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Pinion's Story - Youtube version
The end of the world is at hand and the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse stride forth. Unfortunately, due to an unfortunate celestial mishap, the Horsemen have all incarnated as flamingos.
Follow Pinion - Death itself in flamingo form - as it identifies its life's purpose. It's going to need your help: not only did it hatch a long way away from the other Horsemen, but it's also trapped in a zoo.
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Artwork © John Fell
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Thanks! Reckon it needs any tweaks? Someone already said that the options are the ends aren't up for long enough, and a few others have said that some more art woudl be good.
More art if able is usually good, not a reqirement since I reckon most people (like myself) would listen to it over watching it in tab. Oh, on that note, I reccomend you remove the music if you can. And I did find some of the endings rather short, maybe leave around 8 seconds a silence near the end if able.
Awesome stuff - thanks for the feedback!
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