This is part 2 of a 2 part image/story.
Link for part 1:
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/39078653/
— Wake up, Cassie. No need to hurry.
She opened her eyes slowly. Cassie was lying on the bed and had quite the headache. Her body felt weird and tired. She also had a strong sensation that she’d done something extremely shameful but couldn’t remember what it was.
— What happened?
— It worked.
— What worked?
— The hypnosis.
— I don't remember anything — she sat on the bed — I was in the living room. I slept. Now I’m here in the bed.
— We played fetch. I gave you belly rubs. You barked a lot. We even walked outside while you were wearing a leash.
— No! It can't be!
— Well... I made up the last part.
— If that’s true, even if I don’t remember it, now is time for you to pay! — she jumped on Tyler and kissed him, while forcefully taking down his pants — You will be my dog now.
— Hey! It’s still Tyler’s day! — he tried holding his pants, but she was stronger than him.
— I don't care! — she pinned him against the sheets and took down his underwear too — you played me, now I’ll play with you.
— Don’t force me to do it, Cassie!
— Do what?
— Good girl, come back!
Her mind went blank...
Her body puffed with fur...
A tail grew on her back...
Her snout got longer…
Her ears got sharper…
Hands and feet became soft paws...
— Woof!
— Good girl.
— I'm back! Master called and I'm back! — she jumped on him like a dog happy to see her owner come back home and started licking him — I missed you!
— I missed you too.
— Why is Master naked?
— Because Cassie was playing with me.
— She's bad! She doesn't treat master well!
— That is true, but I also like being played with. Just like you do.
— Yes... But master never harms me! You could, but you don't. That's why I love master. If master wants, he can do whatever he pleases with me — she pressed her snout against his nose and licked him.
— I have other plans for you tonight — he smirked.
— Is master gonna abuse me in a gentle way? — she started panting.
Tyler hugged her from behind and spooned over her soft fluffy body.
— I just need a cute company to sleep with me tonight.
— I love you master! — she rubbed her face against his cheek.
— I love you too, good girl.
Silence...
— Cassie is telling me to bite you.
— Ignore her. It’s Tyler’s day — he hugged her even more — She can bite me tomorrow.
Link for part 1:
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/39078653/
— Wake up, Cassie. No need to hurry.
She opened her eyes slowly. Cassie was lying on the bed and had quite the headache. Her body felt weird and tired. She also had a strong sensation that she’d done something extremely shameful but couldn’t remember what it was.
— What happened?
— It worked.
— What worked?
— The hypnosis.
— I don't remember anything — she sat on the bed — I was in the living room. I slept. Now I’m here in the bed.
— We played fetch. I gave you belly rubs. You barked a lot. We even walked outside while you were wearing a leash.
— No! It can't be!
— Well... I made up the last part.
— If that’s true, even if I don’t remember it, now is time for you to pay! — she jumped on Tyler and kissed him, while forcefully taking down his pants — You will be my dog now.
— Hey! It’s still Tyler’s day! — he tried holding his pants, but she was stronger than him.
— I don't care! — she pinned him against the sheets and took down his underwear too — you played me, now I’ll play with you.
— Don’t force me to do it, Cassie!
— Do what?
— Good girl, come back!
Her mind went blank...
Her body puffed with fur...
A tail grew on her back...
Her snout got longer…
Her ears got sharper…
Hands and feet became soft paws...
— Woof!
— Good girl.
— I'm back! Master called and I'm back! — she jumped on him like a dog happy to see her owner come back home and started licking him — I missed you!
— I missed you too.
— Why is Master naked?
— Because Cassie was playing with me.
— She's bad! She doesn't treat master well!
— That is true, but I also like being played with. Just like you do.
— Yes... But master never harms me! You could, but you don't. That's why I love master. If master wants, he can do whatever he pleases with me — she pressed her snout against his nose and licked him.
— I have other plans for you tonight — he smirked.
— Is master gonna abuse me in a gentle way? — she started panting.
Tyler hugged her from behind and spooned over her soft fluffy body.
— I just need a cute company to sleep with me tonight.
— I love you master! — she rubbed her face against his cheek.
— I love you too, good girl.
Silence...
— Cassie is telling me to bite you.
— Ignore her. It’s Tyler’s day — he hugged her even more — She can bite me tomorrow.
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It's a good thing she became a dog.
The hypnosis would be a complete failure if she ended a cat instead.
The hypnosis would be a complete failure if she ended a cat instead.
This one is also kind of awesome. You're a pretty good writer. I guess in this case the hypnosis has the actual power to alter one's body unlike the other one with the guy being turned into the cat-girl at the party.
