Another Chance

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School Tour Day






Jisoo : edi nokkiyyyee Jin Ettan i mean Jin Sir😍😍😍😍

Won young : how handsome  😍

Jisoo : ni adhikam nokkandaa booked aanu😏

Won young : adh ni pranjal madhiyooo😏

Jisoo : aa madhi😏😏

















Won Young : haii Hyunjin 😍 Hyunjinnnnn~~~ ivde oru seat indu.

Hyunjin : no thanks

Won young : 😐

Jimin : Ee Tae ith evideyyaaa?? Vilichittum edukunnilalooo.

Hyunjin : onnuuudey vilich nokku bus ipoo edukkumm.

Jimin : haaa try cheyuuvaa.

Rose : Tae vannileee😮😮😮

Jimin : illa, vilichittum edukunnilla Avan

Rose : Edi kalli poocheeee😶😶

Jimin : endhaa endhaa???

Rose : Yoonji yum vannilla innala vilich paranjuuu fever annu ennu.

Jimin : adh sheri-- aa wait tae vilikunnundd.

Hyunjin : Speaker iddd.

Tae : jimineaaa njan varunilla da innu.

Jimin : oo manasilayi pani ayyirikumm alleee.

Tae : Adhee daaa engne manasilayyiii.

Jimin : adh angane alle varu, ne rest edukk da

Tae : athe daa kidaakuvvaa🤧 bynkere sheenam.

Jimin : haa sheenam oke kannum

Tae : Sheri enna nigal trip enjoy cheyyy njan onnum rest edukkatteee.

Jimin : Haaa daa enjoy.

Rose : ayyoo ente Yoonji.

Jimin : ehh pedikkaan ayyit onnumilla Avan oru pottan cherukkanaaa.

Rose : adhond tanne, enik Yoonjineya pedi

Hyunjin : nammude cherukkane aval 🫢

Rose : eyy poda angane onnum illa

Jimin : Vaa nammuku pokamm avar enjoy cheyattee.

Woo : edaa innala kandaa aa sundari evidaayaa daa njan pinne avale kandilla

Gyu : edaa pottan adh 12 C ilea Leeknow annu Avrdey classil innala endho function indayirunnu adhinte fancy dress vallom ayyirikmm.

Woo : ehhh💔💔💔

Gyu : ingne yum indoo pottanmarr.

Woo : ennalum njan kure agrahichuu njn aval nammdey kuttikall🥹

Gyu : uvvah ith pinnee pudhiyadh onnum allaloo adh kond kzmpillaa vaa pokaam.

Woo : haa😞

Yeonjun : Daa Gyuu ezhich marr daa njanaa avidey bag vachee ennik vennam window seat.

Gyu : sowkrym illaaa😛 njan marullaa

Yeonjun : Gyu ni chumma enne deshyam pidippikalllee marr angottt.

Gyu : pattulla pattulla pattullaa.

Yeonjun : shsh ivanee kond

Woo : aiisssh ndh ith koch pillaaree polleaa ni ividey irrik.

Yeonjun : appo ni evidey irrikumm

Woo : Jessi Missnte aduth oru seat ind njan avidey irunnola😌

Gyu : ninak oru kaalathum penn kittuulla daa.

Woo :   Jessi Misseeee







Time skip.




[ Amusement park ]


Joon : Students ellarum orumich tanne nilkanam arum miss ayyi pokaaruth.

Students : Yes Sir.

Angne ellrum Avrdey trip oke enjoy cheyyunu






Inni coming back to Tae and Yoonji

Tae's mansion



Tae kurach dress and things okke pack cheydh ready ayyi ennit Yoonjik message ittu.







🐯 : mwolu njan ready ayyi, irangan pokuva ne bus stopil nikk.

                                      😺 : njan already bus stopil
                                               annu.





Tae roominnu purath irangi tazhe vannu.

Tae : Pappa njan iranguva

Pappa : Sheri mwone safe ayyit poyit vaa endhelum indel call me immediately. Dha ee card vecho (credit card koduthu)

Tae : Sure Pappa, Mamma evdeya Pappa?

