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jamearts of my fursona Toppy T.Tops in her Top Tracy Persona confronting Madame Lilith on a case which plays as a scene for this story.
(Story: Top Tracy and the Ivy Manor Case)
At the home of the Tops and their foster mom Carla Brown Cow. We find Toppy sitting on the couch reading one of his favorite book series "The Many Cases of Nick Casey!" while his brothers Boxcy and Socky both doing another video game competition while Curly is napping on the recliner.
Toppy: Oh no Nick don't go in there, Pizzaface Perkins is behind that door...EEP! * To the viewers* He threw a knife at Nick! Oh please don't let Nick get bumped off! * Resumes reading* WHEW! That was close.
Boxcy: Toppy I know you get excited on your new Nick Casey books but can you keep it down? I'm busy concentrating on playing this game with Socky.
Socky: And loosing as always. Ah ha, ha, ha, ha, ha!
Boxcy: I'm warning you ya bum!
Toppy: Sorry guys I'll keep my imagination on the down low. I'll head to our room to finish reading.
Toppy went to their bedroom and sat on his bed to finish reading. Carla walked by writing on his clipboard for some of her science research for her job as a scientist. She looks at Toppy as he gets more engaged with his book.
Toppy: That's it Nick get'em! Show that creep whose boss and...HOORAY! Once again Nick Casey my hero using his wits and muscles and his charm with the ladies to bring evil doers to justice!
Carla: Oh sweetie! Its nice that you are enjoying your books.
Toppy: I can't help it Mom I'm a regular bookworm. I love to read and boy what I would give to be just like Nick Casey I can just imagine it now. * To the cartoonists* CUE THE DREAM SEQUENCE!
(Dream Sequence begins)
The scene changed to Toppy in his yellow detective outfit as Top Tracy the detective. In his office behind close door as his secretary Alice the dragon was busy filing her claws as Top Tracy is busy shouting "I'M GONNA PIN IT ON YA! I'M PINNING IT ON YA SEE?!"
Inside we see Toppy blindfolded playing pin the tail on the donkey.
Toppy: I'll pin it on ya or my name's not Top Tracy!
After missing the donkey completely he takes off his blindfold and went out of the office to check up with Alice.
Toppy: Anything today?
Alice: Oh yes you got two things. This is from me!
She picks up Toppy and gave him a kiss on the cheek.
Toppy: HEY! Quit that! You're ruining my tough guy image.
Alice: But you are just so tiny and adorable! Also you got to called Police Commissioner Jimmy Basil-lisk for an important case.
Toppy: Great I'll take it to my office.
Toppy went into this office and sat behind his desk and called up the Police Commissioner.
Toppy: Hi there Jimmy! What's on your mind besides your hat?
Jimmy: * On the phone* We are getting strange incidents over at Ivy Manor at 1313 Drive.
Toppy: Oh yeah? What kind of strange incidents?
Jimmy: Like listen.
Suddenly on the phone are lots of screaming, guns firing, cannon's blasting, thunders booming, cats screeching and some guy yelling "MY LEG!"
Toppy: That is strange. Well sorry not interested.
Jimmy: The owner of the manor will pay $3000 for your service.
Toppy: FOR 3 G'S?! How do we know they got that kind of dough?
Suddenly a roll of money popped out of Toppy's phone.
Toppy: They got it! Huh I guess I should have asked for bus fare! Okay Jimmy I'm on the case.
Toppy rushes out of his office building.
Toppy: QUICK TAXI! TAXI!
A Taxi pulled up to Toppy.
Toppy: QUICK FOLLOW THAT CAR!
The Taxi drove off without Toppy.
Toppy: * To the viewers* It keeps them on their toes! Now on to the case.
The scene changes to Toppy standing in front of the manor where he starts narrating.
Toppy: * Narrating* I stand in front of the manor to check up on a case. I rang the doorbell, then out comes the butler.
Out comes Catherine dressed up as a maid.
Toppy: * Narrating* Whoops! My mistake the maid appears and she seems friendly enough.
Suddenly Catherine picked up Toppy and starts kissing him up.
Toppy: Maybe too friendly! * To Catherine* Cut it out I'm on a case.
