Still great work. Better then anything I can draw.

oh god, what happened to her? Why is she bleeding so much. She looks so lonely and sad. Still and awesome picture. I can only draw stickfigures after all. keep drawing

The picture is great, but Luna looks badly hurt.

still a great pic nice job.

shes a bad guy right?

poor she :(

Oh god...*Runs to Luna's side*Ma'am,what happened?

the expression really fits her, I just want to take care of her

I dont know why you would be dissapointed with this picture? its great! I feels rather sorry for her though ,whatever happened, does not look like a happy place where she is right now..

Taluthus

If i could i would nurse luna back to health and heal her with kitsy magics.
But alas.
You really underestimate yourself, you do great work. Really.
Much love
Christy

lol y do all the artist im jealous of underestimate their art i trash talk about my art all the time but yours is great

Very nice pic, I sure wouldn't be disappointed with that. An Artist is usually their own worst critic though. You see all the things that dont look the way you envisioned, I see a detailed background a nice rain effect, an impressive conveyance of mood, a nice looking color pallet... the list goes on. Its important to be critical of ones self as that helps with the drive to get better, but you have to admit that is a fine piece of work as it is.

MEDIC!!!!!!!!!

I can see sort of why you'd feel bad about this, but only by beating myself over the head with a rock first.
Regardless I can offer some criticism/advice. If you've already thought about the details yourself then ignore this.

My two immediate suggestions is regarding the rain and the blood. The rain is a neat effect, but if she's in the rain, and it looks like she came out of a pool of water, she should be soaking wet. If she didn't come out of the pool then she should at least be starting to get wet, at the very least. Any "fur spikes" where clumps of hair separate due to a contour of the body or a bend in the tail should be flat or pointing downward due to wetness.

As for the blood, it also is a liquid and would make the surrounding fur not just red, but bunched into spikes of greater density than the water would because it is thicker. Any streams or drops of blood that coincide with the bloodied fur "spikes" would also need to show how thick blood is. Right now it looks slightly thicker than water, maybe like jello-mix that hasn't thickened yet. At the bottom of the streams the blood should be forming a drop, a nice fat thick drop.

Other than that I am impressed with this picture and shall favorite it. I like the detail of the sand on the bottom of her legs (which in hindsight would also cause the fur to clump up more and differently from water/blood, but that's a lot to work with in just one picture) and I like the background, not only for the destruction but what I could imagine what it was like before whatever is taking place here happened.

its beautiful...you really made something here, very captivating

Oh wow...those eyes tell quite a story. She's clearly been through so very much...

Poor creature :(

*flies over and covers with a wing*

The picture itself looks excellent to me.
But seriously, what happened? What's the story behind this pic?

Awwh it turned out great :( I feel very sorry for what happened to Luna. As long as the art itself grasps the emotion of the person reading it. You did a good job <3

(IMO) ^^ I love it.

she looks like she's gonna pass out...

"SOMEONE GET THE MEDIC"

*runs up and picks her up* "I've got you, you're gonna be okay"

*looks at soldier beside me* it isn't safe here, lets move out

Suffer.

i love how broken and torn one wing looks compared to the other

Must've been a pretty big fight or something to leave her in bad shape