Yeah...hi. Please read the whole thing to know what's going on with the near future updates. The next chapter will take maybe another week. Sorry about that. I, like any other author, is currently doing research. Because I'm obviously not a great writer, and improvement is what I'm going for this summer break. Yeah, I know, I have no life.
This story contains:
-Flashbacks
-Foreshadowing
-Clues
-Mentions
-Science (medical and theoretical)
-Emotions (to which I need to research more, since I do not understand the feeling of happiness and joy, so therefore I don't know how to describe them in stories)
-Connections
I must explain to you what's coming up. But before doing so, I realized I might do a poor job of explaining them. Because a character (such as... Ty.. or Adam) can't just explain their life story in their mind. Sure, maybe they could go over everything, but that's during an emotional breakdown. And usually a character going through such things wouldn't want to think about such. A character can't just say things like 'As a child, my mother died blah blah blah life story blah blah blah' because it'll seem odd. A single person in the real reality we live in doesn't sit in class or in (as noted) a hospital and think about their life story and narrate it in their minds.
This isn't Pokemon, where a random person shouts out the background and stuff as it's being used or shown, or even mentioned.
But the thing is... this is a multi-person perspective book. It started off by switching pov, such as Ty's POV or Mitch's POV. This is entirely around the characters and their own thoughts. I could say things like 'Ty turned away from Jenna, not wanting to say anything else. Besides, who would want to talk to her with such an atmosphere?' The italics are Ty's thoughts in particularly, which is technically, in all reason, first person. But then it'll follow up as 'Jenna felt like hitting Ty, no one should treat a lady like that.' To which the italics are Jenna's opinion, to which is switching from Ty's perspective to Jenna's. You may have noticed this kind of POV in the book already, for example when two characters are in a room, I tend to go by those rules. Like Mark and Adam, equally talking from experience about heart break. The 'Mark felt cold' was Mark's view, and 'Adam felt colder' was a technical clash of perspective, comparing the two's thoughts, but still referring to Adam's view point. (The examples refer to the chapter 'It's weird')
Please note that I'm younger than 14 and I don't have enough writing experience.
The POV could quickly change to third person, like a bystander walking past, in a rush to get through, or a bird chirping; to which the story will step aside from the plot and describe the bird in third person, because saying 'I' from the point of view of an animal doesn't make sense in this kind of scene or story all together.
But back to the plot line, I will poorly write it because it'll seem odd to describe things in a point of view. Especially when those mostly work for first person, and I'm writing in a third person multi thing. So I will say it now.
IMPORTANT THINGS TO READ:
Jack's father is a scientist, who was mentioned in a previous chapter (The Adventures of Nurse pt 3) in Ty's own thoughts. Jack, as mentioned in the un-found case file (note to chapter 'Un-found Case File 0.7), and in Jack's own thoughts in another previous chapter (Eye Witness), Jack was framed. It was said he almost died from a suicide attempt, but no, that wasn't it. As a scientist, Jack's dad, A.K.A Justin McLoughlin, is smart. He's also sly, clever.
He, just as to what Ty foreshadowed, is planning something big. He KNOWS Ty isn't dead, and how does he know so much about Ty? He ran the experiment Ty was in, to be a human robot. (To be referred/mentioned in chapter: 'Un-found Case File 0.7) (The experiment details were mentioned in the chapter 'The adventures of nurse pt 3). Jack, the unfortunate child, was a last minute addition (5 years later to be exact) to the experiment. He, the lucky one, came out with not the outcome of Ty, since the gears, wires, etc wouldn't be a fit to him. But they tried. He came out harmed, and harmed enough to look like a human being did it (primarily his father- Justin) and when he was sent to the hospital, it looked like not someone else, but Jack himself. So he was written up for depression and suicide attempt in the newest case file (which can be uploaded as a chapter, but doesn't have to). Ty fits into the story by how Justin is looking for him. And Jack, unlike the rest of Justin's assistance's, can tell INFORMATION REGARDING TY AND HIS WHEREABOUTS.
My, what a plot.
Now, regarding Jack's mother, she was mentioned as one of the test subjects in the previous chapter (Unfound Case File 0.7) as Maria McLoughlin. She died, like the rest (other than Ty). So Jack lived 5 years without his mother, knowing his father was the one to kill her. She was forced into being a test subject by Justin, being blinded by the false love Justin gave her.
But anyways, I will stop here. I know you probably haven't read this far, but I hope you did. Also, if you somehow are inspired by me (because I learned SOMEHOW-?!- some are you are) you can Message me on Wattpad for advice and such. Because I would love to help fellow authors, even beginners. But please know I'm younger than 14, so cut me some slack. I'm not very smart. I have a lot more to discuss about this book, but for now, thank you for reading this A/N.
With best regards, next chapter will be of sept- I mean of Jack and Mark.
Man I hoped you read this entire thing. Or else you'd be confused the rest of the book.
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