Cahterine: But you are just so tiny and cute!
Toppy: Why am I cursed of being a cute little dinosaur? Okay sister why did you do it? * To the viewers* Aw skip it the suspicious sexy French maids are always innocent in these whodunits.
Catherine: Walk this way sir.
She walks on her tippy toes with her arms up in a prancing mode with Toppy copying her every movement.
Toppy: It ain't easy.
Catherine: The Madame will see you now.
Toppy enters into a living room as Catherine makes her exit.
Toppy: Okay nobody moves! I'm in charge here now then where's the body?
Woman's voice: Did ssssssssomeone asksssssssssssss for me?
The voice came from Madame Lilith a sexy snake woman as she smokes her cigarette holder and blows a heart shape smoke ring at Toppy.
Toppy: * To the viewers* Note the sexy suspicious suspect whom are just crazy for us hard boiled detective types. * To Lilith* Okay sister what did you do? Come clean now you dun it! Didn't you?
Madame Lilith gently coils her tail around Toppy and giving him a hug.
Madame Lilith: I didn't do anything Ssssssssweetie! I'm innocent! * Hugs Toppy closer* Do you hear me? Innocent!
Toppy: * To the viewers* THIS IS INNOCENT?!
Madame Lilith starts kissing Toppy.
Toppy: Quit it will you? Now then why did you do it? I Top Tracy know you did it.
Madame Lilith: I didn't do nothing Sssssssweetie.
Toppy: Don't play coy with me you slithering seductress. You got guilt written all over your face.
A close up on Lilith shows she does have the word "Guilt" written over her face.
Madame Lilith: Oh? * Starts applying face powder to her face*
Toppy: Yes you did and I know how! You and the maid hated the old goat but you loved his money so you needed him out of the way. But he's been suspicious of you two and when he confronted you about your evil plans what did you do?
Madame Lilith: Sssssssssearch me darling.
Toppy: Business before pleasure please Madame. * He goes over to Lilith's purse* You went over to your purse and pulled out your small handgun! * Pulls out a large gun from the purse and hands it to Madame Lilith* You were ready to take aim but he starts running and screaming. AHHHHH! Just when he thought he was free! He makes move but just as soon as he was in the doorway out of his den you took aim and FIRED!
Suddenly Madame Lilith starts shooting at Toppy hitting him making him walk back and forth like a shooting gallery target as numbers over the Den's entry way starts popping up on each hit from "1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, PRETTY GOOD SHOOTIN SISTER!"
Toppy: Yeah pretty good shootin, but not good enough he was still kicking! You did something didn't you?
Madame Lilith: You got me all wrong you little cutie pie!
Toppy: I know you did it! For I Top Tracy know you done it! No one gets a drop on Top Tracy.
The lights went out and suddenly kissing noises were heard in the darkness. The Madame Lilith turns the lights back on showing she had him coiled up in her tail, wearing his hat and Toppy was covered in kiss marks from Lilith.
Toppy: NOW CUT THAT OUT!
Later Madame Lilith and Cahterine are in the living room as Lilith is lounging on her lounge chair smoking as Catherine is next to Toppy as he is working on a rope and pulley lifting up a grand piano to the ceiling.
Toppy: UGH! URN! You two needed a plan to get rid of the geezer. So you two rigged up a trap to lure the poor slob to his doom. With the help of your maid you two set it up to lower the boom. * To Catherine* You malicious maid you!
Catherine: * Playfully pinch's Toppy's cheek* You little sweetie pie you!
Toppy: After setting up the trap all you two had to do was wait. * Hands the rope to Catherine* Here hold this.
Toppy goes over to the spot under the piano.
Catherine: I'll bet he looks cute in a bathing suit.
Madame Lilith: I'll bet he'sssssssssssss cute in any kind of ssssssssssssuitsssssss!
Toppy: You Madame using your art of seduction to lure the poor victim right here at this very spot for your trap and then you signal the maid to end him. DIDN'T YOU?!
The shock from Toppy frighted Catherine causing her to let go of the rope causing the piano to land on Toppy sending him down to the basement. He crawls out of from underneath the rubble with piano keys sticking to his teeth.
