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Sorry bout the lack of quality and usual quickness of projects. I actually intended to finish this right on Valentine's day but yeah, the power went out for a week lol. Regardless I'm back in the saddle with this and I hope yall like my ""comic""
Plz do take the time to read over my horrible writing so you can understand the ""comic""
pt. 2 continuation sketch pic here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/41900298/
story:
“Honey, I’m home!” Kay called out into the apartment, taking off and placing her wet jacket on the rack after the familiar klack-klack of her hooves on the hardwood floor “It started raining, so our reservation got moved inside. But they moved us inside so we should probably get moving”
She winced as the slow-moving door slammed shut behind her. “John? Sweetie?” Worryingly she looked around what she could see into the apartment while her radar dish-like ears scanned the area.
As her mouth opened to call out for her fiancée turned the corner and collided with her body. His smaller stature landing his head right into her bust.
She recoiled slightly in surprise “O-oh! Alright, there I see you’ve had a long day I’ll give you some time while I get ready.” She rubbed his back slightly, listening and feeling his body. She sighed, leaning into his hug slightly. “Yeah it's okay, I’ll see you in the car in 10 honey”
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Kay settled into her seat, staring off into the blankness thinking to herself about dinner. That was until her ears swiveled to the car door opening and closing. She shook herself awake slightly and sat up straight, this was a special night after all.
John opened the car door, slowly getting in while wearing exactly what he was wearing earlier. His rusty gingerish hair was ruffled beyond belief as if he rolled around in a felt carpet.
Kay tipped her head to one side, a little confused at his appearance but worried for his sake nonetheless. She started the car before John stirred slightly. “I got diagnosed, got the info right before you left with the girls.” He grunted, sitting back and staring at the car roof.
She looked over to him letting the car idle “Really?” She gulped, this is why he seemed odd when she got home, why he didn't talk nor did what he usually did.
“It isn't terminal, is it?” She asked, leaning in slightly
She saw him clench his fist, hair covering up his face“No, but it's at a point where not even the doctors know what it is.” He said right before slamming his fist into the glovebox, hitting the car with full force.
“I just wanted to live a normal fuckin’ life, not die in some hospital bed before I.. Before I..” He breathed, freaking out each time he took in and released a breath. Kay took her hand and moved it around his back, comforting him the best she could. It seemed to work as he went from an angry posture to just a frightened ball of anguish.
“I didn't want this, I didn't ask for this. I..” He covered his face with his hands. “Is it even worth it to live like this? I mean everything's downhill from here I'm just a husk of wh-”
“John” She moved closer, her hand creeping up to his neck and her eyes fixated on his figure
“I’m just a husk, that's all I am or ever will be. Now I'm going to drag you down and”
“John!” She raised her voice, getting his attention while she leaned towards him best she could. “You're not alone in this, I'm going to stick with you through this the entire way. Neither are you a husk.”
He stayed silent, peering through his fingers to look at the concerned deer, tears streaming down his face as the rain began to pick up, the sun setting under the clouds.
“I.. You’re…”
By now her hand had reached the back of his head, she moved him towards her and her towards him “Hush, cry into me.” She took him in closer “We’re both in this same boat and I want you close to me when you get like this. Share it with me okay?” She looked down as he unwrapped, his hand moving to hers and his grief stricken head moving to face hers. Their eyes locked and their lips met.
She pulled away after pulling away her mouth from his. As awkward as it was to kiss him it worked perfectly, him leaning into her chest
“It’s okay to feel the way you’re feeling right now but you need to think straight and breathe.” She moved back a little, brushing her hand through his hair and locking her eyes to his.
She peered into his somber eyes with her gaze. “Tell you what, we’ll have a self care week just the two of us. You don't have to battle this alone.” She moved her hand to brush around his cheek, letting his skin rub against her soft fur.
Continuing to caress the small human she broke the silence “I’ll end the reservation and cancel, we can just nap for today. You want me to carry you inside?” She blinked, waiting for a response as the human sat there still rubbing her hand like a lost child
He looked outside to the pouring rain then again to her “Yeah, that sounds good Kay. I love you” he said, tears falling again
She blinked, eyes watering she planted a kiss on his cheek. “I love you too” She said, opening the car door and walking to his.
Plz do take the time to read over my horrible writing so you can understand the ""comic""
pt. 2 continuation sketch pic here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/41900298/
story:
“Honey, I’m home!” Kay called out into the apartment, taking off and placing her wet jacket on the rack after the familiar klack-klack of her hooves on the hardwood floor “It started raining, so our reservation got moved inside. But they moved us inside so we should probably get moving”
She winced as the slow-moving door slammed shut behind her. “John? Sweetie?” Worryingly she looked around what she could see into the apartment while her radar dish-like ears scanned the area.
