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Twenty-six forty-eight... Space is opened wide, our ships reach towards planets of distant solar systems, man is colonizing near and far. The same time Earth is struggling by overpopulation, severe social, political and economic problems. Many who can afford, embark on the journey, a perilous journey towards the unknown... A sci-fi novel set in the distant future, telling the story of a young man, who tries to find his place in this strange new world.
Újvilág 2648
Kétezer-hatszáznegyvennyolc... A világűr megnyílt előttünk, hajóink messzi naprendszerek bolygóit érik el, folyik a környező tér kolonizálása. Mindeközben a Föld túlnépesedett, súlyos társadalmi, politikai és gazdasági problémákkal, sokan, akik meg tudják fizetni, vállalkoznak az útra, az ugrásra az ismeretlenbe.
Milyen ez az új világ? Rideg fém és műanyag, szűk kabinok, hosszú hónapok apró hajókba zárva, míg végre a vándor valami holdat vagy bolygót elérhet. Kolosszális biodómok látnak el óriási búrák alatti városokat élelemmel, minden szintetikus, mesterséges, megterheli a szabad terekhez szokott lelket.
Mindezidáig csupán egyetlen élő bolygót találtunk, egyetlen helyet, mely talán visszaadhatja azt, amit az emberiség súlya alatt fuldokló Föld adhatott.
Tamás élete legmeghatározóbb döntését hozza meg, amikor szüleivel összeveszve, tőlük elválva e bolygó mellett dönt, egyedül vágva neki az ismeretlennek.
Ismeretlen? A csatornák folyamatosan ontják a híreket, reklámokat, új világok, új lehetőségek, jelentkezz, utazz jó pénzért, megtalálod számításodat! A 61 Cygni A gázóriása körül keringő élő holdon már fél évezredes múltú négyszáz milliós kolónia várja a vállalkozókat, egy valódi új Föld akár!
Remény, egy világ, ahol már az ember rég megtelepedett, ismeri, uralma alá hajtotta természetes élővilágát, mely immár a földi behozott fajokkal keveredve élhető környezetet teremtett számára. Városok, falvak tagolják a hatalmas szabad tereket, akár egy igazi idilli világ is lehetne.
A leszállás után azonban hamar feltárul a valóság egy részlete, melyet az űrbéli média elhallgat: a bolygó nem csupán élő, de értelmes fajai is léteztek, melyek hátramaradt tagjai zöld radikális csoportokkal szövetségben hajtanak végre véres terrortámadásokat az emberi civilizáció bástyái ellen...
Letöltés
Itt a PDF változat van fenn. A honlapomról letölthető ODT formátumban is!
http://www.jubatian.com/articles/ne.....648-hungarian/
Háttér
A történet nagyrészt 2016 végén készült el, az első nagyregény a gepárdika (cheetaan) világban, melyet reményeim szerint továbbiak követnek később. Hatalmas felfedezések történnek manapság, a naprendszeren kívüli világot csak mostanság kezdjük igazán megismerni, mostanság döbbenünk rá, mennyire összetett, változatos világok lehetnek kinn a messzeségben. E gondolat inspirálja, mi lenne, ha... Mindeközben itt a Föld, az egyedüli élő bolygó mindeddig, és még sokáig, egyetlen hely, ahol élhetünk, melyet meg kéne őriznünk, ahol fel kéne találnunk, hogyan élhetünk összhangban egymással és e hely élővilágával, mely minket is éltet. A történet nem utópia, nem is szándékom aképp beállítani. Minden a maga törvényei szerint működik, cselekszik, mely akár a morálnak, erkölcsöknek homlokegyenest ellent mondhat. De talán összességében csak mutat valamit, ha mást nem, egy különös, érdekes kalandot.
Szabadon terjeszthető, a módosítás, fordítás jogát tartanám fenn magamnak (Creative Commons BY-ND), remélve, hogy a későbbiekben tovább folytatódhat ennek a világnak a történelme.
