This is the last pony piece until I finish all the commissions. I will hopefully have them all done by the weekend
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Etoile had watched Speckle from the window, gathering sticks in the garden and getting into a right mess. The baby pony looked like she was working hard and concentrating even harder which was rare for Etoile to see. Most projects Speckle undertook lasted twenty minutes simply because of the baby's short attention span but Speckle had been hard at work for over an hour collecting up sticks and putting them into a pile.
It was getting cold outside and Etoile decided that Speckle would most certainly be needing a bath and so filled the tub and called Speckle indoors.
"Whhhaat?" Speckle whinned, annoyed that she had been interrupted in her task
"It's Bathtime Speckle. Just look at how muddy you are!"
Speckle shook her head causing little mud splatters to cover the floor around her.
"NOOOOO! IM BUSY" The firey determination in Speckles eyes mistified Etoile
"What are you busy doing little one?" the elder french pony asked
"I'm makin' my very own selbrayshun castul"
It took Etoile a moment to decipher what the baby had said behind her pacifier.
"Celebration castle? OOh. I see, out of...mud and sticks?"
The baby pony nodded her head eagerly and puffed out her chest proudly.
"Im gonna be a pinsess but yoo need lotsa sticks for a castul dontcha know. I have lots but I need moor to be a reel pinsess"
Etoile chuckled
"A princess huh. Well princesses don't normally look all muddy do they?"
Speckles nodded.
"Yep yep they do, I know lotsa pincesses, they are all muddy." Speckle hated bathtime and she had no intention of going in the tub, she was sure Etoile wouldn't know she was fibbing
Etoile eyed the pony thoughfully for a moment, letting the lies pass, there was no point forcing the baby into the tub, that would only cause a temper tantrum. Etoile just wanted a quiet life, and Speckles temper tantrums were always quite spectacularly loud. Etoile had an idea.
"Well princess castles are soo pretty and warm and lovely aren't they"
Speckle nodded happily.
"I dont know many castles made of sticks and mud. Do you Speckle?"
Speckle's ears flattened. It was true what etoile said but Speckle had no other things to make the castle out of.
Etoile could see the baby thinking and she smiled inwardly to herself.
"I will make you a deal." The older pony said
"If you are all clean and nice, I will give you all the towels I have and I will help you build a castle soo big and grand that even princess celestia herself will want to come to tea"
Speckles eyes grew big as saucers as she looked over at a purple towel laying waiting for her to get out of the bathtub. It looked so fluffy and warm, and purple was her favourite colour.
"YOO MEAN IT?" The baby squealed
Etoile had only managed half a nod before a wave of water cascaded over her as Speckle jumped into the bath.
Utterly drenched she sighed, she hadnt even had the opportunity to undress Speckle yet.
"Speckle, out of the bath please"
The look of confusion on Speckle's face was adorable but Etoile knew that this was going to be a long day.
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Etoile had watched Speckle from the window, gathering sticks in the garden and getting into a right mess. The baby pony looked like she was working hard and concentrating even harder which was rare for Etoile to see. Most projects Speckle undertook lasted twenty minutes simply because of the baby's short attention span but Speckle had been hard at work for over an hour collecting up sticks and putting them into a pile.
It was getting cold outside and Etoile decided that Speckle would most certainly be needing a bath and so filled the tub and called Speckle indoors.
"Whhhaat?" Speckle whinned, annoyed that she had been interrupted in her task
"It's Bathtime Speckle. Just look at how muddy you are!"
Speckle shook her head causing little mud splatters to cover the floor around her.
"NOOOOO! IM BUSY" The firey determination in Speckles eyes mistified Etoile
"What are you busy doing little one?" the elder french pony asked
"I'm makin' my very own selbrayshun castul"
It took Etoile a moment to decipher what the baby had said behind her pacifier.
"Celebration castle? OOh. I see, out of...mud and sticks?"
The baby pony nodded her head eagerly and puffed out her chest proudly.
"Im gonna be a pinsess but yoo need lotsa sticks for a castul dontcha know. I have lots but I need moor to be a reel pinsess"
Etoile chuckled
"A princess huh. Well princesses don't normally look all muddy do they?"
Speckles nodded.
