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"Otoko-chan" means "little kid", a nickname she derisively bestowed on me after our catastrophic first battle with Brock (yes I canonically knew about it – she wanted to be very sure I did – she mimed it out). It's not that she disobeys my orders (she does see the merit of "tail whip first, then tackle!") we just have that sort of relationship.
"I don't go by that anymore" is probably the most mindblowing phrase that came out of the 90s to me. (I know it didn't originate then but it sure became normal at that time!)
My third problem with "Pikachu's Goodbye" is the implication that Ash's Pikachu has never been in Pikachu society before, so Ash was going to just dump him on a bunch of strangers. If there'd been any hint that any of them recognized him... it would have at least explained why he's so good at taking care of Togepi!
This page is, honestly, the second-biggest reason why I'd never published the story before. As the first page where we can understand what the pokémon say, it needed to do a lot of heavy lifting including:
• Establishing what sort of relationship Rei and I have
• Making it clear that Rei has been here before
• Following Rei while still showing what I'm doing
• Keeping us separated but still in the same frame
The first draft continued with my freakout from the last page (with me saying “What’s this, fur?? What’s this, a tail?? What’s this, I’m small enough to be preyed upon??”) with Rei and Hearty arguing inaudibly in the background. Although this was funny, I felt the the story as a whole suffered as Rei later had to explain what they'd argued about. Show, don't tell, people!
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No TF-ing on this one since there's been no new donations.
"Otoko-chan" means "little kid", a nickname she derisively bestowed on me after our catastrophic first battle with Brock (yes I canonically knew about it – she wanted to be very sure I did – she mimed it out). It's not that she disobeys my orders (she does see the merit of "tail whip first, then tackle!") we just have that sort of relationship.
"I don't go by that anymore" is probably the most mindblowing phrase that came out of the 90s to me. (I know it didn't originate then but it sure became normal at that time!)
My third problem with "Pikachu's Goodbye" is the implication that Ash's Pikachu has never been in Pikachu society before, so Ash was going to just dump him on a bunch of strangers. If there'd been any hint that any of them recognized him... it would have at least explained why he's so good at taking care of Togepi!
This page is, honestly, the second-biggest reason why I'd never published the story before. As the first page where we can understand what the pokémon say, it needed to do a lot of heavy lifting including:
• Establishing what sort of relationship Rei and I have
• Making it clear that Rei has been here before
• Following Rei while still showing what I'm doing
• Keeping us separated but still in the same frame
The first draft continued with my freakout from the last page (with me saying “What’s this, fur?? What’s this, a tail?? What’s this, I’m small enough to be preyed upon??”) with Rei and Hearty arguing inaudibly in the background. Although this was funny, I felt the the story as a whole suffered as Rei later had to explain what they'd argued about. Show, don't tell, people!
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Mastodon: https://meow.social/@FrankHghTwr/113000821037261048
Deviant Art: https://www.deviantart.com/frankhig.....art/1089414889
Tumblr: https://www.tumblr.com/frankhightow.....0826457899008/
Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/posts/110529018?pr=true
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
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Size 2552 x 1444px
File Size 2.73 MB
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