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A ski holiday turns out a little bit different then expected for Rick and his sister. What he thought would be two weeks skiing with his family, turns out to be two weeks with a motherly Kangaroo named Karen who owns a private lodge. It turns out that his parents aren't going to be around and they invited Rick's neighbors, Leslie and Erin to stay at the same lodge.
Story link : (with illustrations by Remmy & Kit Kiama)
http://www.foxtalestimes.com/Storie.....ith_ms_roo.htm
Story link : (with illustrations by Remmy & Kit Kiama)
http://www.foxtalestimes.com/Storie.....ith_ms_roo.htm
Category Story / Baby fur
Species Kangaroo
Gender Multiple characters
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 176.1 kB
wow this is SUPER long... like 77 pages exactly... do you plan to finish the story any time soon... like what happens AFTER the snow clears
A good story, though it does end rather suddenly there. Any chance it'll be completed at some point?
Loved it, very thorough and vivid image's. The only thing that i didnt like was the abrupt
end which... wasn't really an end.
end which... wasn't really an end.
It is very frustrating how you're such a vivid, talented writer, but don't produce many completely finished works. I understand how it can be to boil a story over in your head all while you're writing it -- by the time one approaches the climax, it is rather boring unless you're constantly coming up with new ideas...but the only way I can see a person being worthy of being called a "good" or "decent" writer is if they produce works that are captivating and fun reads that are complete in all their parts.
Hopefully constructive! I don't mean to sound like a basher...or a meanie...but I felt the full emotion had to be expressed.
Hopefully constructive! I don't mean to sound like a basher...or a meanie...but I felt the full emotion had to be expressed.
I have to agree with many of the above. Either update stories in smaller increments (so it's clear you're progressing) or get some of them finished. All of the stories you produce are pretty awesome, especially ones like this, but leaving them hanging for a year and a half isn't good practice... Not as if they can only be updated in gigantic lumps, after all.
I'll just assume the story was finished and it was too long for FTT to have all of it in one file.
This story is amazing!! Defiantly one one my favorites. I really hope you finish it, but if not then I can just settle with this and imagine what happens next.
I absolutely love Miss Roo, and all of the characters in general. I have a hunch about why the regression is happening. I just hope I'm right.
I absolutely love Miss Roo, and all of the characters in general. I have a hunch about why the regression is happening. I just hope I'm right.
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