(Nitya was lying on the floor on her stomach)
(All the men present there except family members were laughing and of course making fun of her, while she was lying down)
Dushashan : ye lijiye jyest, aapki dasi aapke samne prastut hai
Nitya : mei kisiki dasi nhi hu!!
(Nitya's voice was heard, it was cold and dark, hearing this, everyone paused their laughing session and looked at her keenly)
(She stood up from her place and glanced at everyone who was looking at her with lustful eyes, her hair was messed up, saree was disheveled revealing some parts of the body, she was having wounds everywhere, moreover, all the sight of unknown men made her hella uncomfortable)
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(Kunti took a deep breath)
Kunti : tumhara jyest aur koi nhi, Karn hai!!!
(Everyone gasped listening this, including Karn)
(All looked at Kunti and Karn with wide eyes, no one was able to believe this fresh news)
(Infact, Karn too didn't have any idea of this)
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This is a fanfiction starring another Sister of The Great Pandavas and Kauravas, Daughter of Madri and Pandu.
She is a blessing from Lord Mahadev and Devi Parvati.
Everyone knows about the Great Mahabharat, but I have added a twist by introducing a younger sister of Pandavas and Kauravas (Nitya) she is most loving, caring and supportive towards her Pandava brothers, she cannot tolerate insults for her family members, rather it be anyone, on the contrary Duryodhan too loves her as he expects no harm from her, but Nitya hates Kauravas as they always try Pandavas to get out of the way of Hastinapur
and it's Throne.
So, let's deep down more in the story and see The Great Mahabharata through the eyes of Nitya.
This whole story is full of my imagination, it has nothing to do with the real Mahabharat.
Started on : 24th November, 2023
Ended on :
"mending bonds", the changed epic, book 1✔️under a little Renovation
27 parts Complete
27 parts
Complete
cover credits, @prapti_1234
Editor @mrilina
*under editing, just correcting the spelling errors, do read if you've no problem with it*
mending bonds,
the changed epic , book 1.
mahabharata, the gratest spiritual epic of all time.
so many things happend in the said epic . many of us desire a change in the epic.
what if such a change was brought about by our notty krishna himself?
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what if 2 unexpected persons heard about karna's trueth, after the rang bhoomi event, , "duryodhana, karna's best friend, and arjun, karna's arch enimy?
would they be enemys, at all?
what if our natkhat kanha decides to make his appearance in the kalapradarshan event when karna's being insulted?
would everything be fine?
?
would the bonds be mended?
would the pandavas and the kauravas be one and together?
what about mamanshri shakuni?
this is the first book of the changed epic cronicles.
if karn would be saved?
if kunti would gather courage to speak the trueth of her firstborn?
would radha ma accept this?
find out for yourselves