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Ive had this idea for some time and I though Id give it a try. This is just a quick 6 page beginning to a series I might or might not make. Plus this is a chance to play around with a VERY new writing style. I think it matches with the tone of the story.
The plot is that a young adult can create anything just by dreaming it. But he cant control his dreams so random things start to come into the real world and start to change it. So now he has to try and destroy all the things he dreamed and are now running around the world.
PLEASE tell me what you think!
Warning: There is some "inappropriate language" but not too much.
The plot is that a young adult can create anything just by dreaming it. But he cant control his dreams so random things start to come into the real world and start to change it. So now he has to try and destroy all the things he dreamed and are now running around the world.
PLEASE tell me what you think!
Warning: There is some "inappropriate language" but not too much.
Category Story / Miscellaneous
Species Housecat
Gender Male
Size 120 x 64px
File Size 255 kB
Oh geez we can only imagine what he will create. I hope he is prepared hehe :)
Why thank you! And thanks for the Fav. Yeah Ill probably work on this when Im bored with Dyose. Which I am right now.
Oh huh, Look at that. Sorry, I used another map with photoshope and I guess it got cut out when I was moving everything around...
Oh huh, Look at that. Sorry, I used another map with photoshope and I guess it got cut out when I was moving everything around...
That works for me.
Oh Im sorry. Next time Ill be sure not to leave any land masses out of my maps. XD
Oh Im sorry. Next time Ill be sure not to leave any land masses out of my maps. XD
Perhaps you excist in another dimension and the web is a bridge between the two planes of reality! Mind = blown.
Maybe there's a replica of the guy and he made everyone anthros anyway!
We can only hope! But then again I dont know about a whole new continent.
Well I bet thats what HE thought before he changed the planet! You never know whats going to happen!
Ah science takes the fun out of everything. We still dont know a c*** load of stuff about the universe. For all we know we're part of a big video game and maybe the player will change us! You never know!
Again I apologize! I got most of the map of the web so I had o edit it!
Again I apologize! I got most of the map of the web so I had o edit it!
ah screw science! We should just eat sweets all day! That would make everything better! Not to mention get our mind of answerless philospy!
Again! I sorry! What can I do to prove it to you?
Again! I sorry! What can I do to prove it to you?
Ah theres a very easy cure for toothaches. Sweets!
Uh.... I could say Im sorry.
Uh.... I could say Im sorry.
For me at least!
Will do captain! I dont know how many more awesome worlds Ill make though.
uhh.... Probably not.
Will do captain! I dont know how many more awesome worlds Ill make though.
uhh.... Probably not.
I strongy recommend it strongly!
Dont you worry. Youre always welcome in my furry world!
Worken' on other junk.
Dont you worry. Youre always welcome in my furry world!
Worken' on other junk.
You must! It is 100% proven to work some of the time!
I got it! See when you were at a furcon in the US the UK got deleted! You ARE in my furry world!
Indeed. Plus a soccer jersey for history.
I got it! See when you were at a furcon in the US the UK got deleted! You ARE in my furry world!
Indeed. Plus a soccer jersey for history.
I dunno. Probably >.>
I KNOWS! While at the furcon some guy in a fursuit gives you 10000000000000000 pounds! You can buy a house and never have to work again!
The uniform for soccer playes? BTW: As a Brit, would you be offended if I put the picture of a centaur on my jersey? If the centuars body is a loin and the top is Queen Elizabeth?
I KNOWS! While at the furcon some guy in a fursuit gives you 10000000000000000 pounds! You can buy a house and never have to work again!
The uniform for soccer playes? BTW: As a Brit, would you be offended if I put the picture of a centaur on my jersey? If the centuars body is a loin and the top is Queen Elizabeth?
Uhh...... You live a nice happy life with lots of adventures?
Well I havent told my teacher what Im doing yet but I want to say that the brits wont be offended if I do it.
Well I havent told my teacher what Im doing yet but I want to say that the brits wont be offended if I do it.
All of them. But dont worry, you'll live through them all.
True. Plus my stereotypical accent will probably be more offensive.
True. Plus my stereotypical accent will probably be more offensive.
Here let me help.
Step 1: Go live life!
Step 3.4544: Make me a sandwich!
