cuz some goofy box accidentally dropped a cup of coffee to the teleportation crystal energy stone thing or such because bully box decided to do a funny, the box facility went into a panic outrage trying to figure out a way to NOT teleport the Titans into a unfavorable spot in the facility so in a last ditch effort decided to teleport them to another dimension instead which forbids them from ever stealing the advanced technology in the Titans but also erases their presence and ability to turn the tides of war.
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Kpfan12

@ Snip-6969 thanks and i Will try to not imidietly make them destroy a whitefang outpost even though they are terrorists
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Kpfan12

Drumroll please *drumroll noises* i have changed my profile picture and background again but the profile picture is from titanboomboxeditz on YouTube so thanks to him

Kpfan12

@ EMP_D01 hatred why are you working at MC Donalds 
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EMP_D01

Brother.. May i have some oats... 
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Kpfan12

Welp oci went missing and now its just odi and oyi which odi is trying to mate with oyi even though she is still a kitten and odi is already an adult

Kpfan12

@ Kpfan12  i have no idea because if a remember correctly in the past 12 years i had either 8 or 12 cats die
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Dude98362

@Kpfan12 bro why are your cats always dying or doing weird stuff :sob:
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Kpfan12

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For some reason i just cant stick with a single profile picture and background probbaly because my brain is too busy thinking about the random shit my OCs are doing so i guess thats why i cant focus on one thing which is also why i follow so many people