Tashn-e- Yaariyan

By Earth2222

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When someone asks you what the most precious thing in your life is, almost 90% of people would answer, "Famil... More

character sketch
character sketch 2
character sketch 3
character sketch 4
ch2: clash of titans
ch 3: Neyonika's arrival
ch4 space first day
ch 5
ch 6
authors note
RECURING CHARACTERS

ch 1 Sea Queen

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By Earth2222

This parts focuses on different facets of life ...there r several characters...the scene keeps shifting. The crux of the story is to unite all the characters to a common location or society called Sea Queen Apartments.

Sea Queen Apartments

The apartment for elites in Mumbai..
ppl frm all facets of life staying Mumbai whether it be Doctors, Engineers , Actors, Advocates, CA etc basically any well to do family had a dream of having a house here

Each house in this apartment is a luxury bunglow in its own...
Having 4 bedrooms 2 guestrooms and 2 balconies....each floor consisting of only 2 flats keeping the spacial factor and privacy into consideration

And the society has common amenities such as playgrounds, swimming pools, gyms, in built supermarket, Gazibos and what not ....
The society Consists of 3 blocks (or wings/buildings)

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Let's see what's happening in Block 2 and Block 1 of these apartments

We could see a boy and a girl talking to each other....as their balconies were opposite to each other's

Yuvi: oye jhalli Sun na

( he was pleading her to listen to him since past 2hrs)

Twinkle: Kya hai Yuvi...mujhe Na tujhse koi baat nahi karni. Jab baat karne ko bolo toh tu muh main dahi jama ke baith jata hai

Yuvi: haa toh main kya karu...tere papa ko dekha hai Mugambo se kam nahi lagte woh. Mujhe kaccha chabane ko daudte hai.

Twinkle: haa toh rehjana mere Just Bestfriend banke.

Yuvi: main baat karta hu na Sahi time toh aane de.

Twinkle: Aur kab aayega tera  sahi wakt jab tu meri shaadi main channa mereya gayega.

Yuvi: aarey tension mat le jhalli Apna time bhi aayega.

Twinkle just stomped her foot and left her balcony annoyed with the lack of seriousness frm Yuvis side.

So these were the Childhood sweethearts or love birds of our Sea Queen society.

While Twinkle is in a hurry to settle down (to atleast get engaged) fearing her parents would deny to get her married to Yuvi keeping in consideration the Business rivalry of Raman and Raj.
While Yuvi was in no hurry to settle down so soon as according to him this was the time to focus on their careers and then think abt something else....basically he did not want to get into any commitment yet.

So let's see whether their love really ends up in them getting married or it is merely an infatuation which would fade away with time.

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Block 3
Khan recidence

RK:( shouting) Biwi...Biwi.

Madhu:(irritated) kya hai RK ghar hi pe hu kisi reegistaan( desert) main nahi ki tumhari awaz nahi sunegi.

RK: Biwi ...aawaz neeche bhulo mat ki tum Rishab Khan se baat kar Rahi ho

Madhu:(mimicking) Rishab Khan...RK Sadi ka sabse bada superstar.

Hazar baar sun chuki hu...aur kis baat ka ghamand hai tumhe.....kon apne wife ko aise Biwi Biwi karke ucchi awaz main bulata hai haa.

RK(smirks): Main bulata hu....Aur haa isse pehle ki tum phir jhagra shuru kardo main yeh puchne ke liye bulaya tha....ki kal Ishana ka first day hai clg main ....toh uskeliye joh gift mangaya tha woh yaad hai na.

Madhu: haa main tum jaise nahi hu jo apne baccho ka important din bhool jaye...aur main bewajha tumse jhagra nahi karti hu...tumhare saath mere bacche nahi hote na toh kabka tumhe chor ke chali gayi hoti.

RK: haa toh theek hai abhi chali jaao roka kisne hai.....abb toh badi actor bann gayi ho ...paiso ka dhos dhikhati ho.

Before Madhu could retaliate Ishaana came running towards RK.... And hugged him then she hugged her Mom.

Ishana: I'm so excited Mom..Bhai ka call aaya woh kal wapas aarahe hai.

Madhu(teary): Sacchi mera Kabir wapas aaraha hai.

Isha: haa and now he ll study in the same college as me so cool ri8.

RK:(ruffled Isha's hair) haa princess abb ...tumhare Bhai ko kahi jaane nahi denge he ll stay with u only.

Madhu:(extracting a small gift wrap from her purse) Yeh lo this is a gift from me and ur Dad for ur first day of clg

Isha(pouting ): itna chota gift...chalo koi nahi..gift ka size nahi Dene wale ki feelings matter karti hai right.

