and done! like I said big thanks to ponyanony for taking it on for me!
originally this was supposed to just be a one or 2 page deal kind of showcasing an event in the "toxic love" arc that was started with baronbulge's comic where muta-cadence would command stheno to..."retrieve" her husband after making stheno useful again (and hey, it's technically not cheating anymore if they're the same person right? hooray for family values!). Because baron kind of swore of commissions indefinitely, but I still wanted to kind of attack that plot point I asked ponyanony if he was interested and he went much farther beyond what I asked; he wrote and illustrated a bunch of ideas I was not even fathoming considered I initially figured I'd be lucky if I even got 2 pages in one go XD
also I think the critics on other sites I've seen assume I took way more influence on the story than I did lol. This was probably the least involved I've ever had to be on a commission tbh, I don't think I even wrote any of the lines of dialogue. I think anony just enjoyed 1)drawing out a combat scene, and 2)actually doing a villain character for once since most people seem to commission characters that have a more heroic demeanor. that venom/shadow pony thing is pretty cool too!
also don't whine about shining armor, he's 100% alive; we're playing by DBZ absorbtion rules where absorbed targets have to be alive and intact to be usable, christ some of you guys are so dramatic XD
originally this was supposed to just be a one or 2 page deal kind of showcasing an event in the "toxic love" arc that was started with baronbulge's comic where muta-cadence would command stheno to..."retrieve" her husband after making stheno useful again (and hey, it's technically not cheating anymore if they're the same person right? hooray for family values!). Because baron kind of swore of commissions indefinitely, but I still wanted to kind of attack that plot point I asked ponyanony if he was interested and he went much farther beyond what I asked; he wrote and illustrated a bunch of ideas I was not even fathoming considered I initially figured I'd be lucky if I even got 2 pages in one go XD
also I think the critics on other sites I've seen assume I took way more influence on the story than I did lol. This was probably the least involved I've ever had to be on a commission tbh, I don't think I even wrote any of the lines of dialogue. I think anony just enjoyed 1)drawing out a combat scene, and 2)actually doing a villain character for once since most people seem to commission characters that have a more heroic demeanor. that venom/shadow pony thing is pretty cool too!
also don't whine about shining armor, he's 100% alive; we're playing by DBZ absorbtion rules where absorbed targets have to be alive and intact to be usable, christ some of you guys are so dramatic XD
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So wait, if Shining is still alive and merged with you, and he's so strong, does his consciousness argue with you in your head? Could he, in theory, take control briefly if he caught you off guard?
probably, it'd be more like a subconscious thing though. I never intended it to be a major plot point in any kind of long running comic, I mean I give him a week (a month tops) in actual comic world time before his plans are thwarted, maybe if this went on for years it might be an issue.
I did consider a funny idea like "the superior spider-man" where doc oc body transferred to spiderman's body and tried to be a better superhero than him. think of "the superior shining armor" where he shifts his body to be less conspicuous and pretends to be shining armor to comedic effect; seems fun but it's too much time/expense though.
I did consider a funny idea like "the superior spider-man" where doc oc body transferred to spiderman's body and tried to be a better superhero than him. think of "the superior shining armor" where he shifts his body to be less conspicuous and pretends to be shining armor to comedic effect; seems fun but it's too much time/expense though.
maybe, don't get too excited though, I missed the entire current wave of commissions from ponyanony, but I might catch the next wave.
well I'm always happy when people are into some of my ideas
He needs to find someone to corrupt into being his new friend.. perhaps someone who tried to stop him, only ending up joining him ;D
I actually have a few chars I have that are friends with him in spite of, or because of how he's a weird mutagenic blight in the flesh.
Well, what about one who tries to stop him, only ending up corrupted themselves and aiding him later? :p
so this is an impressive comic!
but gotta ask, if we see Shining mutated by the liquid again, it was starting to look very interesting.
but gotta ask, if we see Shining mutated by the liquid again, it was starting to look very interesting.
well I invite anyone who liked that aspect to commission ponyanony to do it. as it stands currently I cannot due to how I missed the current batch of comissions AND this series was not cheap.
well i would like to, but i kinda fall short on the pony anatomy area...
still, thank you so much for sharing this, was very interesting, also i can see why it wasn't cheap the artwork it's really amazing!
still, thank you so much for sharing this, was very interesting, also i can see why it wasn't cheap the artwork it's really amazing!
Mutant Cadance: RETURN MY HUSBAND!!! YOU SOULLESS MONSTER!!!
Stheno: Sorry babe, the tails a one way, all expenses paid trip...But while you and me get better...acquainted...
...how 'bout we send the dear little Flurry Heart to the Daddy hotel too..?
Stheno: Sorry babe, the tails a one way, all expenses paid trip...But while you and me get better...acquainted...
...how 'bout we send the dear little Flurry Heart to the Daddy hotel too..?
actually if we were dealing with mutant cadence this was likely her idea. also I like to imagine if stheno WAS in this universe, it explains flurry heart's freakish strength and why she is the Broly of pony-kind since the expression of stheno's genes from when they were both corrupted transferred down to flurry.
do you not remember the comic that was done? http://www.furaffinity.net/gallery/.....739/Toxic-Love she's massive XD
oh wait you were talking about flurry right? Ah, maybe if she trained, I had a funny idea where stheno trains flurry since she's the only one left vs some kind of cosmic threat and it's piccolo's method of training ("lesson #1: DOOOOODGEEEEEE")
Patch: MASTER!! I'll save you master, and bring this beast to justice! *Faces down the monster, horn glowing.* EAT ME!
His horn's orange glow brightens and spreads over his body, encasing the young stallion in what looks like full plate and chainmail armor. The magical material is ghostly and transparent, as if it were made of glass, covering his entire body in a protective shell from the corrupting goo. He draws his sword, wielding it with telekinesis. He glares at the monster in front of him (ignoring how impressive those muscle look), "One way or another, I'm getting Master Armor out of there."
His horn's orange glow brightens and spreads over his body, encasing the young stallion in what looks like full plate and chainmail armor. The magical material is ghostly and transparent, as if it were made of glass, covering his entire body in a protective shell from the corrupting goo. He draws his sword, wielding it with telekinesis. He glares at the monster in front of him (ignoring how impressive those muscle look), "One way or another, I'm getting Master Armor out of there."
I don't really know how to respond to this, but I guess I applaud your enthusiasm and imagination nonetheless!
hehe. Sorry, I'm in the process of commissioning a concept art of my MLP character, and it just so happens that Shining is his mentor. So it was quit a coincidence that he was in your comic too. So for fun I responded as that OC. lol
quite a "perfect" choice of song
also uh, sorry for taking 2 years to reply, I must have missed this comment while answering the others lol
also uh, sorry for taking 2 years to reply, I must have missed this comment while answering the others lol
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