I'm planning to rewrite the book. The reason being is that:
1) Too many plot holes. An example is in Chapter 3 where Archer used his 'Black Bow' and shot the ball over 2km but there were no reactions.
2) I made him a tad bit too OP. This one is my fault 100%. I made him be able to [trace] Divine Constructs, which makes him so OP that he can just spam these godly NPs. Not only that, the fact that a [traced] item is 1/10 of its cost for me feels a bit too OP.
There are more reasons, but I don't know how to express them. I'm so sorry for not uploading. I'll eventually rewrite this book once I figure out how I'm going to advance. That's all. Thanks :)
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Counter Guardian in Land of Heroes [Discontinued]
FanfictionArcher just came back from the Fifth Holy Grail War and Alaya has a proposition. It will relieve him but instead, he needs to resolve something in another world? Fate/Stay Night x BNHA Started: April 2021 Completed: August 2021