RK: yah, now chalo chalo jaldi se kholo box ko

Isha opened a box and she was surprised to find a key.

Isha(confused): Key, aaplog mujhe clg jaane ki khusi main naaya ghar de rahe ho....

Madhu: areey nahi....(befor she could continue)

Isha: Ohh accha, now I get it travelling aasan hojaye toh aapne mere liye clg ke bagal wala flat hi kharid liya.

RK: Arrey nahi meri express train ......

Madhu: teri favourite Royal Enfield Bike Buddhu itne din se hmare peeche padi thi.....abb khush hoja ...now u can ride it to ur clg.
haa par dhyaan se no over speeding....

Isha: Aww thank u..thank u ..thank u so muuuch.

And she left from there in Wind Speed that could even put a vampire to shame...such was her excitement to try her new Dream bike.

RK: kitni khush hogayi nahi.

Madhu: Kash Kabir bhi itna khush hopata.

RK: atleast woh hamare paas toh aayega...dheere dheere usse mana lenge.
Bas ab woh kal Ghar aajaye.

Madhu: Hamne usse boarding Schl bhej ke bahot galat kiya.

RK(agitated): uss wakt hamare paas aur koi chara bhi toh nahi tha.

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Mumbai High School

A boy is seen packing his bag ...it was his last day in boarding school as the 12th std results had been out now marking an end to their pre University lyf.

Just as he was done with the packing he recieved a video call...he excitedly picked the phone up.

Dhruv: Mamma , Papa next week se mera new clg start ho raha hai... aur abb toh boarding ka term bhi khatam hogaya toh main ek week ke liye aajau kya Mangalore aaplogo ke saath rehne.

Manav(sternly): Nahi koi zaroorat nahi hai.

Dhruv:(eyes filled up) Kyu Baba aab toh chutti bhi hai na...mujhe bahot yaad aarahi hai aapki...aab nahi raha jata door phir clg shuru hojayega toh hostel main rehna padega... Aayi bolo na kuch.

Archana(glaring at Manav): Rula diya na mere bacche ko bola tha mat karo mazak......
(Hitting him with a rolled newspaper)

Manav: (to archana)Accha accha sorry....(to Dhruv)aur Beta kya beta choti choti bato pe rodeta hai ...pitwadiya na papa ko...
Abb aasu poach apne.

Dhruv wiped his tears.

Manav: toh baccha main yeh kehraha tha ki wapas Mangalore aane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...aab ham Mumbai main hi rahenge.

Dekh main tujhe ek location bhejta hu sath main address bhi kal dophara tak pohchjana

Dhruv: (excited)Matlab abb hamne Mumbai main ghar leliya hai...but phir Mangalore wala Ghar?

Archana: bech diya baccha....abse ham yahi rahenge Mumbai main...abb bahut dur reh liya.
Aur maine tujhe online kuch paise bheje hai ...tu Jaa apne friends ke sath enjoy kar

Dhruv:(lost sm where) Friends

Archana: Haa Baba friends apne dosto ke sath maze karna...kaha khogaya tu...chal ab main rakhti hu sidha naye Ghar main milenge.

Manav: Bye baccha take care.

And Dhruv disconnected the phone.
Manav: Mumbai Sapno ka seher........yaha hamare sapne bhi pure honge na Archana...sab theek hogana.

Archana: haa Manav sab theek hoga...
Apne itni mehnat se business khada kiya hai....kaha aapne mechnic se start kiya tha aur abb aap iss mukam tak pahuche hai ki Mumbai main apna ek Automobile showroom hai
Bappa ki kripa rahi toh aage bhi sab accha hoga.

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Delhi

A boy was sleeping soundly in his room.

While his Mother came searching for him.

Avantika: Lo, main pure Ghar main isse dhund rahe thi aur yeh Brush karke wapas apne kamre main sogaya.
Kya karu main iss ladke ka ...kon kahega ke yeh 24 saal ka hogaya.

Tej: ek eklauta baccha hai na ...toh tumne isse sar chara rakha hai.

Avantika: (Caressing the boys hair) Haa, jaise isse bigadne main aapka toh koi haath hi nahi hai na....main isse datti ho toh kon bachane aata hai....ki chota hai Avi rehne do sekh jayega.

Tej:(smiling sheepishly) Arrey aab main itna bhi kuch khaas nahi.

Avantika: Taareef nahi kar rahi thi main tumhari.
Abb uthao apne laad sahab ko.

Tej: Ruko main abhi uthata hu.

And Tej switched on the Alarm clock and shook Kunj violently.

Tej: Kunj uth jaldi uth....school ka time hogaya already 8 baj rahe hai.