Later after Toppy healed up and is back up with Catherine and Lilith.
Toppy: He managed to escape from your trap but then you both remembered that the old man loves to watch the 3:15 train passing by the manor. So you two set the tracks to lead to the door.
He went outside to the railroad tracks and picks up the tracks and pulls them to the door and closes the door.
Toppy: Then it was the matter of time, he was a creature of habit he never misses his chance to watch the train. Then precisely at 3:15pm which is right now he opens the door and then...!
As he opens the door a train went right over Toppy. As soon as the cloud of dust settle Toppy is covered in train tracks with a train lantern hanging from his nose horn.
Toppy: SUNDAY DRIVER! It'll take more than that to scare me off this crime scene.
Madame Lilith: Crime? There isssssssssss no crime her ssssssssssweetheart!
Toppy: Then why was I summon here at Ivy Manor on 1313 Drive?
Catherine: * Giggles* Sir this isn't Ivy Manor this is Snake Manor!
Toppy: Wait? Snake Manor? This isn't the Ivy Manor?
Madame Lilith: Ssssssssilly little boy. The Ivy Manor is four manor'sssssssssssssss down the drive.
Toppy: Really? Then you two are innocent.
Madame Lilith: Uh-huh buster we're both guilty!
Catherine: Very guilty!
Toppy: * To the viewers* No crime committed and they're guilty! Well what are you two guilty of?
Catherine hugged her arms around Toppy as Madame Lilith coils her body around the both of them.
Cahterine/Madame Lilith: For being crazy for you!
Toppy: Uh-oh! I don't like the ball and chain looks in their eyes.
Close up of Lilith and Catherine shows that their pupils have turned into balls and chains. Then they both started smooching on Toppy.
Toppy: HEY QUIT IT! STOP! HOLD ON! I GOT HORNS I'LL USE'EM! HELP! OFFICER DOWN! MAYDAY!
The End.
Alice the dragon, Catherine and Jimmy Basil-lisk (all only in the story) and Madame Lilith and artwork by jamearts
Toppy and story by me.
Please fave and post comments on original here https://www.furaffinity.net/view/54902503/
jamearts of my fursona Toppy T.Tops in her Top Tracy Persona confronting Madame Lilith on a case which plays as a scene for this story.(Story: Top Tracy and the Ivy Manor Case)
At the home of the Tops and their foster mom Carla Brown Cow. We find Toppy sitting on the couch reading one of his favorite book series "The Many Cases of Nick Casey!" while his brothers Boxcy and Socky both doing another video game competition while Curly is napping on the recliner.
Toppy: Oh no Nick don't go in there, Pizzaface Perkins is behind that door...EEP! * To the viewers* He threw a knife at Nick! Oh please don't let Nick get bumped off! * Resumes reading* WHEW! That was close.
Boxcy: Toppy I know you get excited on your new Nick Casey books but can you keep it down? I'm busy concentrating on playing this game with Socky.
Socky: And loosing as always. Ah ha, ha, ha, ha, ha!
Boxcy: I'm warning you ya bum!
Toppy: Sorry guys I'll keep my imagination on the down low. I'll head to our room to finish reading.
Toppy went to their bedroom and sat on his bed to finish reading. Carla walked by writing on his clipboard for some of her science research for her job as a scientist. She looks at Toppy as he gets more engaged with his book.
Toppy: That's it Nick get'em! Show that creep whose boss and...HOORAY! Once again Nick Casey my hero using his wits and muscles and his charm with the ladies to bring evil doers to justice!
Carla: Oh sweetie! Its nice that you are enjoying your books.
Toppy: I can't help it Mom I'm a regular bookworm. I love to read and boy what I would give to be just like Nick Casey I can just imagine it now. * To the cartoonists* CUE THE DREAM SEQUENCE!
(Dream Sequence begins)
The scene changed to Toppy in his yellow detective outfit as Top Tracy the detective. In his office behind close door as his secretary Alice the dragon was busy filing her claws as Top Tracy is busy shouting "I'M GONNA PIN IT ON YA! I'M PINNING IT ON YA SEE?!"
Inside we see Toppy blindfolded playing pin the tail on the donkey.
Toppy: I'll pin it on ya or my name's not Top Tracy!
