The Descent

By TechieInAK

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After Denton foils a terrorist attack at an Intergalactic sporting event, he finds himself racing to save his... More

Chapter 1 - The Eternal Sun
Chapter 2 - Discovery
Chapter 3 - Breakthrough
Chapter 4 - The Point of No Return
Chapter 5 - The Descent
Chapter 6 - Exit
Chapter 7 - Darkness To Light
Chapter 8 - The Ghost
Chapter 9 - The Search
Chapter 10 - The Revelation
Chapter 11 - A Familiar Face
Chapter 12 - The Chase
Chapter 13 - Sarge
Chapter 14 - The Invitation
Chapter 15 - The Aftermath
Chapter 16 - Boarding
Chapter 17 - Disintegration
Chapter 18 - The Arrival
Chapter 19 - Mars Arrival
Chapter 21 - Departure
Chapter 22 - The Arrival
Chapter 23 - Back To Work
Chapter 24 - Into The Storm
Chapter 25 - Rain
Chapter 27 - The Approach
Chapter 27 - The Runner
Chapter 28 - A Clue
Chapter 29 - Extraction
Chapter 30 - The Hike
Chapter 31 - Crash Landing
Chapter 32 - Landing
Chapter 33 - Forsythe
Chapter 34 - The Chase
Chapter 35 - Revelation
Chapter 36 - The Truth
Chapter 37 - In Transit
Chapter 38 - Mars
Chapter 39 - Evacuation
Chapter 40 - The Visitor
Chapter 41 - The Panther
Chapter 42 - On The Run
Chapter 43 - The Terminal
Chapter 44 - Anticipation
Chapter 45 - The Edge of The World
Chapter 46 - The Depot
Chapter 47 - Into The Dark
Chapter 48 - Dark and Cold
Chapter 49 - Beneath The Surface
Chapter 50 - The Confrontation
Chapter 51 - Into The Depth
Chapter 52 - Trapped
Chapter 53 - The Escape
Chapter 54 - Missing
Chapter 55 - Going In
Chapter 56 - Pursuit
Chapter 57 - Recovery
Chapter 58 - Alive
Chapter 59 - The End of the Road
Chapter 60 - Peace
The Descent (The Original SciFi Challenge Story)
Bonus Chapter: Quid Pro Quo
Thank You For Reading And What's Next?

Chapter 20 - Detention

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By TechieInAK

Denton paced back and forth in the room that had become their prison. The room, not unlike the office of Commander Connor, had a panoramic view of Mars, a desk and a table with a set of chairs. The walls were bare, and the shelves that generally would be occupied by books, awards, achievements and other trinkets were empty.

"You really should sit down," Tanner said from his position by the window. He hadn't moved since they had been locked in the room.

Denton stopped and spun around. "Sit down?" he spit out. "We're prisoners, and you want me to sit down?"

"What else can you do? Breaking out is not feasible. We have no way to continue our journey without the blessings of the Commander and Governor."

"I just can't believe she did this. Holding us against our will like this? It's not like we're terrorists or anything."

"The law is the law. I'm sure you of all people can understand that."

"Don't patronize me, Tanner. You know full well how I feel about those that break the law."

"What's the problem then?"

Denton walked over to a chair and sat down. He leaned back and rubbed his eyes and then leaned forward as he gazed out the window. "It's not so much that she's upholding the law, it's more about our mission. It's at risk of failure now. Was that the whole point in the first place? To sabotage our investigation? I mean, why invite us if they're only going to stop us before we get to our destination."

"Perhaps they intend on eliminating us. That would solve any potential embarrassing revelations they would have to explain. Let a rogue Commander do it, and they can wash their hands of two problems at once."

"You're crazy."

"It's just one of many plausible explanations."

"I'd prefer to hear one that's less terminal."

"Of course. I have 5,349 potential reasons and possible outcomes for the Commander's actions and our current predicament. Should I start with the first one?"

"Should you start...Oh, forget it."

"That I can't, as you well know, but I will refrain from discussing the matter further. Besides, I need to save my power. My reserves are running low."

"Wait, what? You're running on batteries?"

"For all intents and purposes, yes."

"Why are you running out of power then? We've barely been on this piece of junk for a couple of hours."

"The intent was never for me to use this bodily form. As a result, with little preparation, whatever charge remained since its last use had to suffice. At this point, it may not."

Denton stood up and walked over to Tanner. "What happens if your power runs out?"

Tanner looked at Denton. "I will automatically shut down before such time to ensure that all data remains intact until I can be docked with my cores. Unfortunately, I will then be unusable until I am reconnected to a power source."

"How long?"

"23 minutes and 47 seconds."

"23...what?"

"23 minutes and 43 seconds."

"I heard you the first time," Denton said and sighed."We have to find a way to get out of here."

"The situation is less than ideal, that is correct."

Denton walked over to the empty desk. "Can't you connect to the terminal network from the desk? You know, unlock the doors or something?" he said as he looked for a connection for Tanner to connect to.

"There are, unfortunately, not physical connections," Tanner said.

"How could you possibly know that? You've been standing over there looking out the window the whole time we've been locked in here."

"My stationary pose does not limit my ability to use my other sensors. I have detected numerous wireless networks propagating throughout this office, as well as the Commander's office. It stands to reason that it is more likely that communications would take place using these protocols."

"There are wireless networks in here?" Denton said and looked around involuntarily. "Why didn't you say so? Can you access them, hack them?"

