Too Much Trouble for One Day - Colson's contest winning entr
Here's something that I wrote to a guitar track that colson provided
The strumming you hear is what he gave us as a prompt. Everything else was done by myself. Do you like? So did he! I've been featured as one of the top 3 submitted entries and now I'm on the album. Check it out here! http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4719122
Lyrics:
if you find it, gotta let it go
for cheap containment, I can barely swallow
if you want it, let it grow
for my entertainment, put me on your show
acidic liquid on his skin
won’t melt away the shroud of anger
one made of wood, one salty grin
we have to let him know that it was
too much trouble for one day
it breeds from this,
faith shatters on the solid walls
expressions of a learned helplessness
the pain scraped from bliss,
another empty metaphor surrounds
a frightened soul expressionless
acidic liquid on his skin
won’t melt away the shroud of anger
one made of wood, one salty grin
we have to let him know that it was
too much trouble for one day
oh
this is the part where everything starts, can I find another rhyme to keep emotion moving closer can I stop, go, lemme know, does it make your heart glow, find it then you rip then you never let it out no.
acidic liquid on his skin
won’t melt away the shroud of anger
one made of wood, one salty grin
we have to let him know that it was
too much trouble for one day
The strumming you hear is what he gave us as a prompt. Everything else was done by myself. Do you like? So did he! I've been featured as one of the top 3 submitted entries and now I'm on the album. Check it out here! http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4719122
Lyrics:
if you find it, gotta let it go
for cheap containment, I can barely swallow
if you want it, let it grow
for my entertainment, put me on your show
acidic liquid on his skin
won’t melt away the shroud of anger
one made of wood, one salty grin
we have to let him know that it was
too much trouble for one day
it breeds from this,
faith shatters on the solid walls
expressions of a learned helplessness
the pain scraped from bliss,
another empty metaphor surrounds
a frightened soul expressionless
acidic liquid on his skin
won’t melt away the shroud of anger
one made of wood, one salty grin
we have to let him know that it was
too much trouble for one day
oh
this is the part where everything starts, can I find another rhyme to keep emotion moving closer can I stop, go, lemme know, does it make your heart glow, find it then you rip then you never let it out no.
acidic liquid on his skin
won’t melt away the shroud of anger
one made of wood, one salty grin
we have to let him know that it was
too much trouble for one day
Category Music / Rock
Species Canine (Other)
Gender Male
Size 120 x 98px
File Size 4.53 MB
Very cute Pep!! :D Well done! :D I'm sure he'll like it very much. x
HAHAHA well that's the first time I've gotten "cute' as a comment, but thank you! X3
and yeah I hope so
and yeah I hope so
Well in my humble opinion it is cute. I like it. :) hahaha. I just like the word cute X3!
Your voice really suits this kind of genre. You should have set your theme to country, not rock. It sounds brilliant . From the sound of it (in my opinion anyway), it's going to be very close running between you and Lily (unless Colson chooses both tracks). You're both so good. I can't wait to hear the final results
AH! I didn't know lilly did it! crap she's really good X3
thank you very much!
thank you very much!
Honestly? I can't wait to hear it live without all the harmony parts, one pepper is enough X3
Hehe, I suppose most of my bands that i like only have one vocalist, which makes me feel like they're talking to me rather than singing... I guess it's easier to connect to a single vocal line, though i can't go past an amazing harmony either X3
Damn you're good. I have great respect for you for being able to pull this off. :D
wow... fantastic! thank you so much. That really means alot, and that makes me feel great <3
thank you! I figured everyone would expect "oh here's the slow part" so I threw in some realy fast jabbering ^^
hrmm sounds more like classic rock with some folk influences
YOU SIR are absolutely correct!
That's totally what i'm going for and what I like!
and now I like you. thank you
That's totally what i'm going for and what I like!
and now I like you. thank you
enjoyed your rendition. i think your warm voice fits it nicely. I get a very "earthy" feel, if that makes any sense. accoustic guitars, leather, good ol' boys pickin and singin on haybales. :P
Thank you!
The biggest thing that I miss about old school country and bluegrass is the harmonies. Those tight, close chords just make me smile.
see "The statler brothers"
The biggest thing that I miss about old school country and bluegrass is the harmonies. Those tight, close chords just make me smile.
see "The statler brothers"
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And I like your evaluations.
I whipped this thing out in a day and was shocked that I was among the chosen to be on the album. Made me pretty happy ^^
And I like your evaluations.
I whipped this thing out in a day and was shocked that I was among the chosen to be on the album. Made me pretty happy ^^
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