Pappa : Yoga hallil kaanum chennu nokku Tae.

Tae Mammene kand parayan poyi.

Tae : Mamma

Mamma : mwonu vaa ne irangiyo ?

Tae : adhe Amme njan iranguva.

Mamma : enjoy your trip mwonu,bye (they hugged)

Tae : bye Mamma

Angane Tae yatra paranj veetinnu irangi.

Time skip









Tae Yoonji nikkunna bus stopil vannu.

Tae : nammuk povam 😁

Angane Taeym Yoonjiyum train kerii naadu vittu 🚆.......

Time skip


Trainum bus okke keri irangi avar oduvil ethiyath Munnar ☘️🌲🍃

Yoonji : Tae nammal ith evdeya ?

Tae : nammal Munnar, nammude stay ethaan iniyum dooram indu.

Yoonji : ayyo nammal ee hills koodi engane pokum ?

Tae : bike ride akkiyalo ? 😁

Yoonji : bikeo ? Adhinu ninak licence indo ?

Tae : for your information, enik licence indu

Yoonji : oohh

Angane avar oru bike rent eduthu.

Tae bikeil kerii.

Tae : kerikko.

Yoonjim kerii.

Tae bike start cheydh payyee pokan tudangii.

Yoonji : Tae ni endha ingane melle ponath ? Kurach fast akku.

Tae : ehh ? Idh fast alle ?

Yoonji : Tae ne vandi side akku.

Tae bike side akki, Yoonji irangii.

Yoonji : ini njan odikkam.

Tae : adhinu ninak licence illallo.

Yoonji : enik odikkan ariyaam.

Tae : ennalum Yoonji-

Yoonji : onnum parayanda, njan odikkum.

Tae maari koduthu, Yoonji frontil irunnu, bike odikkan tudangii.

Tae : pedi ayal parayane-- hammmeeeeeeee

Pro rider Yoonji speedil pokan tudangii, Tae shocked, Avan avale muruke pidich irunnu.

Tae : Yoonji melle poo Yoonjiiiiiiiiiii 😱😱😱

Yoonji : idh alle oru thrilllllll 🔥🔥🔥🔥😼

Angane Yoonjide adventurous ridenu oduvil avar stay cheyyan ulla resort ethii.

Time night 9pm
Yoonji kurach nervous ayyirunnu, ariyatha place okke ayond.
Yoonji :  ivde anno nammal stay cheyyunath ?

Tae : adhe, pedikanda idh Jiminte Pappade resort annu, feel comfortable.

Adh kettappo Yoonji relax ayyi.

Yoonji : hmmm 😊 ini nammal endha cheyyan pone ?

Tae : ini nammal urangeet ravile enitt site seeing, okay alle ?

Yoonji : okay

Rendu perum roomil check-in cheydhu keri. Tae oru room ayirunnu book cheydhe.

Yoonji : adh endha oru room ? Appo njan evide kidakkum ?

Tae : nammal orumich kidakkum oru roomil oru bedil 🥰

Yoonji stunned 😳

Yoonji : ehh ?

Tae : ayyo ente Yoonji, ippo oranathinu kodukenda cashe entel ullu.

Yoonji : oo-oh okay.

Avar dinner okke kazhich kidakkan ayyi.

Tae : Yoonji bedil kidanno

Yoonji : appo ne evde kidakkum ?

Tae : njan Yoonjide aduth 😁🥰

Yoonji : 😳 dhe Tae, avashyam illatha chindha onnum venda ketto, ad onnum sheriyavilla 😑

Tae : ente Ammoo njan verdhe parnjeya njan ee couchil kidanolam, good night.

Yoonji : good night

Tae couchil kidannu urangi.
Yoonjik anel urakkam varunilla, aval enitt Avante aduth poyi couchite tazhe Avane face cheydh irunnu.

Aval Avante bhangi aswathich irikkunnu.


