Elements of Fire

By Nimarna

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Would the story of the Mahabharat have taken a different course if Karna had stood up for Draupadi in the dic... More

Announcement: Covers
Announcement: Aesthetics
1. The Infamous Dice Game
3. Of Palace Elders
4. More than a Sutputra ?
5. Making Plans
6. The Wedding
7. New Beginnings
8. Maharani of Anga
9. Of Honour and Conscience
10. Overhearing Things
11. Unusual Behaviours
12. Subhadra Reasons
13. Upcoming Festivities
14. Karna Invites a Storm
15. An Incomplete Talk
16. Past and Present
17. Initiatives
18. A strange Feeling
19. Changes and Changing Courses
20. Stepping Out
21. Hibiscus
22. Words and Prayers
23. Checking Moods and Gifts
24. Crumpled Flowers
25. Ritual Fire
26. Mother's Healing Touch
27. Finding Ourselves
28. Some Untangling And New Depths
29. Anchor
Announcement
Announcement
30. Unspoken And Heard
31. A Hidden Listener
32. A Decision
Announcement
33. Instructions
34. A Long Night -1
35. A Long Night-2
36. A Long Night-3
37. A Long Night- 4
38. A Long Night- 5
Announcement
39. Draupadi Resolves
40. Strange Coincidence-1
41. Strange Coincidence- 2
42. A Mute and Perplexed Spectator
43. A Talk
44. Reassuring Doubtfully
45. Getting Ready
46. Draupadi Decides to Act
47. Negotiations -1
48. Negotiations -2
49. Negotiations -3
50. Negotiations -4
51. Answering Responses
52. New Feelings -1
53. New Feelings -2
Announcement
54. In Light and Dark
55. Of Two Fire-Borns -1
56. Of Two Fire-Borns -2
57. Of Two Fire- Borns -3
58. Of Two Fire-Borns -4
Announcement
59. Of Two Fire-Borns -5
Announcement
60. Of Two Fire-Borns -6
61. His Daughter, Her Daughter
62. Conversing of the Future? -1
Announcement
Announcement
63. Conversing of the Future? -2
64. Conversing of the Future? -3
65. Conversing of the Future? -4
66. Conversing of the Future? -5
67. Conversing of the Future? -6
68. Braiding Hairs and Thoughts
69. Putting To Sleep
70. Conditions?
71. Some Discomfiture and Laughter
72. Of Little Girls and Hidden Blushes
73. Of Weaving a Bangle
Announcement: Living Characters
74. Some Glance, Some See
75. Ruffling Thoughts- 1
76. Ruffling Thoughts -2
77. An Imperfection- 1
78. An Imperfection- 2
79. Yudhistira's Remorse -1
80. Yudhistira's Remorse -2
81. Yudhistira's Remorse -3
Announcement

2. Changes

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By Nimarna

"That is not unexpected of you Draupadi. Your pride is always intact isn't it?" Duryodhan began mockingly "But things don't change for me. She is independent and has to fend for herself. She is now left to the mercy of the world"

She could only glare but had to concede there was truth in what he said. A jolt of fear passed through her as she watched him approach her menacingly.

"But you know Draupadi there is a way out for you." He continued in a threatening voice.

She fully understood what he meant but all the unpleasant happenings had drained her both physically and emotionally. She stood helplessly at the closing figure of Duryodhan when it was obstructed. Karn stood with his back to her blocking Duryodhan.

"Yes. Yes she is independent but no she is not left to the mercy of this world. If she is willing, I will take her as the Queen of Anga, as my wife."

Another stunned silence followed. Karn slowly turned around and looked enquiringly at her.

She was lost for words. She knew it was an extremely generous offer and knew that in the situation she had few options. Everyone in the hall waited for her answer with baited breathes. She looked up at his eyes. They were a cloud of emotions. She could only nod in agreement.

The entire assembly gasped. From a corner of her eye she could see Kunti shake her head and the five Pandavas stare at her open mouthed. She was too tired.

"But... but my friend Karn, are you in your senses? She is now –" Duryodhan began.

"The future Queen of Anga" Karn cut him.

"But this woman had insulted you. How can you be so generous to her? She is nothing but a whore" Duryodhan continued undaunted.

"Enough Duryodhan. Don't you know when to stop?" Gandhari yelled at him furiously even before karna could reply.

"You will speak of Draupadi with respect. If my bow rises today then even I won't be able to suppress it Duryodhan, my friend" Karna spoke calmly and firmly before turning to Draupadi "Now Draupadi should I leave you to your personal chamber or with your mothers in law."

"To my personal chamber" she croaked out.

Karna nodded and gently escorted her away from the hall leaving the others gaping after them in silence.

Draupadi just walked on blindly wherever Karn led her to. It wasn't until all the maids ran up to her that she realized she had reached her chamber. They quickly led her fussing over her but she did not care. She noticed Karn having a few serious words with her head maid. She couldn't care. After all she had given him some rights over her and soon they would be married. She sighed.

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