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I'm yourlilsassygirl! A gorgeous and sophicated wanna be writer. Can you check out my story? Can you vote? Or criticize it? I love criticisms! Thanks a lot!!! :) Enjoy! :*
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PROLOUGE
-- I Love You, Mr. Broken --
“A promise means everything, but after they are broken, sorry means nothing.”
Promise?
Ano ba yun?
Isang bagay na pinanghawakan ko, isang bagay na pilit ko binubuo.
Isang bagay na bumago at sumira sa puso ko.
I tried to hold on every moment of my life because of it.
I tried to puzzle it out to make it complete and true until you left.
I tried everything until nothing left to me.
I don’t know who I am; I don’t know why I still believe on what you promised.
I’m tired, until you turned it around and make it very complicated as it was before.
Should I forget it?
And say, Goodbye, Mr. Broken
Should I hold and believe still?
And say, I love You, Mr. Broken?
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No softcopies. No stealing. Just a self-created story, based what I imagine. Disclaimer.
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O papahabain ko o hindi.
Salamat! :*
BINABASA MO ANG
I Love You, Mr. Broken (On-going)
Teen FictionHe lived with anger. She lived through lies. She is alone when he left her. With this PROMISE from him that she believed in through years, can she be still happy at the end and say "I LOVE YOU, MR. BROKEN"