Twenty-six forty-eight... Space is opened wide, our ships reach towards planets of distant solar systems, man is colonizing near and far. The same time Earth is struggling by overpopulation, severe social, political and economic problems. Many who can afford, embark on the journey, a perilous journey towards the unknown.
What is this new world like? Cold steel and plastic, tiny rooms, for long months enclosed in small vessels until the wanderers could reach a planet or a moon. Colossal biodomes feed enormous cities under gigantic structures, everything is synthetic and artificial, depriving the mind of free and open spaces.
This far we could find only one planet with life, only one place which could possibly recall what old Earth struggling under our colossal mass could give.
Thomas makes his life's most important decision when he parts with his parents in a quarrel to pursue his dreams alone towards this planet, the unknown.
Unknown? The television channels keep pouring news and advertisements of prosperity, wonderful new worlds with rich possibilities, sign up, travel for good money, you will find what you seek for! The moon orbiting the 61 Cygni A's gas giant already has half a millennia of history, a colony of four hundred millions waiting for the adventurous, almost like a new Earth!
Hope, a world where human settled since long ago, a world well-known, the original ecosystem subjugated and mixed with that of Earth, creating an environment where we can prosper. Cities and towns spread out among the wide open spaces, it could be a true idyllic world.
After landing, however, a part of the truth soon reveals, which is quenched by space media. The planet is not only alive, it even had intelligent races, whose remaining members cooperate with radical environmentalists for executing bloody terror attacks against the footholds of human civilization...
Backgrounds
The story was mostly completed in the end of 2016, being the first large novel in the cheetaan universe, which I hope more will follow. We see great discoveries these days, space beyond our solar system is opening up, we realize how wonderfully complex and diverse worlds could exist far away. These thoughts inspire, “what if”... The same time here is our old Earth, the only planet with the miracle of life today and for long, the only place where we could thrive, which we should protect, preserve, and invent how we could live in harmony with each other and this place's ecology which is the foundation of our own living. The story isn't a utopia, I didn't even intend to convey it as such. Everything operates and acts by its own design and inherent rules, which could be very much against our ideals of morals and good will. However, hopefully it could still convey something, if nothing else, a strange, unusual adventure.
Currently the story is Hungarian only as it is my native language, and try as hard as I wish, without real life English experience I can not get something of such magnitude done in an adequate quality. However, I hope that at some point, possibly with a native speaker's help (probably a migrated Hungarian), an English translation could eventually be realized.
--- Magyar (Hungarian) ---Újvilág 2648
Kétezer-hatszáznegyvennyolc... A világűr megnyílt előttünk, hajóink messzi naprendszerek bolygóit érik el, folyik a környező tér kolonizálása. Mindeközben a Föld túlnépesedett, súlyos társadalmi, politikai és gazdasági problémákkal, sokan, akik meg tudják fizetni, vállalkoznak az útra, az ugrásra az ismeretlenbe.
Milyen ez az új világ? Rideg fém és műanyag, szűk kabinok, hosszú hónapok apró hajókba zárva, míg végre a vándor valami holdat vagy bolygót elérhet. Kolosszális biodómok látnak el óriási búrák alatti városokat élelemmel, minden szintetikus, mesterséges, megterheli a szabad terekhez szokott lelket.
Mindezidáig csupán egyetlen élő bolygót találtunk, egyetlen helyet, mely talán visszaadhatja azt, amit az emberiség súlya alatt fuldokló Föld adhatott.
Tamás élete legmeghatározóbb döntését hozza meg, amikor szüleivel összeveszve, tőlük elválva e bolygó mellett dönt, egyedül vágva neki az ismeretlennek.
Ismeretlen? A csatornák folyamatosan ontják a híreket, reklámokat, új világok, új lehetőségek, jelentkezz, utazz jó pénzért, megtalálod számításodat! A 61 Cygni A gázóriása körül keringő élő holdon már fél évezredes múltú négyszáz milliós kolónia várja a vállalkozókat, egy valódi új Föld akár!
