Female Naruto: The Eye of the...

By DazzlingNinja

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Naruko Uzumaki, secretly and unknowingly the daughter of the Fourth Hokage: Namikaze Minato and Kushina Uzuma... More

Part 1: The Mysterious Swordwomen Of the Mist
Part 2: Kagaya Ubuyashiki
Part 3: The Hashira/Swordmen of The Land of Waves
Part 4: The Hidden Sand
Part 5: Kanae Death
Part 6: The Creation of the Eye of Breathing Style
Part 7: Jiraiya the Legendary Shannin of The Toad Sage
Part 8: The Explosion of Sacrifice
Part 10:"Welcome To The Hidden of The Leaves"
Part 11: The Academy
Part 12: "Final Round. Sasuke vs Amane."
Part 13: "Introduction of Konohamaru! Amane apprentice."
Part 1/14 Kakashi Hatake
Part 2/14: "Bell Test. Team 7 established"
Fun facts and love interest
Part 15: Tazuna
Part 16: "The Land of Waves"
Part 17: "Zabuza battle entry! And the Sharingan."
"The life of Iguro Obanai aka Iguro Uchiha"
Part 18: "The Fading Whispers of The Flame Hashira Spirit."
Part 19: "The Tracker Ninja."
Part 20: "Tazuna Family."
Part 21: "Sisters Memorial"
Part 22: "The story behind the picture."
Changes recommendations
Part 23: "The fox's spirit of the mist."
Part 24: "Memory of the Past, transform into strength and Bravery."
Part 25: "Awoken Clouds of Thunderclap."
Part 26: "Crystal Mirrors vs Thunder."
Part 27: "purpose and dreams."
Part 28: "The Roaring Light of Hope."
Part 29: "The Sand Village Genin."
Part 30: "The Chunin Exams."
Part 31: "The Nine Rookies."
Part 32: "Start of the Chunin and Writing Exams."
Part 33: "Anko Mitarashi, Second Phase Proctor."
Part 34: "Twam 7 Interview. Special thanks for 8K reader."
Part 25: "The Second Test of The Chunin Exams."
Part 26: " Second Test Begins...With Anger?"

Part 9: A New goal

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By DazzlingNinja

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We last left off when it shows how the Hashira estate was exploded.

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Amane and Jiraiya POV:

Jiraiya was falling behind due the increase of chakra and breathing Amane is using to run quicker and faster.

"Shit, I'm falling behind!" Thought Jiraiya as he increases his speed.

There then came a stop meaning that she knew, she was too late.

Jiraiya stood there behind her looking at her feeling guilty.

Three days as passed after the explosion, and after making graves for them even though their bodies were burnt along with the fire.

Amane then explore the remaining parts of the mansion.

Author notes:
I make a few changes.
Kagaya didn't gave her the box with the ring inside.

Amane then came across something that has caught her eyes. Then she picked it up and scrap off the ashes and eyes widen.

She then carried the object which seemed to be a ring close to her chest.

"Kagaya-San." Thought Amane.

Jiraiya then walk up towards from behind.

"You knew, this was gonna happen, right?" Ask Amane.

Jiraiya then looked at her.

"Correct I knew this was gonna happen but don't know when. Are you gonna seek revenge on Gato?"
Ask Jiraiya.

Amane then hesitate.

"No, not right now." Answered Amane.

Jiraiya then look at her in confusion.

Yes. I showed hatred to Gato but, he once said a human heart can't bloom when your only goal in life, is seeking revenge. So I'll wait in the meantime my current goal is to be Hokage.

Jiraiya then lift an eyebrow 🤨.

Amane then stand while holding a smiling expression while holding the ring.

"A Hokage, that protect the village no matter the cause." Said Amane.

Jiraiya then smirk.

"She reminds me of Minato." Thought Jiraiya.

"I'll settle in and pack my things in Tazuna place, if you don't know where the place is ask the people around they'll know." Said Amane as she body flicker.

"She knows body flicker? She's really is a prodigy if she is." Thought Jiraiya as he also body flicker.

As she knocked on Tazuna door.

A woman with dark blue hair then opens it.

"How you feeling Amane?" Ask the women.

"I'm feeling fine Tsunami-san. Could I settle here for a while and pack my things to move to the Hidden in the Leaves?" Ask Amane.

"She's moving to her hometown?" Thought Tsunami before she could reply.

"Sure you can. You know, Kiyu, Naho, and Sumi, we're worried about your mental and physical health." Said Tsunami concerning for Amane.

"I'm fine. Where are they now?" Ask Amane.

"They're asleep, due to the stress or news of the Insect Hashira, Aoi, and Kanao death." Answered Tsunami.

"I see. Is Tazuna still building the bridge?" Ask Amane.

Tsunami then nodded.
"Grandpa is half way from finishing the bridge." Answered Tsunami.

"I see. I'll rest for now." Said Amane emotionless.

Amane then close the door to her room.

Tsunami just stood there with a worried expression, then looked at a picture next to there family picture where you see Amane, Kagaya, Sumi, Naho, Kiyo, the butterfly sisters, and the rest of the Hashiras's and Kamaboko squad, along with Tsunami, and her son along with her grandfather in the picture.

Tsunami then sigh.

At night we see Amane dyeing her hair color, to the color of white and changing her pink ninja clothing to the Hashira estate uniform of a Hashira.

*Art credit belong to whoever make this*

/this is what she now look like. Imagine she has Amane eye color and her pupil. She also has the Haori that is in the picture that was a gift from Kagaya.

/This is what her Katana looked like but with the color of silver and mix of blue and red, due to the nine tails and her own chakra energy. Her Katana also changes colors, depending on what breathing style she uses, since she could use any breathing styles that the Hashira and the Kamaboko squad can use./

The next day.

Before Sumi, Naho, Kiyo, and tsunami son woke up. We see Amane about to exit out of the door when Tsunami comes in with the last lunch of bento.

"Amane-Sama, please take this last bento. You journey will be long, you need something to eat along the way." Said Tsunami.

Amane and shook her head.
"Your family need it more than I do." Said Amane.

"But."

"No buts. I don't know when I'll return to take down Gato, but pls give every food you own to your family including Sumi, Naho, and Kiyu. They need it, and beside I know how to hunt for edible food." Said Amane while smiling.

Tsunami then nodded and look at Amane as she leaves.

Amane then sees Jiraiya waiting for her and then walks towards him until.

Tsunami then yelled.

"Thank you for everything you've done for this small  village Amane-Sama, despite how poor and lowly we are, I wish the best of luck for you!!!" Yelled Tsunami.

Amane then wave back while walking towards Jiraiya then body flicker to the exit gate of the Land of Waves.

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This will be it for today
Hope you enjoy the story!

-Fireflies321_9

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