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pacing is a bit off. could have had a lead in with 2 frames of just mindless chatter or walking to set the scene. otherwise its good.
Right, cause I wanted the "look out" to be interrupting the lecture he's giving but I didn't have any speech bubbles or anything. I was kinda hoping that putting the tower in other pages would give some spatial awareness and make up for the sudden jump of the frame from characters to setting, but it might have still made it a bit awkward. Thanks for the input!
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