After missing the donkey completely he takes off his blindfold and went out of the office to check up with Alice.
Toppy: Anything today?
Alice: Oh yes you got two things. This is from me!
She picks up Toppy and gave him a kiss on the cheek.
Toppy: HEY! Quit that! You're ruining my tough guy image.
Alice: But you are just so tiny and adorable! Also you got to called Police Commissioner Jimmy Basil-lisk for an important case.
Toppy: Great I'll take it to my office.
Toppy went into this office and sat behind his desk and called up the Police Commissioner.
Toppy: Hi there Jimmy! What's on your mind besides your hat?
Jimmy: * On the phone* We are getting strange incidents over at Ivy Manor at 1313 Drive.
Toppy: Oh yeah? What kind of strange incidents?
Jimmy: Like listen.
Suddenly on the phone are lots of screaming, guns firing, cannon's blasting, thunders booming, cats screeching and some guy yelling "MY LEG!"
Toppy: That is strange. Well sorry not interested.
Jimmy: The owner of the manor will pay $3000 for your service.
Toppy: FOR 3 G'S?! How do we know they got that kind of dough?
Suddenly a roll of money popped out of Toppy's phone.
Toppy: They got it! Huh I guess I should have asked for bus fare! Okay Jimmy I'm on the case.
Toppy rushes out of his office building.
Toppy: QUICK TAXI! TAXI!
A Taxi pulled up to Toppy.
Toppy: QUICK FOLLOW THAT CAR!
The Taxi drove off without Toppy.
Toppy: * To the viewers* It keeps them on their toes! Now on to the case.
The scene changes to Toppy standing in front of the manor where he starts narrating.
Toppy: * Narrating* I stand in front of the manor to check up on a case. I rang the doorbell, then out comes the butler.
Out comes Catherine dressed up as a maid.
Toppy: * Narrating* Whoops! My mistake the maid appears and she seems friendly enough.
Suddenly Catherine picked up Toppy and starts kissing him up.
Toppy: Maybe too friendly! * To Catherine* Cut it out I'm on a case.
Cahterine: But you are just so tiny and cute!
Toppy: Why am I cursed of being a cute little dinosaur? Okay sister why did you do it? * To the viewers* Aw skip it the suspicious sexy French maids are always innocent in these whodunits.
Catherine: Walk this way sir.
She walks on her tippy toes with her arms up in a prancing mode with Toppy copying her every movement.
Toppy: It ain't easy.
Catherine: The Madame will see you now.
Toppy enters into a living room as Catherine makes her exit.
Toppy: Okay nobody moves! I'm in charge here now then where's the body?
Woman's voice: Did ssssssssomeone asksssssssssssss for me?
The voice came from Madame Lilith a sexy snake woman as she smokes her cigarette holder and blows a heart shape smoke ring at Toppy.
Toppy: * To the viewers* Note the sexy suspicious suspect whom are just crazy for us hard boiled detective types. * To Lilith* Okay sister what did you do? Come clean now you dun it! Didn't you?
Madame Lilith gently coils her tail around Toppy and giving him a hug.
Madame Lilith: I didn't do anything Ssssssssweetie! I'm innocent! * Hugs Toppy closer* Do you hear me? Innocent!
Toppy: * To the viewers* THIS IS INNOCENT?!
Madame Lilith starts kissing Toppy.
Toppy: Quit it will you? Now then why did you do it? I Top Tracy know you did it.
Madame Lilith: I didn't do nothing Sssssssweetie.
Toppy: Don't play coy with me you slithering seductress. You got guilt written all over your face.
A close up on Lilith shows she does have the word "Guilt" written over her face.
Madame Lilith: Oh? * Starts applying face powder to her face*
Toppy: Yes you did and I know how! You and the maid hated the old goat but you loved his money so you needed him out of the way. But he's been suspicious of you two and when he confronted you about your evil plans what did you do?
Madame Lilith: Sssssssssearch me darling.
Toppy: Business before pleasure please Madame. * He goes over to Lilith's purse* You went over to your purse and pulled out your small handgun! * Pulls out a large gun from the purse and hands it to Madame Lilith* You were ready to take aim but he starts running and screaming. AHHHHH! Just when he thought he was free! He makes move but just as soon as he was in the doorway out of his den you took aim and FIRED!
