The final page!!
Aside from the top left panel I'm really happy with this page! I think Riley and Mei's faces/expressions in the two bottom panels came out really well and the pose on the right is also good. I wish I had more colors available so I could give em a shadow so they're actually grounded with background but oh well. I don't think the top left panel is bad, I'm just not sure if it reads well to other people, it's supposed to be Riley making grabby hands towards Mei, and I feel like I did a good job on the hands and fingers themselves but I'm not sure if the motion/action lines made everything too messy/too hard to read or not.
But yeah that's the end of the comic!! I'm so glad to be done with it, I've been working on it so long but I'm happy I stuck with it. Like I said at the beginning I've been working on this for over a year and just finished it today. Every single part of this is something I did on my own by my own volition (that was sort of part of the project, proving to myself that I could actually plan all of this and then make myself carry through with it) and now it's finished! There are defo parts where things can be improved or fixed but for the most part I'm happy and satisfied with what I made and I hope you all enjoyed it too!!
Aside from the top left panel I'm really happy with this page! I think Riley and Mei's faces/expressions in the two bottom panels came out really well and the pose on the right is also good. I wish I had more colors available so I could give em a shadow so they're actually grounded with background but oh well. I don't think the top left panel is bad, I'm just not sure if it reads well to other people, it's supposed to be Riley making grabby hands towards Mei, and I feel like I did a good job on the hands and fingers themselves but I'm not sure if the motion/action lines made everything too messy/too hard to read or not.
But yeah that's the end of the comic!! I'm so glad to be done with it, I've been working on it so long but I'm happy I stuck with it. Like I said at the beginning I've been working on this for over a year and just finished it today. Every single part of this is something I did on my own by my own volition (that was sort of part of the project, proving to myself that I could actually plan all of this and then make myself carry through with it) and now it's finished! There are defo parts where things can be improved or fixed but for the most part I'm happy and satisfied with what I made and I hope you all enjoyed it too!!
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Baby fur
Species Unspecified / Any
Gender Any
Size 929 x 1280px
File Size 380.9 kB
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I gotta say, I really liked the idea behind this comic from the beginning. Your hand drawn pages were well done, especially when the color came to town! I really enjoyed this comic for all its merits and I do hope you continue this!
possibly the best abdl comic ive read. rye-rye is a major cutie <3
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