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As the men held fast there lines grew weaker.the horde was overwelming them. They had been holding the pass for some time now.Loseing the pass
would bring untold horrors onto the world and worse.Keeping it would proble save the world and restore life.Looking around this base would seem worthless but this base was more
valuable then it appearse, it holds the key to stoping the infection and saveing the world as they knew it.
Unable to speak clearly, the soldier who was dressed in his uniformed heavy kevlar anounced *We cant last verymuch longer SIR!*.
The horde was beginning to breach there walls haveing already consumed the outer defense force. They where eating
there way through another group of the proud commanders men.The commander was a proud man at an age of 29 years,now sitting in
the grave he dug for his wife. The soldier screamed for help as he was pulled into the hord to never be seen again. Men without a leader cannot stand and will not stand long
without a good leader.The defense was starting to break the horde pushing in meny dieing, kayos everywhere. Death,destruction. The sounds of pain and suffering everywhere and guns *bang,bang*.
The pass was lost and the war ended,finished,over. All the survivors dead in a flash. Soon the parasite will die with no food and the planet reborn to a new age,but it will be filled with
emptieness.
I end the note here take care,stay safe and live life to the fullest.
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As the men held fast there lines grew weaker.the horde was overwelming them. They had been holding the pass for some time now.Loseing the pass
would bring untold horrors onto the world and worse.Keeping it would proble save the world and restore life.Looking around this base would seem worthless but this base was more
valuable then it appearse, it holds the key to stoping the infection and saveing the world as they knew it.
Unable to speak clearly, the soldier who was dressed in his uniformed heavy kevlar anounced *We cant last verymuch longer SIR!*.
The horde was beginning to breach there walls haveing already consumed the outer defense force. They where eating
there way through another group of the proud commanders men.The commander was a proud man at an age of 29 years,now sitting in
the grave he dug for his wife. The soldier screamed for help as he was pulled into the hord to never be seen again. Men without a leader cannot stand and will not stand long
without a good leader.The defense was starting to break the horde pushing in meny dieing, kayos everywhere. Death,destruction. The sounds of pain and suffering everywhere and guns *bang,bang*.
The pass was lost and the war ended,finished,over. All the survivors dead in a flash. Soon the parasite will die with no food and the planet reborn to a new age,but it will be filled with
emptieness.
I end the note here take care,stay safe and live life to the fullest.
This is my first ever real story i have really put thought into my condolences.
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Well, such could very interesting, however writing takes time and lots of it.
Description, scene, and characterization are very essential to making a story come to life.
Usually a rhetorical purpose to drive the story for the audience is important as well.
Even an ill ending one with the promise of rebirth from death can have grand rhetorical purpose.
Still you need things for the audience to grasp onto to reach that purpose.
What do these parasite/hoards look like, who are these valiant defenders? What is the context?
How do such events lead to concur?
It is the asking of questions like these that allows you the author to help build a story for the audience to explore and be impacted by.
This short here is an excellent building block to work on and expand into something with wonderful potential.
Good luck.
Description, scene, and characterization are very essential to making a story come to life.
Usually a rhetorical purpose to drive the story for the audience is important as well.
Even an ill ending one with the promise of rebirth from death can have grand rhetorical purpose.
Still you need things for the audience to grasp onto to reach that purpose.
What do these parasite/hoards look like, who are these valiant defenders? What is the context?
How do such events lead to concur?
It is the asking of questions like these that allows you the author to help build a story for the audience to explore and be impacted by.
This short here is an excellent building block to work on and expand into something with wonderful potential.
Good luck.
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