Kunj woke up with a start and threw his blanket
Kunj(panicking): kya Schl ka time hogaya....pehle kyu nahi bataya ...aaj toh  sir mujhe clss ke ander nahi aane denge...Mamma mera ID card aur Tie kaha hai (while searching for them).

While Avi and Tej burst out laughing

Avi:(laughing) Mera Buddhu baccha....bhul gaya abb tu school main nahi raha ...next year clg se bhi graduate hojayega

Tej: (laughing) Maine bola tha Avi.....this always works with him...yeh Neend main abhi bhi school hi jata hai.

While Kunj remaining sleep faded away seeing his parents laughing their hearts out seeing Kunjs antics.

Kunj:(pouted) kya yaar papa hamesha Mera mazak banate ho.

Tej:(pulled his cheeks) kya karu tu soone main kumbh Karan ko jo competition deta hai.

Avi(pulling his ears): aur tu brush karke wapas sogaya....bola tha na Aaj hamari shifting main madat karni hai tujhe.

Kunj: woh mujhe neend aarahi thi raat ko der se soya na toh...

Avi:(raising an eyebrow) Aur kya kar raha tha der tak jaag kar?

Kunj:(unsure) Padhayi?

Tej:(whacked him) kuch aisa toh bol jispar tu khud bhi yakeen karskae......
Maine Khud dekha tha Raat ko tujhe video games khelte hue.

Kunj: (sheepishly)Aisa bhi toh ho sakta hai aap sapna dekh rahe ho..

Tej: Sapna ke bacche ruk tu( and he ran to chase after him).

Kunj:(teased while running) Main Sapna ka nahi Avantika ka baccha hu...

Avi: Jab tumdono ka yeh Tom n Jerry session khatamhojaye toh yaad se apni packing karlena...Shaam ko hi ham ghar ki chaabi landlord ko dedenge. Finally Rented ghar se chtkara pakar v ll hv our own house in Mumbai that too at Sea Queen.

Kunj: Par Mom yeh Delhi ki galiyan bahot yaad ayengi.

Tej: Aur Gaaliyan bhi

Avi:(glared) Tej

Tej:(fumbled)Arrey mera matlab tha...kitna accha hai na Kunj Mumbai se apni Masters ke degree finish karega and v ll be finally settled there.
Chal chal Kunj Aaj jaldi ready hoja...raat ki flight miss na hojaye
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D'Costa Residence
See Queen Block 3

Juhi: Shashank itni Raat hogayi iss ladke ka koi pata thikana nahi hai.

Shashank:(tensed) Uske dosto ko phone karke puche kya.

Just then Harshad came with a carefree attitude reeking of Alcohol.

Juhi: Harshad beta tum kaha the ..aur yeh kya haal bana rakha hai...

Shashank: thodi see toh Careful Bano..atleast hame bata ke toh Jaya Karo ..pata nahi din din bhar kaha gayab rehte ho.

Harshad: Jaise Aap Bada bata ke jaate ho na .....mahine mahine jab aapdono hame bina bataye gayab hojate ho tab kuch nahi.

Shashank: tumne phirse pii rakhi hai.Log kya kahenge Ek Dr ka beta hoke u r addicted to Alcohol. Sanjeevni K rehabilitation main hamne kitno ki addictions churai hai...aur mera khud ka beta issi zeher ka shikar hai ...tumne hame kahi muh dhikhane layak nahi chora Harshad

Harshad: yehi toh aapki problem hai dad Samaj ka kalyaan karte karte aap apne baccho ko toh bhul hi Gaye hai...and u think I care a foot abt ur reputation?.

And he just Ignored them and went away.

Shashank:(helplessly) Juhi main kaise samjhau isko ki it's not abt my reputation it's abt his health.

Shashank And Juhi world's most reputed Dr the Head surgeon and CEO of Sanjeevni hospital respectively.
That was Harshad their  son

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Harshad: itni raat ko kaha jaa rahi hai.

Ragini: (sheepishly) Tehlne?

Harshad: pagal hogayi hai kya raat ke 12 bajrahe hai iss wakt kon tehlta hai

Ragini: Listen, jab walk karte hai tab time nahi dekhte. Aur time dekhke walk nahi karte. Kyuki koi agar dekte hai toh hamara figure dekhte aur main apna figure maintain karti hai.

Harshad checked her forehead for any sign of fever

Harshad: Saste nashe ke chaske lag gaye hai kya? Yeh sab Nautanki na Papa ke liye bacha ke rakh....v both r woven out of the same cloth ...mujhe toh tu bevakoof bana mat.