It seems like this one has a lot of potential for further parts though. For instance
1. Her human form - dominant personality doesn't believe his claims of what was done to her, because she doesn't remember it, and as proof, he changes her to the dog form and asks the submissive one this time when she switches, to not change her body back to human, so when the dominant personality returns she is astonished to find she is now a dog-girl. Having proved his claims, but not wanting to antagonize her that hard, he's about to switch her again so as to change her back, but she stops him, and wants to try enjoying her new body now that she's calm and collected about it, which she does, and from then on, she spends much of her time as a dog-girl regardless of which personality is active. Flash forward to 3 years later, and they have 23 kids, all of them dog-people, and she's pregnant again with a litter of 6 more and he's saying to himself "what have I done".
2. The two personalities start to merge and cease to be separate people, until eventually she is not 2 separate people at all and being given the codewords only changes her body and not her mind, and her personality is not extreme in either direction, but is more sensible. She then convinces him to let himself be put under her control so she can change him physically too, and he teaches her how to do this, and he gains a haughty dominant cat-man alternate personality (temporarily, with the implication that probably his two personalities will eventually merge as well).
3. Rather than merging, they eventually literally physically split into two separate bodies..... but the wrong one is the dog-girl! What's more, further attempts at hypnosis to fix this is completely ineffective. So the original dominant personality who sees herself as human has to deal with now permanently being a dog-girl, while the one who is a dog-girl in personality is now physically human and looking just like the human her is supposed to look, and tries her best to live her life as a human for her, and much to the chagrin of the now dog-girl whose life has been stolen, she's not stupid at all despite everyone's expectations based on her superficially doglike behavior, and does a very convincing job of playing her part. But she's still endlessly kind and tries to smooth things over and make friends with the now dog-girl version and make her happy, while the now dominant personality has to learn to not be so high maintenance on her own and grow up and emotionally mature a bit. The 3 of them come to peace with each other and settle in together and they find it's not so bad like that, maybe it ends with all 3 of them cuddled together watching a movie together or something, and her two physically human partners scritching her ears, eliciting her to wag her tail.
4. The dominant and human personality girl starts to gain the ability to control her body's physical form as well, and this develops into a full blown superpower, and soon gains the ability to shapeshift others at will too. She has quite a bit of fun with him now after what he did to her, but of course she has to watch out if she toys with him too much, since he can still easily switch her personality to the submissive one with just a few words.
5. The 2 personalities meet in a dream and at first the human dominant personality looks down on the submissive dog-girl, but she's not so submissive when dealing with anyone but her "master", and they argue at first and then become friends and maybe develop more coherent communication with each other in their waking hours.
Feel free to use any of these ideas if you are so inclined.
It seems like this one has a lot of potential for further parts though. For instance
1. Her human form - dominant personality doesn't believe his claims of what was done to her, because she doesn't remember it, and as proof, he changes her to the dog form and asks the submissive one this time when she switches, to not change her body back to human, so when the dominant personality returns she is astonished to find she is now a dog-girl. Having proved his claims, but not wanting to antagonize her that hard, he's about to switch her again so as to change her back, but she stops him, and wants to try enjoying her new body now that she's calm and collected about it, which she does, and from then on, she spends much of her time as a dog-girl regardless of which personality is active. Flash forward to 3 years later, and they have 23 kids, all of them dog-people, and she's pregnant again with a litter of 6 more and he's saying to himself "what have I done".
2. The two personalities start to merge and cease to be separate people, until eventually she is not 2 separate people at all and being given the codewords only changes her body and not her mind, and her personality is not extreme in either direction, but is more sensible. She then convinces him to let himself be put under her control so she can change him physically too, and he teaches her how to do this, and he gains a haughty dominant cat-man alternate personality (temporarily, with the implication that probably his two personalities will eventually merge as well).
3. Rather than merging, they eventually literally physically split into two separate bodies..... but the wrong one is the dog-girl! What's more, further attempts at hypnosis to fix this is completely ineffective. So the original dominant personality who sees herself as human has to deal with now permanently being a dog-girl, while the one who is a dog-girl in personality is now physically human and looking just like the human her is supposed to look, and tries her best to live her life as a human for her, and much to the chagrin of the now dog-girl whose life has been stolen, she's not stupid at all despite everyone's expectations based on her superficially doglike behavior, and does a very convincing job of playing her part. But she's still endlessly kind and tries to smooth things over and make friends with the now dog-girl version and make her happy, while the now dominant personality has to learn to not be so high maintenance on her own and grow up and emotionally mature a bit. The 3 of them come to peace with each other and settle in together and they find it's not so bad like that, maybe it ends with all 3 of them cuddled together watching a movie together or something, and her two physically human partners scritching her ears, eliciting her to wag her tail.
