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Oh god you left me again
why must you leave when im so busy
i call about you but you just have excuses
where is the truth, why do you lie
thinking about you i go through withdraws
you have left me nothing to gain
everytime you leave i go crazy
you pack your things in boxes
im tired of your lies, once in your life tell the truth
you suck life out through your straws
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Oh god you left me again
why must you leave when im so busy
i call about you but you just have excuses
where is the truth, why do you lie
thinking about you i go through withdraws
you have left me nothing to gain
everytime you leave i go crazy
you pack your things in boxes
im tired of your lies, once in your life tell the truth
you suck life out through your straws
i wrote this poem and though how it may seem this is not about what you think it is this is about me losing internet
Category Poetry / All
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oh shit typo 6th line it should read
you have left me nothing to gain
you have left me nothing to gain
You can easily fix your file and click "change submisison file" and then you can upload the corrected version.
That's so funny. And you're worried about a typo when there's so many uncapitlized "i"s, missing commas and apsotrophes, and such.
well er uh...god dammit
i guess i wanted the flow to be a bit better i worry more of the flow than the small little grammar mistakes.
i guess i wanted the flow to be a bit better i worry more of the flow than the small little grammar mistakes.
I would guess those are more part of the style... pretty common with free verse.
Well its always good to read good poetry. regardless of what its about
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