"Perhaps, although with my drastically reduced computing power, it would take longer than my remaining power reserves will allow."

"You're kidding! So we're stuck here because you're running on fumes."

Suddenly, a loud explosion was heard in the distance. The lights flickered, and Denton felt a slight vibration under his feet.

"What was that?"

"Some kind of explosion," Tanner said, matter-of-factly.

"Yes, I can tell that. What I meant...ugh, never mind." Denton said and sighed. He walked over to the door and raised his fist to start banging on the door when it suddenly slid open.

"What the?" he exclaimed and took a few steps back.

The guards that had been stationed outside the door stepped inside, weapons drawn and motioned for Denton and Tanner. "Sir, please follow us."

"Where are we going?"

"Safety. There has been a hull breach. This section of the station has been compromised and needs to be evacuated immediately. Right, this way. We have very little time."

Denton nodded to Tanner, and they left their prison only hours after they had been put in there. The hallway outside of their makeshift cell was dark, lit just by red emergency lighting. Orange flashing lights mounted to the ceiling every fifty feet lit up the surroundings every few seconds.

The guards started running as they motioned for Denton and Tanner to follow. It didn't take long for Denton to lose track of their whereabouts as they followed the guards through dimly lit corridors and passageways.

"I sure hope we don't get separated from these guys," Denton whispered to Tanner as they paused momentarily for the guards to open a stuck door.

"I have memorized the path we have taken, and I can easily backtrack if needed. Of course, I'm not sure why we would want to, considering the status of the station. Although I can certainly survive without oxygen, your chances are not as good."

Denton glared at Tanner before they were interrupted by a shout from the guard as the door swung open. Moments later, they found themselves in a conference room without windows. An oval conference table occupied the center of the room and half a dozen chairs were situated around the table. A single light lit up the middle of the empty table and revealed the shadow of a uniformed man on the other side of the table, flanked by soldiers on both sides behind him. When he saw them enter the room, he got to his feet and came around the table. This time, Denton expected the outstretched hand and met the man's greeting with a nod.

"Gentlemen, I'm Admiral Hozera. I apologize for all the cloak and dagger, but it was the only way to get you out of there."

Denton furrowed his eyebrows and tilted his head. "I'm sorry, Admiral, I'm not sure I understand. Cloak and dagger?"

"It means..." Tanner started.

"I know what it means," Denton interrupted.

"There's little time, so I'll explain while we walk," the admiral said as he signaled for his men to take the lead. "You have arrived in the Sol system at an unfortunate time," he continued. "There's quite a bit of, well, shall we say political upheaval at the moment. The governor of Mars has publicly declared his displeasure with how the home office on Earth is treating the citizens of Mars. He's argued that they barely receive the support they need from Earth. There have even been grumblings about a cessation from the Sol Planetary Alliance."

"That sounds problematic," Denton said hesitantly, unsure yet of where the allegiance of the Admiral lay.

"It is, and very frustrating when you're trying to conduct any official business. The governor has, unofficially, started to interfere with Terran affairs, sometimes at great embarrassment to Earth. You," he said and pointed towards Denton and Tanner, "Are just the latest example."

"So where do you fit into this?" Denton asked as he ducked through another door, just behind the Admiral.

"I've been sent here to try to minimize the damage. My position as an Admiral means the governor won't touch me. He knows that I can withdraw the defensive forces of Sol at any time, leaving Mars vulnerable to external threats. So he throws as many wrenches into the business of Earth as he can and then sits back and laughs while I clean up the mess. Anyway, we were fortunate that we were alerted to your arrival and your predicament before the governor did anything else stupid. He's never interfered with intergalactic business before, but it obviously wouldn't be beneath him to do so."

"I'm not sure I'm following," Denton said.

"He's here to save us," Tanner said.

The admiral stopped momentarily and grinned as he nodded. "He's right, you know," he said as he pointed at Tanner. "I'm sorry, I didn't catch your name?"

"Tanner, sir."

"Tanner. A pleasure."

"Forgive me, Admiral, if I may," Tanner continued, "My power reserves are running dangerously low."

"Of course, of course. We're almost there."

"Almost where?" Denton asked.

"The shuttle that will take you to Earth. As I was saying, we got a tip about your unfortunate circumstance and decided that it would be best to extract you immediately before the governor decided to put his foot in his mouth again."

"So he doesn't know?"

"About this? No, he likely has no idea. He wouldn't be happy if he knew though, I can tell you that. Ah, here we are."

They stopped in front of a closed door and waited while one of the guards entered a code into a keypad, followed by an iris scan and instant DNA-profile query. Denton felt a strange sense of relief when the red light turned to green. The door slid open, and the soldiers led the way through the door. The admiral motioned for them to walk through and as soon as they came through the door, it closed behind them. Denton held up his arm in front of his eyes and squinted as he allowed his eyes a few seconds to adjust from the dim lighting of the disabled space station wing to the bright fluorescent light in the room they just entered.

"Mr. Staxx, we meet again," a familiar voice said somewhere in front of Denton. He lowered his arm and gasped as he took an involuntary step backward. There was no mistaking the red hair and the uniform he had seen just hours ago.

"Co-Co-Commander Connor?" he stammered.

Leah locked her eyes with his and flashed a mischievous smile. "Good to see you again," she said.

~~~

Commander Connor, who was heading to see the Governor and tossed Tanner and Denton in "jail" suddenly appears again. Is it a trap? What do you think? Will they ever make it to Earth?

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