Remény, egy világ, ahol már az ember rég megtelepedett, ismeri, uralma alá hajtotta természetes élővilágát, mely immár a földi behozott fajokkal keveredve élhető környezetet teremtett számára. Városok, falvak tagolják a hatalmas szabad tereket, akár egy igazi idilli világ is lehetne.
A leszállás után azonban hamar feltárul a valóság egy részlete, melyet az űrbéli média elhallgat: a bolygó nem csupán élő, de értelmes fajai is léteztek, melyek hátramaradt tagjai zöld radikális csoportokkal szövetségben hajtanak végre véres terrortámadásokat az emberi civilizáció bástyái ellen...
Letöltés
Itt a PDF változat van fenn. A honlapomról letölthető ODT formátumban is!
http://www.jubatian.com/articles/ne.....648-hungarian/
Háttér
A történet nagyrészt 2016 végén készült el, az első nagyregény a gepárdika (cheetaan) világban, melyet reményeim szerint továbbiak követnek később. Hatalmas felfedezések történnek manapság, a naprendszeren kívüli világot csak mostanság kezdjük igazán megismerni, mostanság döbbenünk rá, mennyire összetett, változatos világok lehetnek kinn a messzeségben. E gondolat inspirálja, mi lenne, ha... Mindeközben itt a Föld, az egyedüli élő bolygó mindeddig, és még sokáig, egyetlen hely, ahol élhetünk, melyet meg kéne őriznünk, ahol fel kéne találnunk, hogyan élhetünk összhangban egymással és e hely élővilágával, mely minket is éltet. A történet nem utópia, nem is szándékom aképp beállítani. Minden a maga törvényei szerint működik, cselekszik, mely akár a morálnak, erkölcsöknek homlokegyenest ellent mondhat. De talán összességében csak mutat valamit, ha mást nem, egy különös, érdekes kalandot.
Szabadon terjeszthető, a módosítás, fordítás jogát tartanám fenn magamnak (Creative Commons BY-ND), remélve, hogy a későbbiekben tovább folytatódhat ennek a világnak a történelme.
--- English ---Twenty-six forty-eight... Space is opened wide, our ships reach towards planets of distant solar systems, man is colonizing near and far. The same time Earth is struggling by overpopulation, severe social, political and economic problems. Many who can afford, embark on the journey, a perilous journey towards the unknown.
What is this new world like? Cold steel and plastic, tiny rooms, for long months enclosed in small vessels until the wanderers could reach a planet or a moon. Colossal biodomes feed enormous cities under gigantic structures, everything is synthetic and artificial, depriving the mind of free and open spaces.
This far we could find only one planet with life, only one place which could possibly recall what old Earth struggling under our colossal mass could give.
Thomas makes his life's most important decision when he parts with his parents in a quarrel to pursue his dreams alone towards this planet, the unknown.
Unknown? The television channels keep pouring news and advertisements of prosperity, wonderful new worlds with rich possibilities, sign up, travel for good money, you will find what you seek for! The moon orbiting the 61 Cygni A's gas giant already has half a millennia of history, a colony of four hundred millions waiting for the adventurous, almost like a new Earth!
Hope, a world where human settled since long ago, a world well-known, the original ecosystem subjugated and mixed with that of Earth, creating an environment where we can prosper. Cities and towns spread out among the wide open spaces, it could be a true idyllic world.
After landing, however, a part of the truth soon reveals, which is quenched by space media. The planet is not only alive, it even had intelligent races, whose remaining members cooperate with radical environmentalists for executing bloody terror attacks against the footholds of human civilization...
Backgrounds
The story was mostly completed in the end of 2016, being the first large novel in the cheetaan universe, which I hope more will follow. We see great discoveries these days, space beyond our solar system is opening up, we realize how wonderfully complex and diverse worlds could exist far away. These thoughts inspire, “what if”... The same time here is our old Earth, the only planet with the miracle of life today and for long, the only place where we could thrive, which we should protect, preserve, and invent how we could live in harmony with each other and this place's ecology which is the foundation of our own living. The story isn't a utopia, I didn't even intend to convey it as such. Everything operates and acts by its own design and inherent rules, which could be very much against our ideals of morals and good will. However, hopefully it could still convey something, if nothing else, a strange, unusual adventure.