I have no idea what the bloody hell your talkin' about govner! Blimy I would never dare hurt the Queen's English no I wouldnt no sir! Not in my proper mind!
I have no idea,
Step 1: Go live life!
Step 3.4544: Make me a sandwich!
I have no idea what the bloody hell your talkin' about govner! Blimy I would never dare hurt the Queen's English no I wouldnt no sir! Not in my proper mind!
I have no idea,
Because sandwiches are awesome? Duh?
Anything without the meat.
HEY! That was a spot on impersonation! I bet I could go to britain and no one would know Im american!
I didnt decide to rename it! I think football makes a lot more sense!
Anything without the meat.
HEY! That was a spot on impersonation! I bet I could go to britain and no one would know Im american!
I didnt decide to rename it! I think football makes a lot more sense!
Hey you're the one who disdnt know why I wanted a sandwich!
Its all part of the plan!
Insult me all you want you bloody bloke!
Oh, well our school is a little different. Somehow we were meant to learn about the british colonies by planning an interesting game of soccer.
Then it should be feetball!
Its all part of the plan!
Insult me all you want you bloody bloke!
Oh, well our school is a little different. Somehow we were meant to learn about the british colonies by planning an interesting game of soccer.
Then it should be feetball!
Well you should already know!
THE plan
Oi! Dont you call me dude ya daft yanker!
But have you tried playing soccer with only one foot? Its harder than kicking with two feet!
Oh the truth that man speaks.
THE plan
Oi! Dont you call me dude ya daft yanker!
But have you tried playing soccer with only one foot? Its harder than kicking with two feet!
Oh the truth that man speaks.
Nope. Its not. Now hurry up on that sandwich!
I highly object to your barbarain way of speaking you twot!
But you use two to run!
He should be president of everything. The world would be a lot better.
I highly object to your barbarain way of speaking you twot!
But you use two to run!
He should be president of everything. The world would be a lot better.
I told you! Its part of your training!
... Do fairies eat cheese? Anyway. I dear me I seem to of misplaced a letter in the word that I etched down!
TWO TO RUN! You do more running than kicking!
Ah yes bicycle repair man.An somewhat odd sketch from the gang but still funny none the less.
... Do fairies eat cheese? Anyway. I dear me I seem to of misplaced a letter in the word that I etched down!
TWO TO RUN! You do more running than kicking!
Ah yes bicycle repair man.An somewhat odd sketch from the gang but still funny none the less.
I would never do that. Maybe.
Sense that does make,
I was speaking like a proper gentleman! Something an uncultured person like you would never understand!
But you can score if you just stand around the field! Then it would be boring! But running doesnt have a ball and excitement now does it?
I actually saw him live in his last tour thingie. Pretty funny.
Sense that does make,
I was speaking like a proper gentleman! Something an uncultured person like you would never understand!
But you can score if you just stand around the field! Then it would be boring! But running doesnt have a ball and excitement now does it?
I actually saw him live in his last tour thingie. Pretty funny.
Im not excatly sure. I cant predict the future you know.
I am all wise with the force! And the force is telling me that you need to take a shower.
Weren't you already doing that? Oh dear me you disheveled man, you have neglected what you were even doing!
But how do you get to the ball so that you can kick it? Not by kicking!
Like last year or something.
I am all wise with the force! And the force is telling me that you need to take a shower.
Weren't you already doing that? Oh dear me you disheveled man, you have neglected what you were even doing!
But how do you get to the ball so that you can kick it? Not by kicking!
Like last year or something.
but I cant control my own fate!
Now you're talking like a brit. Oh sure! First you all complain that we never enter any wars but when we start our own you complain all the time!
I dont know if you play soccer standing perfectly still but over here we move around with our feet!
Now you're talking like a brit. Oh sure! First you all complain that we never enter any wars but when we start our own you complain all the time!
I dont know if you play soccer standing perfectly still but over here we move around with our feet!
But what if its my fate to do something unpredictable?!
Hey! Well maybe we shouldnt have anymore wars! That means you'll be screwed the next to germany comes to kick yer arses!
But you use you hands for everything else so if we followed your rules basketball would be handball! Which is already a sport!
Hey! Well maybe we shouldnt have anymore wars! That means you'll be screwed the next to germany comes to kick yer arses!
But you use you hands for everything else so if we followed your rules basketball would be handball! Which is already a sport!