As her mouth opened to call out for her fiancée turned the corner and collided with her body. His smaller stature landing his head right into her bust.
She recoiled slightly in surprise “O-oh! Alright, there I see you’ve had a long day I’ll give you some time while I get ready.” She rubbed his back slightly, listening and feeling his body. She sighed, leaning into his hug slightly. “Yeah it's okay, I’ll see you in the car in 10 honey”
----
Kay settled into her seat, staring off into the blankness thinking to herself about dinner. That was until her ears swiveled to the car door opening and closing. She shook herself awake slightly and sat up straight, this was a special night after all.
John opened the car door, slowly getting in while wearing exactly what he was wearing earlier. His rusty gingerish hair was ruffled beyond belief as if he rolled around in a felt carpet.
Kay tipped her head to one side, a little confused at his appearance but worried for his sake nonetheless. She started the car before John stirred slightly. “I got diagnosed, got the info right before you left with the girls.” He grunted, sitting back and staring at the car roof.
She looked over to him letting the car idle “Really?” She gulped, this is why he seemed odd when she got home, why he didn't talk nor did what he usually did.
“It isn't terminal, is it?” She asked, leaning in slightly
She saw him clench his fist, hair covering up his face“No, but it's at a point where not even the doctors know what it is.” He said right before slamming his fist into the glovebox, hitting the car with full force.
“I just wanted to live a normal fuckin’ life, not die in some hospital bed before I.. Before I..” He breathed, freaking out each time he took in and released a breath. Kay took her hand and moved it around his back, comforting him the best she could. It seemed to work as he went from an angry posture to just a frightened ball of anguish.
“I didn't want this, I didn't ask for this. I..” He covered his face with his hands. “Is it even worth it to live like this? I mean everything's downhill from here I'm just a husk of wh-”
“John” She moved closer, her hand creeping up to his neck and her eyes fixated on his figure
“I’m just a husk, that's all I am or ever will be. Now I'm going to drag you down and”
“John!” She raised her voice, getting his attention while she leaned towards him best she could. “You're not alone in this, I'm going to stick with you through this the entire way. Neither are you a husk.”
He stayed silent, peering through his fingers to look at the concerned deer, tears streaming down his face as the rain began to pick up, the sun setting under the clouds.
“I.. You’re…”
By now her hand had reached the back of his head, she moved him towards her and her towards him “Hush, cry into me.” She took him in closer “We’re both in this same boat and I want you close to me when you get like this. Share it with me okay?” She looked down as he unwrapped, his hand moving to hers and his grief stricken head moving to face hers. Their eyes locked and their lips met.
She pulled away after pulling away her mouth from his. As awkward as it was to kiss him it worked perfectly, him leaning into her chest
“It’s okay to feel the way you’re feeling right now but you need to think straight and breathe.” She moved back a little, brushing her hand through his hair and locking her eyes to his.
She peered into his somber eyes with her gaze. “Tell you what, we’ll have a self care week just the two of us. You don't have to battle this alone.” She moved her hand to brush around his cheek, letting his skin rub against her soft fur.
Continuing to caress the small human she broke the silence “I’ll end the reservation and cancel, we can just nap for today. You want me to carry you inside?” She blinked, waiting for a response as the human sat there still rubbing her hand like a lost child
He looked outside to the pouring rain then again to her “Yeah, that sounds good Kay. I love you” he said, tears falling again
She blinked, eyes watering she planted a kiss on his cheek. “I love you too” She said, opening the car door and walking to his.
Category Artwork (Digital) / All
Species Cervine (Other)
Gender Any
Size 5217 x 4000px
File Size 7.87 MB
Listed in Folders
Damn fine work. Loved what you made, and honestly, your writing isn't even horrible.
Can't wait for your next comic idea!
Can't wait for your next comic idea!
Beautiful. I may love macro fluffy girls and tiny humans, but slightly larger furry girls in relationships with humans is also such a cute thing. <3
Absolutely wonderful and it actually made me feel sad/tear up a bit...
I hope to see more works from you, perhaps an eventual continuation of Deer and human.... Maybe their wedding day!
I hope to see more works from you, perhaps an eventual continuation of Deer and human.... Maybe their wedding day!
Aww, this is so cute, I love seeing humans and anthros in love <3 I like seeing them cuddle and kiss :3
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