Currently the story is Hungarian only as it is my native language, and try as hard as I wish, without real life English experience I can not get something of such magnitude done in an adequate quality. However, I hope that at some point, possibly with a native speaker's help (probably a migrated Hungarian), an English translation could eventually be realized.
Category Story / Fantasy
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Gender Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 1.93 MB
Though I cannot read this, the combination of anthro cheetah people and flying reptilian wyvern/dragons plus invading human colonists makes one think you possibly had inspiration from the Avatar film -- is that correct? Are you looking forward to the coming sequel? Is this published anywhere in Hungarian? Is there a Hungarian Amazon where people can publish online stories?
No Avatar inspiration. Blergh :p I mean that film beyond the visuals is, to put it mildly, cringey! The concept of this world and even parts of the story existed as early as the mid 2000s, I have quite some artwork around. But it took a lot of time to get to the point I felt confident enough in my grasp of this complex design to write the novel. The overall concept has similarities, but that's all.
Unfortunately there was no reader base, even from my friends, I could only get a single person to read it, who helped a bit in grammar. I never got any feedback beyond that, no publishing, whatsoever, it is dead.
I am struggling to produce an English translation hoping that beyond Hungary people might actually be interested in this sort of thing. I honestly regret that I did this one in Hungarian despite that of course I can write a lot better in my native language. With no interest, it doesn't matter at all. Part of the translation is done as an initial draft, could pass it to you if you would like to see what it is like, but it really needs to be complete. I know in particular you might be asking a lot of questions whose answers would be revealed in latter parts of the story, but could also be interesting to have an impression of what this world is like.
Unfortunately there was no reader base, even from my friends, I could only get a single person to read it, who helped a bit in grammar. I never got any feedback beyond that, no publishing, whatsoever, it is dead.
I am struggling to produce an English translation hoping that beyond Hungary people might actually be interested in this sort of thing. I honestly regret that I did this one in Hungarian despite that of course I can write a lot better in my native language. With no interest, it doesn't matter at all. Part of the translation is done as an initial draft, could pass it to you if you would like to see what it is like, but it really needs to be complete. I know in particular you might be asking a lot of questions whose answers would be revealed in latter parts of the story, but could also be interesting to have an impression of what this world is like.
Well, there certainly seems to be similarities with the feline like natives and Wyverns, plus invading humans from Earth. If your novel was formally published, even in Hungarian, you might be able to acheive wealth and fame by suing James Cameron, and American publishers will flock to sell your book in English! But I don't suppose the felines ride the Wyverns, or do they ever?
Eh, that doesn't quite work that way :) Regarding Avatar versus New World 2648, there are similarities, but the two came into existence in parallel, for Avatar to take any influence from this is simply impossible. If anything, they rather blatantly ripped off this game: Albion , the whole concept is the same, but they managed to botch up the story horribly. If they just followed it as the game was written, it would have been a good film. It was released in 1995! The difference between Albion and Avatar is less substantial than my story from either.
There is no portrayed occurrence of riding in the story, however if defined as a Xi or Nir occurring on the back of an Akri while the Akri is flying, then yes, riding does happen. But from Skyworld, you can imagine that "riding" could well mean that for the person there the only comforting part of the fact may be that at least it is not like falling to his death. Or being in a less desirable position relative to the dragon. Especially not like a position overlapping in three dimensional space around the dragon's midsection.
There is no portrayed occurrence of riding in the story, however if defined as a Xi or Nir occurring on the back of an Akri while the Akri is flying, then yes, riding does happen. But from Skyworld, you can imagine that "riding" could well mean that for the person there the only comforting part of the fact may be that at least it is not like falling to his death. Or being in a less desirable position relative to the dragon. Especially not like a position overlapping in three dimensional space around the dragon's midsection.
Translation?
Waiting patiently.
Just a few jumps away.
Nope, you are not escaping this!
Waiting patiently.
Just a few jumps away.
Nope, you are not escaping this!
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