But what if its my fate to escape my fate?
Thats what you guys thought after WW1, and nothing bad happened after that right?
Oh giving up then are we? Well I guess since you backed down we all know who the winner is!
Thats what you guys thought after WW1, and nothing bad happened after that right?
Oh giving up then are we? Well I guess since you backed down we all know who the winner is!
oblivion is purple? I though oblivion was empty so it would e black. Or actually white becuase thats where all the things deleted on computors go.
So we should stay out of wars... Unless when they involve Europe?
...... Whut?
So we should stay out of wars... Unless when they involve Europe?
...... Whut?
The void might be purple however.
.......... DONT TELL ME WHAT TO DO YOU FILTHY COMMUNIST!!!!
.......... DONT TELL ME WHAT TO DO YOU FILTHY COMMUNIST!!!!
?
Simple! You told me what to do! I dont know about over their in Soviet Britain! But this is a free country!
Simple! You told me what to do! I dont know about over their in Soviet Britain! But this is a free country!
Oh..... Well if you say so.
If that were true 35% of everyone would be dead right now.
If that were true 35% of everyone would be dead right now.
.... Im so confuzzled....
you're right! I should be shooting people in the face right now!
you're right! I should be shooting people in the face right now!
uuhhh.... Socks are good!
Oh please. Guns are so overrated. Theres no way I would use one for rampage!
Oh please. Guns are so overrated. Theres no way I would use one for rampage!
No no they're real in the sense that thhey're not real. But they're socks for you paws! duh!
No no no no no no. Its called Rikux's 100% organic bloody carnage on a stick!
No no no no no no. Its called Rikux's 100% organic bloody carnage on a stick!
Are you for real?
Almost but mines still better. And anyone who says differently will be seen by Rikux's 100% organic bloody carnage on a stick
Almost but mines still better. And anyone who says differently will be seen by Rikux's 100% organic bloody carnage on a stick
No really! Its real in the sense that itws not real!
Hey! No! Rikux's 100% organic bloody carnage on a stick does not do favors!
Hey! No! Rikux's 100% organic bloody carnage on a stick does not do favors!
hhmmm... I suppose. Or maybe it cold be an optional feature.
It only says your name
It only says your name
Hmm.... I suppose I could! I could start my own furry shoe line!
*grabs list* It still just says your name
*grabs list* It still just says your name
Engand? Whats that?
... Its still just has your name.... wait a minute.....
... Its still just has your name.... wait a minute.....
Exactly! I dont think anyone knows what engand is... But back to this Britain thing.... No idea what that is.... Is it a breakfast dish?
Nope. I think this is the right list.
Nope. I think this is the right list.
Wait wait wait.... Who am I talking to?
I drew something! You dont even know!
I drew something! You dont even know!
that is quiet a crazy world, but the way he is telling the story is as if he somehow made a way onto our world XP
Now he just was normal kid. You found out he can twist the fabric of space and time. Average.
And thanks for the Fav!
And thanks for the Fav!
That's a very interesting and new take on writing! But I just want to point out (the little nitpicker in me likes to do that :p) that with the sort of lazy grammar sentence structure wise and all the different effects heaped on sort of randomly, it looks a bit like a kid discovering all he can do on Word. No offence, but it doesn't look too "professional", if you see what I mean.
On the other hand, putting bits and pieces of those effects here and there in a story at key points would really add to the realism and 'cool' factor of a story! If you really developed this, you could make an awesome story even with just average material, simply because you 'spiced it up' so to speak :p I'm really looking forward to see what you're going to do next! :p
On the other hand, putting bits and pieces of those effects here and there in a story at key points would really add to the realism and 'cool' factor of a story! If you really developed this, you could make an awesome story even with just average material, simply because you 'spiced it up' so to speak :p I'm really looking forward to see what you're going to do next! :p
I see what you mean. I try to make the grammer not so great becuase the guy telling it isnt probably the biggest fan of grammer. But yes what I see about the font changes. Maybe I should limite them.
If you want to make it seem like he's not that good at grammar, try instead to do some mistakes in sentence structure, and/or limit the mistakes to when he speaks. Grammar mistakes in the text is just painful to the reader, it doesn't do much else.
Hmm I guess it makes sense. Are you sure thats just not because you're a Grammar Hitler Youth?
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