~Trapped in a Mystifying Fictional World~ (By Prekshana)

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Reviewer- _prekshu_

Author- avniy1312 / VanishingMaverick

Chapters read- 10 (Including Prologue)

Book name- Trapped in a Mystifying Fictional World

A) Title: The title speaks for itself and sketches the outline of the story right there.

B) Cover: The cover which I felt like wasn't aligning much with the story, but it did give a brief account that the main protagonist is going to be a girl.

C) Blurb: The blurb clearly summarised the main idea of the story which was done finely.

D) Plot: The plot revolves around two characters. Noah and Emily who are now Alex and Evelyn, are the two main characters of their favourite novel written by their favourite best seller author "Adam Miller" and the novel's name goes like, "A silent killer in a motel".They are now trapped inside of it and no one knows even though they have read the book, no one knows the actual killer. The concept of novel in a novel is just fascinating.

E) Grammar: Several mistakes pertaining to spellings and tenses were found. 

Suggestion~ Try to write your story either in the past or present tense, it will be more easy to read and understand.

F) Characters and their development: Emily's character had and also lacked depth, other incidents regarding the characters occurred very haphazardly, like too many events at a time. Though the recalling from the novel by the main protagonist was very on the point.

G) Interaction with readers (engagement): The hook was very much on from the very beginning. I loved the way things got curated by the novel itself inside the novel. The overwhelming situation with Emily made me eat up this novel more speedily than I ever did with any other novel before.

H) Overall: The plot, premise of this book was just chef's kiss! If you are looking for a binge read that you won't be able to put down even for a second before knowing what is coming next; here is your book!

Rating~4.25/5

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