I want to know your guys' thoughts on this, I have done more than this mind you but I want to know if it's something you guys would like to read ... and it is still being edited, I want it to sound like it's actually them so ... yeah give me your thoughts, if you have any ideas on how to improve it I'm all ears! ... ok not all "ears" that was nine but still ...
Rose slept on the jumpseat as the Doctor finished piloting and settling them into the vortex. Once he finished he walked over to Rose, not wanting to wake her he picked her up. He wasn't surprised to find that she didn't weigh much. Then froze as the memory of him carrying her into the TARDIS after satellite five played in his mind. After that flashback he walked towards her bedroom, looking down every so often to make sure she was still asleep, but when he arrived at the corridor he found it was missing. Thinking he took a wrong turn, which he thought was impossible since he knew his ship like the back of his hand, he returned to the console room and tried again, but it was the same result. Finally realizing what was happening he began getting annoyed. "Now is not the time for tricks!" He yelled in his head, in hopes of the TARDIS bringing back Rose's room. And after a while one appeared before him and opened imediatly, not letting him see the door. He walked in and the lights turned on revealing the room around him.This was not Rose's bedroom,
not even remotely close to her room this was his room. "Oh very funny, yes absolutely hilarious, now give back her room. You've had your fun." The TARDIS stubbornly refused. "Alright, fine!" He walked over to his bed and set Rose down as gently as possible, pulling the duvet over her. Once he finished settling her in he walked towards the door, only to have it shut in his face. "Now what do you want!" He yelled. "Brace for impact? That's hardly on topi-" He turned and ran towards Rose, hoping he didn't realise what was going on too late ... they were crash landing. Jumping onto the bed he quickly moved on top of her to shield her with his body, hoping nothing would hit her. Everything started shaking violently, obviously waking Rose, her quick understanding helped the Doctor protect her. Everything on the shelves and walls fell smashing onto the wooden floor. They got up slowly once it stopped and looked around. The sprinklers turned on, soaking everything. He grabbed her hand and they rushed outside. "Are alright?"
He asked running a hand through his soaked hair, making it stand up again. "Yeah, are you?" "I'm fine", he sighed. Rose looked at the TARDIS, "Is she gonna be ok?" He looked back, "Yeah, she just needs some rest." Rose nodded, then finally looked around. "When and where are we?" Thankful he got a glance at the monitor before he came outside he turned to her, "We are on the peaceful planet Yarbenner in the year ninety-billion and fourty three." "One heck of a jump from our normal travel time.", she mused. "Well we might as well enjoy our stay, the she won't want us to go in while she's repairing from the crash.", He sighed. "What happened and I mean since I fell asleep, because if I remember correctly I fell asleep on the jumpseat not on your bed." He blushed a little and looked away, "Well you s-see I was taking you to your room, but the TARDIS hid it and she wouldn't give it back so I had no choice but to lay you down on my bed. But then it started shaking so to protect you I shielded you and that's when you awoke."
She nodded, "Ok, so care to explain to me what caused us to crash land?" He thought about it a bit and came to a conclusion, "I think we were hit by a stray asteroide, causing the TARDIS to lose postion and send us spiraling into the closest planet's orbit." Rose gasped, "That's your explaination? No, something in the circuits went haywire or a really long explaination on time mishaps?" "Oi! I do not have to make everything I explain complicated and besides I doubt something in the circuits went wrong I haven't tried to fix anything ... recently!" Instead of responding she turned around, looking at the field of golden grass surrounding the area. She walked around the TARDIS to see the otherside of the field, that was unfortunatly ruined during their crash land. The Doctor watched her everymove, always enjoying how she looked as she saw different and new things. "Well it's best we get to a city before it gets dark. The days aren't very long here, but it'll feel as long as a whole Earth day once it gets dark." She turned around and found that