Yoonji : enik Yuvine orma varunnu 🥺 love you Tae, i promise ee pravashyam njan strong ayyit nikkum, inni ninne nashtapeduthan pattilla Tae 🥺 ini regret cheyyan njan tayyar alla.

Ennum paranj aval Avante forehead kiss cheydhu.
Appo pettannu Tae enittu, odane Yoonji avdennu enitt pokan tudngi, Tae vegam enitt avalde kayyil pidichu.

Tae : evda pova ?

Yoonji : adh pnne njan

Tae : ivde vannu irikk

Yoonji aduth poyi irunnu.

Tae : enik ivde kidanit urakkam sheriyavunilla.

Yoonji : I am sorry Tae, ne bedil kidakk njan ivde couchil kidakkam.

Tae ennit nere poyi bedil kidannu.
Yoonji couchilum.

Tae : Yoonjii ?

Yoonji : endha ?

Tae : can you please come here 🥺

Yoonji : .......

Tae : please 🥺

Yoonji ennit bedil poyi

Tae : 😍

Yoonji Avane hug cheydhu.

Tae : 😍🥰🥰🥰

He hugged her.

Tae avalk sheet moodi koduthu ennit kissed her head.

Tae : Yoonji

Aval Avane nokki.

Tae : I love you.

Yoonji pettannu kissed his lips.
Tae further kiss cheyyan poyappo Yoonji refused.

Yoonji : Tae venda nammal teenagers annu.

Tae : okay 😐



Next morning

Tae and Yoonji site seeing okke poyi food okke kazhich enjoy cheythu. Ennit avaru thirich veetil vannu.





At Tae's Mansion

PA : Madam, ithaa paranja photos.

Tae's Mom : Tableil vachitt pokoluuu.

Tae's Mom photos oke eduth nokkunnu.

[ Tae and Yoonji's Photos.]


Tae's Mom : ente mwone tanne veno 🤨

Tae's Dad : endha endhaa problem??

Tae's Mom : idh onnu nokki nokku, nammude mwon valarnnu poyi.

Tae's Dad : adh oke Avante parayathinteya ni tension avaathe.

Tae's Mom : njan aa penn kuttyudey veetil anneshichuu adh edho middle class family annu nammdey statusinu cherilllaa.

Tae's Dad : idh onnum serious ayirikilla, adh okke ee prayam kazhiyumbo taane maarikolum.

Tae's Mom : njan endh ayyalum aa kuttiye kand samsarikaan pokuvva, idh okke mulayile nulli kalyanam.

Tae's Dad : Adh vennoo koch piller alle??

Tae's Mom : adh venam.




Time skip.

Next Morning.

Yoonji dey veedinu munne car il Tae's Amma waiting.

Yoonji veetil ninnu irangi vannuuu. Taedey Amma horn adichuu, Yoonji sredhikkathee nadakkunnuuu. Vendumm avar Horn adichhuu. Yoonji thirinj nokki.

Yoonji : 😳😳😳😳😳 ith Taedey Amma allee 😳😳😳😳

Yoonji pettanu past onnu orthu......


[ Past il Yoonji yum Tae yum Break up akkan Karanam Tae dey Mom ayyirunnuuu. Tae deyum Yoonji dey istam arinjaa Tae dey Amma Yoonji ye chennuu beekshanni peduthi brainwash cheydh avare breaku akki but appol nammdey Yoonji Yuvi kuttane Pregnant ayyirunnu.
Tae ku ee karayam ariyillayirunuuu. Pettanu oru divasam Yoonji arum ariyathe Naadu vittuuu.
Tae Yoonjikuu ayyi waitingum ayyirunnu.
Angne oru divasam annu Tae dey Amma Yoonji marichu ennu kallam Tae oduu paranje. ]

Yoonji : Ivar endhaayalumm nammale break akkan ayyirikm vannirikunnee.

Yoonji car inte adutheak chennuu.

Tae's Mom : Yoonji alle??

