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greetings self and all between , shackled to mind with a searing cuff
hello shame , its been so long , not nearly long enough
hello heart , what have we here? a new excuse for age old pain?
hello soul , what did you find when out in the freezing rain?
conscience has left or so it seems , he wont be joining us today
hello shadow , watching me , hardly kept at bay
these parts of me they watch and learn and change throughout my years
loving, hating and all the rest , to conjure my deepest fears
i see them there , as always theyve been , whole and working slow
and yet beneath my skin and flesh lies something i dont know
so scratch the skin and lay bare the lie ,pull it out like weeping string
flesh on floor and heart in mouth i breath deep and then begin
take me apart and lay me bare , for all this world to see
the coiling mass of dark and hate , shadowing all that is me
a single tear of salt and love rolls down my bloody cheek
and my mouth gasps a tiny bit , as if i want to speak
but no words will come and blood will flow to be followed by the dark
my soul is the dormant fuel , my shame the deadly spark
so as i light like a pyre into the crimson sky, and ashes cascade from the stars
remember all those youll never know , and who they are when pushed too far
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greetings self and all between , shackled to mind with a searing cuff
hello shame , its been so long , not nearly long enough
hello heart , what have we here? a new excuse for age old pain?
hello soul , what did you find when out in the freezing rain?
conscience has left or so it seems , he wont be joining us today
hello shadow , watching me , hardly kept at bay
these parts of me they watch and learn and change throughout my years
loving, hating and all the rest , to conjure my deepest fears
i see them there , as always theyve been , whole and working slow
and yet beneath my skin and flesh lies something i dont know
so scratch the skin and lay bare the lie ,pull it out like weeping string
flesh on floor and heart in mouth i breath deep and then begin
take me apart and lay me bare , for all this world to see
the coiling mass of dark and hate , shadowing all that is me
a single tear of salt and love rolls down my bloody cheek
and my mouth gasps a tiny bit , as if i want to speak
but no words will come and blood will flow to be followed by the dark
my soul is the dormant fuel , my shame the deadly spark
so as i light like a pyre into the crimson sky, and ashes cascade from the stars
remember all those youll never know , and who they are when pushed too far
yeah , just wrote this a few minutes ago , so bored and brooding lol . . thats music drugs sleep deprivation and sore muscles for ya . . . im not waking up till 4 in the afternoon tomorrow i swear -.-
enjoy!if you can.
comments much appreciated
enjoy!if you can.
comments much appreciated
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I liked the beginning a lot, but then it took a dark eerie turn
Good, but a little scary
Good, but a little scary
thanks for the comment ^_^
yeah , it is a darker one of my poems . . i like it though.
the things i was visualising while i wrote this is pretty much , one person with something inside them that shouldnt be , a dormant monster or something that eventually comes out , destroying all that the person was and erasing all traces of them , replacing them with a shadow that burns even the night skies.
yeah . . i know , i was pretty screwed up , i still like it though!
yeah , it is a darker one of my poems . . i like it though.
the things i was visualising while i wrote this is pretty much , one person with something inside them that shouldnt be , a dormant monster or something that eventually comes out , destroying all that the person was and erasing all traces of them , replacing them with a shadow that burns even the night skies.
yeah . . i know , i was pretty screwed up , i still like it though!
Interesting, I didn't really read it that way, but you make a valid point
Still dark, but still good
Still dark, but still good
it has a fw meanings to it . . . most of my stuff does . again thanks for commenting lol , no one else usually does :P
I like to comment, it lets people know there stuff is being read
Anyways, keep on writing, your stuff is good and i love reading it
Anyways, keep on writing, your stuff is good and i love reading it
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