"Yep yep they do, I know lotsa pincesses, they are all muddy." Speckle hated bathtime and she had no intention of going in the tub, she was sure Etoile wouldn't know she was fibbing
Etoile eyed the pony thoughfully for a moment, letting the lies pass, there was no point forcing the baby into the tub, that would only cause a temper tantrum. Etoile just wanted a quiet life, and Speckles temper tantrums were always quite spectacularly loud. Etoile had an idea.
"Well princess castles are soo pretty and warm and lovely aren't they"
Speckle nodded happily.
"I dont know many castles made of sticks and mud. Do you Speckle?"
Speckle's ears flattened. It was true what etoile said but Speckle had no other things to make the castle out of.
Etoile could see the baby thinking and she smiled inwardly to herself.
"I will make you a deal." The older pony said
"If you are all clean and nice, I will give you all the towels I have and I will help you build a castle soo big and grand that even princess celestia herself will want to come to tea"
Speckles eyes grew big as saucers as she looked over at a purple towel laying waiting for her to get out of the bathtub. It looked so fluffy and warm, and purple was her favourite colour.
"YOO MEAN IT?" The baby squealed
Etoile had only managed half a nod before a wave of water cascaded over her as Speckle jumped into the bath.
Utterly drenched she sighed, she hadnt even had the opportunity to undress Speckle yet.
"Speckle, out of the bath please"
The look of confusion on Speckle's face was adorable but Etoile knew that this was going to be a long day.
Category All / Baby fur
Species Horse
Gender Female
Size 640 x 627px
File Size 234.3 kB
I was secretly hoping this story would contain a sedimentation tank XD
You're really great at these picture/story combos. Speckle is so adorable, and I'm cracking up imagining what her "Castle" would have looked like
You're really great at these picture/story combos. Speckle is so adorable, and I'm cracking up imagining what her "Castle" would have looked like
Well the way she is covered in the pic is not a patch on how I was covered after THAT day at work. No exaggeration
Oh and her castle would have been an abombination but she would have seen it as the prettiest place ever. Still her castle made out of towels and cushions is going to be brilliant I already have a picture in my head waiting for the commissions to all be finished
I echo Micman's thoughts in how brilliant you are in putting together a fine combination of art and story. As your artistic talent is fairly strong, the combination is simply splendid as both pieces alone would be worth a view. However, the synergy of both is what makes this overall effort one-of-a-kind.
It shall be delightful to read how the rest of this story unfolds. Truly, I think you got the motherly attitude down pretty good with Etoile and Speckles' behavior definately is believable and, thus, easily imaginable as one reads the tale. Keep it up! :)
It shall be delightful to read how the rest of this story unfolds. Truly, I think you got the motherly attitude down pretty good with Etoile and Speckles' behavior definately is believable and, thus, easily imaginable as one reads the tale. Keep it up! :)
Fankyoo I am glad you're enjoying what i'm doing cause i'm enjoying doing it. So its a win win. I think I can write these well cause I put myself in speckles..hooves so to say and imagine how a good carer would respond to the situation, or how I would like the situation to be handled. When im feeling little I pretty much am speckle LOL
Yeah I am soo smitten with her at the moment, but yoo could prolly tell that hehe
Im really pleased with how this turned out with the exception of the mirror in the corner. The thing that actually took the longest was the towel LOL
very cute pic and very cute story. it can be hard writing a good story to a pic
I have a totally over reactive imagination that wanders all over the place so when I was actually drawing this I had the whole story playing in my head. So this was quite easy cause my head did all the work for me
Beware the cute things, they are always up to something mischevious
:D hehe I really do enjoy drawing etoile. I feel a little sorry for her, she doesnt get much peace and quiet
Lol thanks. And well, she doesn't mind it so much ^^. Speckle's too cute to get super annoyed with XD
Yeah lucky for her shes cute enough to get away with pretty much everything
Your work continues to stun me XD Please include a story with every submission, and I can die happy. Well, actually, I was already planning on that but it'll be a lleeeettle bit better. Also, the touches of the slur because of the pacifier were really nice! You did them in a way that wasn't annoying for once and was actually pretty cute. XD Nicely done!
The pony pieces will most certainly have stories attatched. Though I cant promise all my artwork will. Fankyoo for the compliments. I am really enjoying writing about Speckles adventures
Oh, well... either way, they're fantastic XD I'm glad you found something you're really happy with.
Yeah shes so kooky I love her to pieces, well not literally cause that would be bad, but I really like her lots
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