Ragini: (glaring) Saste nashe ki toh aap baat mat hi karo....yeh jo mehnge nashe aap karte ho na woh kab aapko mehnga padega pata bhi nahi chalega.

Harshad: Dekh mujhse zaban mat lada Bada hu tujhse.

Ragini: toh bado wali harkate bhi karna seekho...aaye bade mujhe sikhane Wale( with that she left outside without even informing where she was going at this hour of the night).
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Anjali and Vardhan were decorating their house with fairy lights

While Raman and Ishita had just returned home as they had went out on a family outing

As their house were on the same floor opposite to each other they were intruged seeing the Vardhana decorating their house so enthusiastically

Ishita: Anjali what a plesant surprise tum yaha ?...
And all these decorations is there something special.

Anjali: haa itne saalo baad hamari beti wapas aane wali hai toh bas ussi ka excitement hai.

Raman and Vardhan shook their hands

Vardhan: Kaise ho Raman

Raman: Bass theek hu yaar...how abt u

Varshan: abb kya batau yaar Hospital ke kharche sambhalte sambhalte hi adhi zindagi nikal gayi.

Raman: Oye sahi context main toh bol ...CFO sahab ...tu hospital ka finance officer hai agar yeh kisi ko na pata ho toh yahi sochega na ki tu hospital ke bills bhar bhar ke pareshan hai.

Ishita: parr itne saal tumhari beti kaha thi ...matlab aajtak mujhe bhi nahi pata tha aap logo ki beti bhi hai.

Anjali: ham log kaam main itne busy ho jate the ki uska khaayl hi nahi rakh pate the ... issiliye usse boarding school bhejna pada tha ....but now hamne soacha hai apna sara wakt usse denge.

Just then Twinkle and Nandini came out of the lift.

Twinkle: Hello Anjali aunty

Nandini: hello Vardhan Uncle.

Vardhan: Hey twinkle Nandini ...how r u ...konse clg main Àdmission liya.

Twinkle: Space

Anjali: Arrey wah hamari Mukti bhi Space main hi Jaa ne wali hai.

Nandini: Mukti kon?

Ishita: Mukti Di bolo beta ...she is of Twinkles age Anjali aur Vardhan ki beti

Anjali: aur batao padhai kaisa chal Raha hai Nandini beta.

Nandini:(sighed)  bass aunty, Padhai aage aage main peeche peeche...Not atall fun.

Vardhan and Anjali had a hearty chuckle.

Ishita: yeh aajkal ke bacche na

Raman: aarrey jaane do Ishita abb nahi Masti mazak karenge toh kab karenge hamari umr main?

Ishita: Oh hello Hamari umr ka kya matlab hai?...dekho Budhapa tumhara aayahoga ..main abhi bhi 22 se ek saal badi nahi lagti...arrey log mujhe Twinkle ki badi behen samhajte hai.

Twinkle(whined): Mom, aapne kitne logo ko bata rakha hai ki aap meri badi behen ho.

Anjali and Vardhan saw their normal family banter and looked at eachother.
The regret of not spending such light hearted moments with their only daughter reflecting clearly in their eyes and also a sheer determination of rectifying their mistakes shining bright

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Space University

In the Principal's Cabin

Principal: Neyonika ma'am if the Funds r pulled out so suddenly....our University would shut down.

Neyonika: But how can they pull out their funds without their prior notice.

Just as if on cue all the phones in the office ringed simultaneously

Neyonika: Hamesha se Musicana space hi jeetta aaya hai

Neyo: (fumed ) Raj

Raj: the ball is in ur court Neyonika....I need a final settlement...either get done with ur career or finalise the divorce procedure.

Neyo: what the hell is ur problem

Raj: the court wants us to stay together for months before finalising the divorce.

Neyo: so be it...

Raj: with the entire family warna procedure finalise nahi hoga...u hv to call Manik.

Phone convo ends

Scene shifts
Neyo calls Manik who is in
Bangalore

Neyo: I said u hv to come back to Mumbai is that clear.

Manik: ohh really Neyonika...and what makes u think that I am going to obey u.

Neyo: ohh really Manik now u think u can defy me...
Tumhara woh Fab5 barbaad kardungi main uss band ko....

Manik:(gave a humorous chuckle) do what ever u hv got ...This time I hv nothing to loose.

Neyonika:
So let's make a deal Manik ..
3 months and I will sign on those papers that u desperately wanted me to sign

Manik:(surprised) really!?
What made u suddenly change ur mind?

Neyo: that's none of ur business Manik...tell me wheather the deal is on Orr do u want me to reconsider.

Manik: (immediately) it's...it's on...infact main kal subhe ki flight se hi Mumbai pahoch raha hu.

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