4. The dominant and human personality girl starts to gain the ability to control her body's physical form as well, and this develops into a full blown superpower, and soon gains the ability to shapeshift others at will too. She has quite a bit of fun with him now after what he did to her, but of course she has to watch out if she toys with him too much, since he can still easily switch her personality to the submissive one with just a few words.
5. The 2 personalities meet in a dream and at first the human dominant personality looks down on the submissive dog-girl, but she's not so submissive when dealing with anyone but her "master", and they argue at first and then become friends and maybe develop more coherent communication with each other in their waking hours.
Feel free to use any of these ideas if you are so inclined.
Oh my OwO
I don't usually get comments this big.
wow
I don't really have a plan to continue this story in the future, especially because I already have other series I'm working on.
However, all of your ideas are indeed cute, and worthy of being explored.
1. Not really a fan of pregnancy >.<
2. This is an interesting one ^^
Maybe her submissive personality was always there, but she just refused to listen.
3. This would be quite a sad ending.
The poor dog-girl will never be able to have a normal life :c
I'm not even sure she'll be able to go out in the streets like that, unless transformation is normal in this setting...
If that was the case, the ending would be quite fun :3
4. The power to become a cute doggy girl :D
5. This would be adorable.
Maybe the dog personality is super ferocious and brave whenever someone is threatening her owner.
I don't usually get comments this big.
wow
I don't really have a plan to continue this story in the future, especially because I already have other series I'm working on.
However, all of your ideas are indeed cute, and worthy of being explored.
1. Not really a fan of pregnancy >.<
2. This is an interesting one ^^
Maybe her submissive personality was always there, but she just refused to listen.
3. This would be quite a sad ending.
The poor dog-girl will never be able to have a normal life :c
I'm not even sure she'll be able to go out in the streets like that, unless transformation is normal in this setting...
If that was the case, the ending would be quite fun :3
4. The power to become a cute doggy girl :D
5. This would be adorable.
Maybe the dog personality is super ferocious and brave whenever someone is threatening her owner.
I am glad you took the time to reply and consider my ideas. That is very cool. I guess I leave story-length comments when I find something interesting, so take that as a compliment if you will. I'm surprised most people don't leave long comments. It's a decently long story after all, and I enjoyed it greatly all the way through (unlike almost everything I've tried to watch on netflix), it rightfully deserves a long comment.
I didn't mean the pregnancy in #1 for the sake of pregnancy as a fetish thing, just as a sort of be careful what you wish for ending, that as a result of their decisions, they now have consequences, but ones which aren't exactly bad. These things, when they are permanent, it seems the long term implications should be at the back of one's mind, what they would really mean for years or decades. They say life is short, but it's kind of not true, life is long. Another question relating to a hybrid person in such a situation is of course are they going to age like a human, or dog years, or something in between, or perhaps age slower or even be biologically immortal since she's mentally changing her own body and probably ought to be able to control her age too? If you don't give the story a years-long epilogue, you would never know maybe, but if any of this happened in real life I think it would be the most important concern. And if they're boyfriend and girlfriend or husband and wife, it's only natural they would eventually think about reproducing, but what does that mean if she's now half dog half the time? Does she have litters of 6 or 8 with a 3 month gestation time instead of 1 at a time with a 9 month gestation time now? It seems highly likely at least. What would be the implications of that? It means probably they would have a huge family in no time.
As for #3, I don't think this is really a sad ending. She's finding a pretty big silver lining. Consider this, "living a normal life", what is that anyway? What is entailed in a "normal" life? To socialize with others? To be employed? To go out in public without being seen as a monster? Well she would already be living with 2 people she likes, isn't that enough? How big a circle of friends and lovers does anyone need? As for employment, I don't know if it would prevent her from even getting a job. Unless it was something that involved a lot of typing. It may even make it EASIER for her to get a job. She would be the ultimate "minority" after all, and if it is for anything involving marketing, she would probably attract customers very effectively. I don't think it would really be as big a problem to go out in public either, she would get a lot of attention at first and inevitably meet some nasty people, but everyone does that anyway, and I imagine she would probably become famous, and then the surprise would wear off and the worst attention she would get in public is people asking for her autograph maybe. Maybe 50 years ago she would face bigotry but I don't think it would be really a problem now. Kind of like that Hotel Transylvania film, where the monsters try to hide their existence since they assume humans will riot with torches and pitchforks if they find out monsters are real, but in fact the days of that sort of reaction are in the past and it turned out that they didn't need to isolate themselves from modern humans after all.