Yoonji : Adhe

Tae's Mom : enik onnu samsarikkanam.

Oru cafe poyi.

Yoonji : [  ( in Mind : ipoozhekilm strong ayyit nilkanam pazhe pole Taeine vittukodukkkan padillaaaa🥹🥹) ]

Yoonji : endha samsarikkan ullath ?

Tae's Mom : I am Kim Taniya, njan Taehyungnte Amma annu, karyangal ellam enik ariyam, and I don't like this so you should cut ties, and break up with him.

Yoonji : sorry Aunty njanum Tae um kurach months ayyit istathillaa.

Tae's Mom : avanum ayyit ellam nirthi pokunnadh ayyirikm ninnaku nalladh or else I will have to try other ways.

Yoonji : enik Taehyungne orupad ishtanu Aunty please 🥺

Tae's Mom : who do you think you are, nalla veetile chekkanmare kannum kayyum kanich valach edukan analle ninne okke veettinnu paranj ayakunath 😠

Yoonji : PLEASE ! 😣 (Mind : Yoonji don't give up, enik ariyam Ivar ingane okke samsarikkum but this is my second time I can't lose him again.)

Tae's Mom : cash annu aim engil, I will give you the double but leave my Son.

Yoonji : enik cash onnum venda, ennodu Tae paranjal i will definitely leave him. And Aunty ini enne kaanan vannal i will call the child line and inform you.

Tae's Mom : what 😨

Ennum pranj Yoonji (Hair flip) avdenn poyiii.

Time skip




At Tae's  Mansion


Tae irangi tazhe vannu. School il pokan ayyit

Tae's Mom :  engotta ?

Tae : school il

Tae's Mom : Ni inni schoolil pokanda, veetil irunnu padicha madhi.

Ennu paranj avane vallich  room ittt lock akki..

Tae : Mamma endhaa Mamma  kannikunnee, turakkk door endhaa preshnam karayam parayyy ammeee.

Tae's Mom : nirthikoo ninte school il pokum trip pokumm oke njan ith onnum ariyunilla ennu anno ninte vijaram

Tae : endhaaa Mamma parayunneee

Tae's Mom : araaadaa  Yoonji avalk evidnna ithra Jada ennode ethirth samsarikann aval araa

Tae : Yoonji 😳---

Tae's Dad : Endha ni kannikunneee endhina avne lock cheydhee.

Tae's Mom : Avan avidey kidakatteee

Tae : Mamma enik Yoonjine bhayankara ishttaa avale onnum cheyyaruth, door turakkk ennik avale kannanam

Tae's Mom : ohhoo ninak aaa Yoonji annu alle valludh samadhikillaa daa njan.

Tae : Mamaa turakkkkkk Mammaaaaaaa

Tae deshyathil door il oke itt adich aga karanj vilich avide kidannu.

Time skip.







Days Passed....



At School.

Jk : edh Patti Yoonji endhaa ni ingne vishamichu irrikunnee.

Yoonji : ( Started crying ) Tae 🥹🥹 Tae---

Jk : Avanu endhaa??? Endha Yoonji??

Yoonji : Avanu kure days ayyit class il um varunilla vilichitum edukkuunillaa Avanu endhoo pattii🥺🥺 last ayyit Avante ammma ennode vannu samsarichirunnu, ennik pedi avunnuu🥺🥺

Jk : ni pedikathe nammuku endhelm vazhi indakam.

Jimin : Yoonji.....

Yoonji : Jimin ni enkilm parayyy evidaa ente Tae🥺

Jimin : Yoonji avane veetil lock cheydh ittekkuvaaa

Yoonji : ehh😧😧

Jimin : pedikan ayyit onnumillaa nigaldey karayam arinjitta kurch days kzinjaa viduuvaayiirikmm avane.

Yoonji : Ennik avane kannanm Jimineeaa🥺🥺

Jimin : adh oke ippo engneyaaa

Yoonji : engnee enilkmmm please🥺

Jimin : nokattee njan.

























AC - 10 End

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