Concept from the story: Going up in Flames
Written by Leo_Todrius
Commissioned by yoshiboy1
Based off of the "Secret of Mana" species
Artwork By: Oc_Foxx

This page consists of a short chase across a street and falling down a slope into a wooded area of a park. Flammie is seen by the imagination of the human as a beast and monster in his minds eye. As the human hasn"t really gotten a good look at flammie. All the while his imagination is running wild in fear as something or someone was chasing him. There is a lot of text in this one mainly to cover a good portion of what is going on. The next pages will have much less text and quite a bit more action.

In all honesty I am kinda not to happy with this page, but if I were to nit pick what I currently had I"d never get this page done. Its one of those pages were you gotta keep it simple and go with the flow other wise the story will never get done.