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Pinion shook with rage but saw that the human visitors couldn't, or wouldn't, understand what was wrong. It honked in frustration and stalked over to the far corner of the cage, away from the humans and the other flamingos so it could have space to think and to plan.
If it couldn't rally the visitors then it would have to change this situation itself. It looked at the storks, who weren't paying the flamingo enclosure any attention at this moment, and remembered that there were times when they threatened their own keeper.
It had never seen them attack a human successfully, and the keeper always seemed to know how to discourage them, but what if Pinion attacked its own keeper? Could it catch the human unawares?
It waited for the evening feeding. The sun passed across the sky and the light began to turn the familiar rose-gold of evening. The human tourists thinned out from crowds to a trickle, and eventually stopped coming entirely.
Then the keeper came in with its usual bucket of food to spread throughout the cage.
That was Pinion's moment. As the keeper entered the cage the flamingo rushed it, its wings spread wide to make it look big, its neck out straight and honking with rage.
The keeper looked surprised, and for a moment (and to Pinion's vast satisfaction), alarmed! It used the bucket to shield itself from Pinion's attack.
Pinion caught up with it, clashed breast-first against the bucket, and followed up its attack by kicking at the human's legs. It honked as loud as it could, a tirade of noise to scare the human away.
The human backed up a few steps. "What's up with you?" it asked.
Pinion didn't know or care what it had said, only turned to shout to the rest of the flock for support. "Come on! If we call attack like this we can win!"
Not a single one of its flock-mates joined the charge.
...ohhhh dear, oh dear. Pinion's put himself out there for sure, and we all know what they say about he who dares, but maybe this one didn't quite work out. What do you want Pinion to do next?
- Try to convince Langoustine to take revenge on the humans?
- Try to convince the flock as a whole that the wing-trimming is wrong?
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Attack the Keeper
Pinion shook with rage but saw that the human visitors couldn't, or wouldn't, understand what was wrong. It honked in frustration and stalked over to the far corner of the cage, away from the humans and the other flamingos so it could have space to think and to plan.
If it couldn't rally the visitors then it would have to change this situation itself. It looked at the storks, who weren't paying the flamingo enclosure any attention at this moment, and remembered that there were times when they threatened their own keeper.
It had never seen them attack a human successfully, and the keeper always seemed to know how to discourage them, but what if Pinion attacked its own keeper? Could it catch the human unawares?
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It waited for the evening feeding. The sun passed across the sky and the light began to turn the familiar rose-gold of evening. The human tourists thinned out from crowds to a trickle, and eventually stopped coming entirely.
Then the keeper came in with its usual bucket of food to spread throughout the cage.
That was Pinion's moment. As the keeper entered the cage the flamingo rushed it, its wings spread wide to make it look big, its neck out straight and honking with rage.
The keeper looked surprised, and for a moment (and to Pinion's vast satisfaction), alarmed! It used the bucket to shield itself from Pinion's attack.
Pinion caught up with it, clashed breast-first against the bucket, and followed up its attack by kicking at the human's legs. It honked as loud as it could, a tirade of noise to scare the human away.
The human backed up a few steps. "What's up with you?" it asked.
Pinion didn't know or care what it had said, only turned to shout to the rest of the flock for support. "Come on! If we call attack like this we can win!"
Not a single one of its flock-mates joined the charge.
...ohhhh dear, oh dear. Pinion's put himself out there for sure, and we all know what they say about he who dares, but maybe this one didn't quite work out. What do you want Pinion to do next?
- Try to convince Langoustine to take revenge on the humans?
- Try to convince the flock as a whole that the wing-trimming is wrong?
Attack the Zookeeper
The end of the world is at hand and the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse stride forth. Unfortunately, due to an unfortunate celestial mishap, the Horsemen have all incarnated as flamingos.
Follow Pinion - Death itself in flamingo form - as it identifies its life's purpose. It's going to need your help: not only did it hatch a long way away from the other Horsemen, but it's also trapped in a zoo.
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★ Try to Convince Langoustine ★ Convince the Flock ★ Start from the beginning ★
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Thank you so much! I'll start fixing them all together soon. And take out the 'Go to D3' etc. references.
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