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"Hello there!" Pinion said, trying to look as unthreatening as possible with its head low and humble and its feathers smooth. "Mind if I talk with you?"
So far none of the parakeets had flown away but Pinion didn't think they'd stay if it disturbed them too much. Already some of them were leaning as if to take wing.
"I'm just interested to ask," it continued, and lay down in front of the cage fence in the hope that this would help it to look harmless. "Which one of you is the leader?"
The parakeets looked uncomfortably at one another. Eventually one plucked up the courage to half-open a wing in the direction of a cluster of birds further back in the cage. "The one picking seeds from the twig. I'll go get-" Without even finishing its sentence the parakeet flew over to the leader. A couple of others followed it as if this was a group mission and couldn't be handled by just one bird.
Pinion watched the first bird talk with the leader, aware the whole time that the closest few parakeets were eyeing Pinion warily.
And then Pinion saw that it was in luck! The leader flew close and perched on a high branch. Pinion had to crane its neck to see it, but this was going better than it had expected!
What would you like Pinion to say now?
- Start a conversation about how their social dynamics work
- "Why don't the parakeets like me?"
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"Who is your leader?"
"Hello there!" Pinion said, trying to look as unthreatening as possible with its head low and humble and its feathers smooth. "Mind if I talk with you?"
So far none of the parakeets had flown away but Pinion didn't think they'd stay if it disturbed them too much. Already some of them were leaning as if to take wing.
"I'm just interested to ask," it continued, and lay down in front of the cage fence in the hope that this would help it to look harmless. "Which one of you is the leader?"
The parakeets looked uncomfortably at one another. Eventually one plucked up the courage to half-open a wing in the direction of a cluster of birds further back in the cage. "The one picking seeds from the twig. I'll go get-" Without even finishing its sentence the parakeet flew over to the leader. A couple of others followed it as if this was a group mission and couldn't be handled by just one bird.
Pinion watched the first bird talk with the leader, aware the whole time that the closest few parakeets were eyeing Pinion warily.
And then Pinion saw that it was in luck! The leader flew close and perched on a high branch. Pinion had to crane its neck to see it, but this was going better than it had expected!
What would you like Pinion to say now?
- Start a conversation about how their social dynamics work
- "Why don't the parakeets like me?"
"Who is your leader?"
The end of the world is at hand and the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse stride forth. Unfortunately, due to a celestial mishap, the Horsemen have all incarnated as flamingos.
Follow Pinion - Death itself in flamingo form - as it identifies its life's purpose. It's going to need your help: not only did it hatch a long way away from the other Horsemen, but it's also trapped in a zoo.
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★ Ask about social dynamics ★ "Why don't you like me?" ★ Start from the beginning ★
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Category Story / Fantasy
Species Avian (Other)
Gender Multiple characters
Size 120 x 120px
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Oh yes! I've got 42 segments to put up this time. I didn't know it was possible to be both intimidated and proud at the same time :D
Ight, imma speedrun this, no words no nothing. Just pure strats and surpreme skill.
Speedrun the story? I've planned it specifically so that these uploads are all over the map so it's not in sequential order. It won't make sense yet - I should get that done tomorrow maybe?
Actually I'm sorta stuck at the moment. Here's the bit in the speedrun I'm not so sure about https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gcR.....QzClk&t=7s
This is harder then I thought
This is harder then I thought
Oh right - it's a different thing! I thought you meant you were trying to do a speedrun of Flamingos. Good luck!
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