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After months of work and internet digging, Kyle has finally tracked down what he's desired most of his young life. However, as he stands at the precipice, second thoughts percolate and he starts to wonder what the night holds for him.
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Category Story / Transformation
Species Fox (Other)
Gender Male
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 113.7 kB
There's no way I've ever seen someone use the fact that a character's grasp on humanity is often represented by the appearance of their eyes as a reason to TF someone in a specific way before. What a neat (and terrifying) motive!
Thank you very much. That detail was the original inspiration I wanted to get down and the rest of the story grew from there. Definitely took some time to develop, but I'm pretty happy with how it turned out.
This is extraordinary. There's such an atmosphere of calculated dread in your dialogue. I love the way you play with Kyle's vocabulary and word usage as time goes on. Just marvelous!
Thank you very much for the compliments, glad you enjoyed the story.
There aren't enough fox tfs. I'd love to see one where a witch tfs a boy into a fox pet or something.
I tend to write more fan fiction than anything.
That wasn't a demand, and I hope I didn't come across as rude. It was simply an observation and a comment.
That wasn't a demand, and I hope I didn't come across as rude. It was simply an observation and a comment.
Not at all, I was genuinely suggesting you give it a shot yourself. Sometimes the only way to get the stories we want is to write them.
I believe in you.
I believe in you.
Oh man that's an awesome twist ending. And how you get it across through subtext without ever explicitly stating it is so expertly done.
Thank you very much for the compliments. I tend to be a very experiential writer, so like to express things through sensations and feelings. Glad you enjoyed it.
The last few sentences of describing Kyle's perception of events is uber surreal, and this approach to ??? I seriously seriously found fascinating!
Thank you very much. I don't usually write ???, but that sensory feeling sat in my head until I put it all into words. Glad you enjoyed it.
I really love the way you wrote the mental shift from human to fox here. Like the human memories and needs still being there, but having to push progressively harder to get a foothold against their instincts. That mental change is one of my favorite things to read in a TF ^^
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I like to explore different ways for mental TF to happen, and in this case, it felt akin to a tense muscle that gets harder to keep flexed the longer you hold it and heavier the weight gets.
Well, you wrote it very well then, because that's exactly how it came across in the story ^^
Sure, you can think those human thoughts, but it's so much work! It's a lot easier to just let those vulpine instincts guide you.
Sure, you can think those human thoughts, but it's so much work! It's a lot easier to just let those vulpine instincts guide you.
Thanks again, I really appreciate the kind words.
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