These are the kind of PMD stories I love to see.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I've got a project under work currently about this PMD universe~

I remembered the story and it's great you added a continuation to it.
Know that I would beg for part 3, hope you got one planned... not to sound pushy. :I

I've got something being worked on!

Great, I'll await the "something".
Also, big fan of Sky 😉 (sidenote). Has nothing to do with the story, but has to be said!

I appreciate that!~ Both for the story and for Sky, she is quite a cutie!

Awesome story! Can't wait to see what comes of the regressed guild leader! Also, the Riolu was super cute and supportive of his mean friend, and I love it.

Alright, I now read this one as well. I will say that I liked the first one a bit more, but this one still brought forth some ideas that I find interesting.

I'll start with the negatives this time, as there's some more I want to say there.

First off, I find the first scene to be rather odd. I think describing the crowd as "gasping" wasn't very good, since I believe that indicates surprise, while I think the guild would be more angry in this situation as they know that diaper traps are exclusive to this region and he's from the outside, and because the things he was saying was anger-inducing. I think some lines like "Oh just piss off" | "Sure, I'll go to the toilet to piss, unlike you" would have been more fitting. And then the guildmaster's proposal. I mean the traps were shown as being hard to avoid, but entirely impossible to avoid? The previous one felt like it was Pikachu's fault that he got caught, instead of an inevitability (Pikachu also didn't get a warning on it, if it's apparently unavoidable).

Then I found the scene between Ivysaur and Rio to be rather exposition-y and blunt. I think it would be better if Riolu said something like "Are you freaking kidding me?! You pissed another guild? What is this, the forth guild you've angered? Do you have any idea what you're doing? We're never going to get work again at this rate." Something like that.

Last negative thing is more of a nitpick, but there seems to be a plot hole where Ivysaur said the statue was to "scare off people going after their diaper source", when he didn't believe in the diaper traps at that time. At first I was going to say there was a more major plot hole where there wouldn't have been a way for Pikachu and Vulpix to beat Ivysaur and Riolu to the dungeon, but after some reflection, the timeline makes sense if the first pikachu scene takes place before the first riolu scene.

Okay, now onto positives. The reflection in the crystals in a genuinely unique concept that I haven't seen before and was not expecting, showing that you're continuing to use concepts that can stand on their own outside of a diaper story. The world building feels like it's just the right amount to introduce enough interesting ideas that make the world seem more alive and get me interesting, while not introducing too many things that the world building bogs down the story and makes things unravel (because let's be honest, when you have weird concepts like this, you're going to reach a point where you figure out why this world doesn't really make sense if you flesh it out more and more). Then the age regression is a good mystery that adds some real suspense to the characters, making me happy to see what's next.

Keep up the good work, I'll be there to read the next installment this gets.