Ris shocked to see the person.
Viren taking a deep breath: I was about to call you. Please come inside.
Yess your guess is right. The person is none other than RAMAN.Ris crying with his head down not looking at them.
Raman in worry: rishu kya hua beta ro kyu rha hai
Viren: Raman please sit, abhi isko tujhe bulane ke liye hi bol rha tha mein,its really urgent to talk about him now.
Raman: kya urgency
Viren: phle baith please
Raman sit unwillingly still looking at ris but ris is not making any eye contact to him and crying silently.Viren start talking about ris behaviour from beginning. How he lied everytime. His unnecessary excuses towards work, his casual behaviour.... Raman expression change on knowing all these things.
Viren: Aur to aur when I asked him to give me your contact number he told me your phone got lost.
On this sentence Raman stare ris dangerously as he mentioned same thing to Raman when he asked viren contact.
Viren sigh: Look Raman...I am really done with him...i tried every way but he don't want to co-operate. I guess it would be better if you take him with you else with no other option I have to rusticate him.
Raman taking a deep breath: Jo krna hai kro iske saath...who am I jiski permission ki isko ya kse aur ko jarurat ho...right(looking at ris)
Ris look at him and tear rool down from his eyes.
Raman: I just came to meet him but he don't need anyone...I think I should leave....
Raman stand and start going from there.
Ris gather all his courage and hold Raman hand and spoke softly.
Ris: Bhai....mein btane hi wala tha aapko
But he cut off by a tight slap by Raman.
Raman shout by holding his arms: btane wala tha kya...kya btane wala tha...tujhe hazaro baar samjaya tha na mne yha aane se phle apne ye harkate chod de....par nhi tujhe Jo krna hai kr....apne chalani hai ghr,family kse ki kuch nhi pdi na...do what you want...Aaj ke baad apne shakal mat dikhana ghr mein kse ko...
Ris scared by the last statement and start pleading: nhi nhi bhai
Raman: viren, do what you want and I will not say I word... Mein to yha isse surprise krne aaya tha mujhe khud hi surprise mil gya...chlo kya kre...I am leaving now...aur tu(looking at ris) apni shakal mat dikhana mujhe
Saying this Raman start going to door.Ris crying and hold Raman foot and start pleading: Bhai please mujhe maaf kr do...mein bhut unworthy hu...bhut jhut bola mene pr mein aap logo ke bina nhi rh paunga please mujhe akela mat chodo...
Raman stop and his anger start vanishing looking at ris state. Viren also feeling pity on him at this state.Ris(crying badly): Mera pariwar sab kuch hai mera...aapne to mujhe hmesa shi raasta dikhaya hai aaj akela mat chodo mujhe Bhai please
Raman also having tears in his eyes.
Ris sobbing: mein marr jaunga Bhai mein marr jaunga aap logo ke bina
Raman hold him,make him stand and cup his face: apne room mein jaa abhi thodi der mein aata hu.
Ris still sobbing: I am sorry Bhai...mujhe mat chodo akela
Raman: chup ho ja beta khi nhi Jaa rha bss aa rha hu...ja room mein
Ris moving to his room still crying.Raman look at Viren.: can we talk
Viren nod and they both sit.
Viren initiate: dekh Raman, I don't have any personal grudges with him. But tu samjh yha bhut pressure hai...what a person learn in his 2 year masters degree we have to teach within 4 months.... starting se hi ye baat pta thi isko..still ye sab...chlo I can understand he is weak in studies, it take some time to make him understand everything but he have to show some efforts... He is not even trying to do anything...pichle 4 dino se I tried my 100% to teach him...ek topic ko 7-8 baar btaya mne but look(showing sheet of ris) what he did...isko dekh ke assa lgta hai vo try hi nhi krna chahta...
Raman listening all this.