Suddenly Madame Lilith starts shooting at Toppy hitting him making him walk back and forth like a shooting gallery target as numbers over the Den's entry way starts popping up on each hit from "1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, PRETTY GOOD SHOOTIN SISTER!"
Toppy: Yeah pretty good shootin, but not good enough he was still kicking! You did something didn't you?
Madame Lilith: You got me all wrong you little cutie pie!
Toppy: I know you did it! For I Top Tracy know you done it! No one gets a drop on Top Tracy.
The lights went out and suddenly kissing noises were heard in the darkness. The Madame Lilith turns the lights back on showing she had him coiled up in her tail, wearing his hat and Toppy was covered in kiss marks from Lilith.
Toppy: NOW CUT THAT OUT!
Later Madame Lilith and Cahterine are in the living room as Lilith is lounging on her lounge chair smoking as Catherine is next to Toppy as he is working on a rope and pulley lifting up a grand piano to the ceiling.
Toppy: UGH! URN! You two needed a plan to get rid of the geezer. So you two rigged up a trap to lure the poor slob to his doom. With the help of your maid you two set it up to lower the boom. * To Catherine* You malicious maid you!
Catherine: * Playfully pinch's Toppy's cheek* You little sweetie pie you!
Toppy: After setting up the trap all you two had to do was wait. * Hands the rope to Catherine* Here hold this.
Toppy goes over to the spot under the piano.
Catherine: I'll bet he looks cute in a bathing suit.
Madame Lilith: I'll bet he'sssssssssssss cute in any kind of ssssssssssssuitsssssss!
Toppy: You Madame using your art of seduction to lure the poor victim right here at this very spot for your trap and then you signal the maid to end him. DIDN'T YOU?!
The shock from Toppy frighted Catherine causing her to let go of the rope causing the piano to land on Toppy sending him down to the basement. He crawls out of from underneath the rubble with piano keys sticking to his teeth.
Later after Toppy healed up and is back up with Catherine and Lilith.
Toppy: He managed to escape from your trap but then you both remembered that the old man loves to watch the 3:15 train passing by the manor. So you two set the tracks to lead to the door.
He went outside to the railroad tracks and picks up the tracks and pulls them to the door and closes the door.
Toppy: Then it was the matter of time, he was a creature of habit he never misses his chance to watch the train. Then precisely at 3:15pm which is right now he opens the door and then...!
As he opens the door a train went right over Toppy. As soon as the cloud of dust settle Toppy is covered in train tracks with a train lantern hanging from his nose horn.
Toppy: SUNDAY DRIVER! It'll take more than that to scare me off this crime scene.
Madame Lilith: Crime? There isssssssssss no crime her ssssssssssweetheart!
Toppy: Then why was I summon here at Ivy Manor on 1313 Drive?
Catherine: * Giggles* Sir this isn't Ivy Manor this is Snake Manor!
Toppy: Wait? Snake Manor? This isn't the Ivy Manor?
Madame Lilith: Ssssssssilly little boy. The Ivy Manor is four manor'sssssssssssssss down the drive.
Toppy: Really? Then you two are innocent.
Madame Lilith: Uh-huh buster we're both guilty!
Catherine: Very guilty!
Toppy: * To the viewers* No crime committed and they're guilty! Well what are you two guilty of?
Catherine hugged her arms around Toppy as Madame Lilith coils her body around the both of them.
Cahterine/Madame Lilith: For being crazy for you!
Toppy: Uh-oh! I don't like the ball and chain looks in their eyes.
Close up of Lilith and Catherine shows that their pupils have turned into balls and chains. Then they both started smooching on Toppy.
Toppy: HEY QUIT IT! STOP! HOLD ON! I GOT HORNS I'LL USE'EM! HELP! OFFICER DOWN! MAYDAY!
The End.
Alice the dragon, Catherine and Jimmy Basil-lisk (all only in the story) and Madame Lilith and artwork by
jameartsToppy and story by me.
Please fave and post comments on original here https://www.furaffinity.net/view/54902503/
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