Yes, there are subtly different possibilities for #2. Maybe the 2 personalities merge, maybe they were really a part of her all along, or perhaps the best one would be, it could be that there actually NEVER were 2 personalities and she was actually pretending the whole time. Let's call that #6:
6. It turns out she was faking all along and there is only one personality in her head and she was only playing along, at first as a prank, and then found she was enjoying it after getting flooded with endorphines, and rethinking how harshly she had treated him until now. And every time he gives her the code words to switch her personality, she is just play acting. Though this would also mean that he had somehow unlocked a shapeshifting ability in her that she now has full conscious control over. Maybe at some point she's being a dog-girl and submissive and he gives her the codeword to switch back, and she'll whisper at him "stop trying to ruin this for me" and refuse to change back and reveal the truth to him.
Anyway, would you mind if I tried my hand at writing a part 3 if you're not going to, I'll send a draft to you as a note?
I didn't mean the pregnancy in #1 for the sake of pregnancy as a fetish thing, just as a sort of be careful what you wish for ending, that as a result of their decisions, they now have consequences, but ones which aren't exactly bad. These things, when they are permanent, it seems the long term implications should be at the back of one's mind, what they would really mean for years or decades. They say life is short, but it's kind of not true, life is long. Another question relating to a hybrid person in such a situation is of course are they going to age like a human, or dog years, or something in between, or perhaps age slower or even be biologically immortal since she's mentally changing her own body and probably ought to be able to control her age too? If you don't give the story a years-long epilogue, you would never know maybe, but if any of this happened in real life I think it would be the most important concern. And if they're boyfriend and girlfriend or husband and wife, it's only natural they would eventually think about reproducing, but what does that mean if she's now half dog half the time? Does she have litters of 6 or 8 with a 3 month gestation time instead of 1 at a time with a 9 month gestation time now? It seems highly likely at least. What would be the implications of that? It means probably they would have a huge family in no time.
As for #3, I don't think this is really a sad ending. She's finding a pretty big silver lining. Consider this, "living a normal life", what is that anyway? What is entailed in a "normal" life? To socialize with others? To be employed? To go out in public without being seen as a monster? Well she would already be living with 2 people she likes, isn't that enough? How big a circle of friends and lovers does anyone need? As for employment, I don't know if it would prevent her from even getting a job. Unless it was something that involved a lot of typing. It may even make it EASIER for her to get a job. She would be the ultimate "minority" after all, and if it is for anything involving marketing, she would probably attract customers very effectively. I don't think it would really be as big a problem to go out in public either, she would get a lot of attention at first and inevitably meet some nasty people, but everyone does that anyway, and I imagine she would probably become famous, and then the surprise would wear off and the worst attention she would get in public is people asking for her autograph maybe. Maybe 50 years ago she would face bigotry but I don't think it would be really a problem now. Kind of like that Hotel Transylvania film, where the monsters try to hide their existence since they assume humans will riot with torches and pitchforks if they find out monsters are real, but in fact the days of that sort of reaction are in the past and it turned out that they didn't need to isolate themselves from modern humans after all.
Yes, there are subtly different possibilities for #2. Maybe the 2 personalities merge, maybe they were really a part of her all along, or perhaps the best one would be, it could be that there actually NEVER were 2 personalities and she was actually pretending the whole time. Let's call that #6:
6. It turns out she was faking all along and there is only one personality in her head and she was only playing along, at first as a prank, and then found she was enjoying it after getting flooded with endorphines, and rethinking how harshly she had treated him until now. And every time he gives her the code words to switch her personality, she is just play acting. Though this would also mean that he had somehow unlocked a shapeshifting ability in her that she now has full conscious control over. Maybe at some point she's being a dog-girl and submissive and he gives her the codeword to switch back, and she'll whisper at him "stop trying to ruin this for me" and refuse to change back and reveal the truth to him.
Anyway, would you mind if I tried my hand at writing a part 3 if you're not going to, I'll send a draft to you as a note?
Oh ^^
I'll check your note as soon as I get better.
But you are free to write a continuation if you want :)
Just make sure to put a link to part one in here. hehe
I'm so happy that someone liked my story so much they wanted to write a part 2 all by themselves OWO
I'll check your note as soon as I get better.
But you are free to write a continuation if you want :)
Just make sure to put a link to part one in here. hehe
I'm so happy that someone liked my story so much they wanted to write a part 2 all by themselves OWO
Eh don't worry about reading through that thing I sent if you haven't already, I just tried to reread it myself and it's so bad. What was I thinking. But have a great day. Be excellent to each other and party on dudes.
I replied to your note with some feedback about the things I liked ^^
That was a fun story to read, and also pretty sexy :3
(Tyler is a nice kitty)
Thanks for that.
I love when people get inspired by my writing.
That was a fun story to read, and also pretty sexy :3
(Tyler is a nice kitty)
Thanks for that.
I love when people get inspired by my writing.
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