Viren sigh: see I don't know why but jbse yha aaya hai khi khoya khoya rhta hai...hmesa udaas rhta hai...jse koi baat presan krte hai usko...I tried many time but nhi btata kuch...Raman(took a while): Viren, mne btaya tha tujhe vo ghr se dur nhi rha may be isliye...and abhi kal uska birthday hai sayad ghr ki yaad aa rhi ho jada...if you don't mind can I take him with me for 2 days...i am sure his behaviour will change....Dekh mein nhi kh rha he can be the one who can beat your expectations but mein Puri koshish krunga usse samjhane ki...and agr mujhe thoda bhi lga vo unwillingly yha aa rha hai to mein usse wapas nhi bhejunga i promise you.
Viren understood Raman situation so he agree with what he say. Raman than go to ris room. Ris was sitting on his bed while covering his face by his hands and crying badly. Seeing this Raman heart melted. He can't see his prince suffering.
Raman go near him cease his hair and spoke softly: Rishu
Listening this ris start crying uncontrollablely.
Raman try to cup his face but ris crying badly and spoke: I am sorry Bhai mne sab kharab kar diya....papa ki izzat..sab barbaad kr diya mneRaman hug him tightly: sshhh...kuch khraab nhi kiya tune chup ho jaa bilkul
Ris(crying): mein bhut beekar insaan hu...bilkul worthless hu...kse kaam ka nhi hu...aap ne bilkul shi punishment di mujhe...mere saath assa hi hona chaiye tha....Roz maar pdni chaiye mujhe...i deserve nothing in my life.Seeing ris state Raman feel a sec that he made a wrong decision to enroll him here.
Raman: rishu beta chup ho jaa kya bole Jaa rha hai bachha....tu to Mera pyara Bhai hai na chup ho ja tabiyat khrab ho jayegi
Ris(hiccupping): aap mumma papa ke best bete ho bhai...mein aap ki brabari to dur ki baat hu kabhi aapke pero tak bhi nhi phuch paunga...mere jse bete ko to marr hi Jana chahiye....
Raman immediately slap him made him quite and scold: Chup bilkul...kya bkwaas lga rkhi hai itni der se...marna chata hai kabhi socha tere family kse jayegi tere bina... mummy ka socha hai tune...Mera socha nhi...tujhe bss apni pdi hai...ye baat dimaag mein daal le tere zindagi pr phle humara haq hai...ye marne ki baat dimaag mein laya bhi na to dekhna mujhe bura koi nhi hoga
Ris hiccupping badly but not saying anything.
Raman make him drink water and hug him till he become normal.Raman softly: apne bde Bhai pr bilkul bharosa nhi hai na tujhe isliye kuch nhi btaya...
Ris: nhi bhai assa nhi hai...aap bhut stress mein the phle se hi
Raman( creasing his hair): tu bhai nhi hai beta hai mera phla...kitna hi stress ho busy hu mein tu sabse phle aata hai mere liye...mein dekh leta tujhe asse taklif mein bta yhi jaanta hai apne bhai ke baare mein
Ris become more emotional and hug him.
Ris again start crying: I am sorry Bhai...mujhe bta dena chaiye tha aapko sab sach
Raman : chl ab ro mat bilkul...saman pack kr chlte haiRis broke the hug and thinking whether viren rusticate him. He knows very well if his family associates get to know that he come back like this it will definitely not good for his family reputation.
Ris: kha bhai
Raman: ghr chl bhabhi aur kush intezar krre hai tera
Ris become silent.
Raman sigh: viren se permission le le hai 2 dino ke liye...you can live with us...
Ris look at him.
Raman: dekh rishabh, I know bhut kuch chl rha tere dimaag mein but abhi kuch mat soch...bss mere saath chl.
Raman knew ris can make tone of assumptions but he have to find what bothering ris from so long in these two days.
Both Raman and ris came out of room. Viren still sitting there.
Raman: viren, we are leaving.
Viren look at ris,who is not looking at him: okay but do your best what you said.Raman nod and say bye to him but ris just go from there like he want to leave that place deliberately.
Will Raman able to change ris mind? Will ris able to overcome his misunderstandings. How will viren behave with ris in future. Let see only what magic will happen in these two days.
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Ahead In A Way
FanfictionIt's a story about a boy(Rishabh )who lost all the faith of his family. Once a carefree prince now going through a all alone life. From a couch patato now going to become a responsible person. An elder brother(Raman) who have to take some harsh deci...