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Hello, my lovely readers! I hope you are doing well :D
                          
I know you are waiting for me to update the sequel...and I have decided not to.
                          
BUT HOLD YOUR HORSES!
                          


                          
I'm rewriting the original 
                          


                          
I was 15 when I first started the story and I had no idea what I was doing
                          
By the time you read this the sequel has been taken down since it will probably change due to me editing the first story, sorry about that
                          
I'm rewriting UT for it to actually make sense, take out parts I don't like and add new ones. I never knew how to end the story and it's a mess
                          
I feel like a lot is missing from the story (if you were up to date with updates then you know it took me weeks to months to post a new chapter) I forgot what happened in the previous chapter and repeat things or get confused what is happening
                          
It's still going to be the same, just better and edited
                          
This is the first story I have ever finished and I want it to be the best it can be
                          
It's hard to write a sequel when I'm not happy with the first story
                          
I'm reading Ultimate Tomboy and I must admit I don't remember half the stuff that has happened and I am cringing so hard omg
                          
and I LOVE READING THE COMMENTS! you guys make me laugh and cry with happiness
                          
so in the rewritten story, 
- there will be parts thrown to the underworld to never see the daylight again
- new parts added that Zeus himself approves of
- name changes (only minor characters, Harper and the guys are staying the same)
- it will make sense (i first started writing it set in Australia then changed it to America like halfway through)(i live in a land of down under okay)
- the new version will be posted as a new story
- a new cover which I am actually loving
- I hope to finish it this year to enter the watty awards >.<
- and many other things that need fixing that I cannot think of at the moment

                          
I want this to be published one day so for that to happen it needs changes. I tried really hard to write the sequel and I'm not happy with it.

                          
I hope you understand!
                          
One of the things that encourages me to fix UT is all the fakes and badly written knock offs. I created this and seeing them just makes me aaagghhhhhh
                          
If you have feedback about anything in UT that you think needs changing and fixing let me know! Let's make it great
                          
(dw guys I'm taking out the part when they 'died' i just felt like pranking XD)

                          
2019 will be editing and creating new stories, I have so many and I really hope you would like other ones not about Harper (she will always be my favourite)
                          
Ultimate Tomboy is currently at 586k reads and #5 in Tomboy THATS CRAZY! After a whole year of the story being complete it is still getting reads and staying in the ranks, I want to cry (I am crying)
                          
I love you all and always be yourself!

                          
Comment here about high school life in America, I'd like to know!
                          
follow me on Instagram where I post fanart created by me and fans and random pictures- @rhi_thephantom
                          
see you in the next story
                          
xoxo the phantom