Hi there.
So, finally here my Visual Novel... test... DEMO... XD
After I did this one I learned no some tricks, with Witty help, thank you Witty~~
So, it´s short and simple, but I have some plans to a little more longer and better versions.
For now, I hope you guys enjoy to play as I enjoyed to make... make/play... XD
Here is the link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/eb8eeuos4.....0-all.zip?dl=0
You guys can give me a feedback, it would be nice to me improve in future projects.
Thank you~~
So, finally here my Visual Novel... test... DEMO... XD
After I did this one I learned no some tricks, with Witty help, thank you Witty~~
So, it´s short and simple, but I have some plans to a little more longer and better versions.
For now, I hope you guys enjoy to play as I enjoyed to make... make/play... XD
Here is the link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/eb8eeuos4.....0-all.zip?dl=0
You guys can give me a feedback, it would be nice to me improve in future projects.
Thank you~~
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Gender Any
Size 1280 x 960px
File Size 694.9 kB
This looks SOOOOOOOO good so far! The only thing I can say wrong about it is that having animated scenes like the blowjob is good, but the fade in is too slow and it looks weird. Either shorten the time between frames or add more frames.
Nice, thank you~~
Oh yes, I figured out how to do some animations after I did this, ahahah. I try to work better in this version. In future projects, I hope to do some animations.
Oh yes, I figured out how to do some animations after I did this, ahahah. I try to work better in this version. In future projects, I hope to do some animations.
Art is great as always.
As said already, the fade transition for the sex scene "movement" is slightly jarring.
Don't know if a bug or not but I didn't hear any music or sfx.
The spelling is fine for a demo but you should polish it up for final release. :P
Looking forward to see the final product!
As said already, the fade transition for the sex scene "movement" is slightly jarring.
Don't know if a bug or not but I didn't hear any music or sfx.
The spelling is fine for a demo but you should polish it up for final release. :P
Looking forward to see the final product!
Oh, thank you~~
Yes, I'll work on this, I hope to do some animations on the future projects.
Nah, I could not find some sound effects/music or figured out a way to do some, if you have some tips or
sounds of wet or moanings will be helpfull.. XD
Nice, good to know.
Yes, I'll work on this, I hope to do some animations on the future projects.
Nah, I could not find some sound effects/music or figured out a way to do some, if you have some tips or
sounds of wet or moanings will be helpfull.. XD
Nice, good to know.
It's not working for me. I've downloaded it twice, removed all security for it and followed the instructions by the letter. Yet every time I try to start it up, nothing happens at all. What do I do?
Hum, I don´t know. I just know ren'py use python language... but I have no clue. I´ll searsh some possible issues for the next time.
Oh, thank you~~
Yep, I´ll give a close look on this to do some way better.. XD
I´m glad to know, and I can't have enough of Renamon too, ahahah.
Yep, I´ll give a close look on this to do some way better.. XD
I´m glad to know, and I can't have enough of Renamon too, ahahah.
The fade between frames during the sex scene needs to be smoothed out, but other than that I thought it was an enjoyable, short story. Maybe some partial transparency in the dialogue box would look better...unless there's nothing drawn behind it!
Yup, I´ll work on this fades.. XD
Nice, good to know~~
Oh, I don't know how to change aspect yet, but I'm trying to learn more.
Nice, good to know~~
Oh, I don't know how to change aspect yet, but I'm trying to learn more.
I can't tell you anything you haven't been made aware of but otherwise, this looks great! Can't wait for a full game!
I'll be honest with you, since I do respect your work a lot.
It's a good start, and it definitely has potential, but the animation needs a /LOT/ of work, it's quite dazzling when the animations play and it sorta just fades back and forth and so on, gave me a headache.
Another thing to work on I'd say is maybe some customization once some of the other things are smoothed out? I know not everyone really enjoys the huge hanging breasts and thunder thighs, myself included in that group.
Other than that though there's a lot of promise here, the artstyle is unique to say the least and it isn't displeasing to the eyes, unlike a few other animations like this. Can't wait to see what shows up next though!
It's a good start, and it definitely has potential, but the animation needs a /LOT/ of work, it's quite dazzling when the animations play and it sorta just fades back and forth and so on, gave me a headache.
Another thing to work on I'd say is maybe some customization once some of the other things are smoothed out? I know not everyone really enjoys the huge hanging breasts and thunder thighs, myself included in that group.
Other than that though there's a lot of promise here, the artstyle is unique to say the least and it isn't displeasing to the eyes, unlike a few other animations like this. Can't wait to see what shows up next though!
Oh, it was not precisely an animation, I had done a image sequel and used some effects of ren'py, now I learned some tricks to let this dissolve effect a little more slow. For next projects I wish to try some animations since I learned to do some cycles in ren'py.
Thank you for the consideration, and good to know that you want to see more. =3
Thank you for the consideration, and good to know that you want to see more. =3
Nice, good to know. =D
Yes, I will do, I having fun with this. =3
Yes, I will do, I having fun with this. =3
Good to hear you have fun with it ! haha really enjoy this type of Visual Novels x3 They're always fun
Hey, i download this game for my phone, then I hooked up my phone to my computer. How do I start the game?
I like the art style, but i feel like this VN is not really doing what it's set out to do in terms of the title. A waifu I'm pretty sure is an actual wife, not a room-mate or someone close (of course in the fictional world) and i feel like this renamon is too different from the actual renamon, when i think of a waifu, i think people want them as one because of their traits or personality, not just appearance, which is also altered. In the show renamon isn't a pudding addict or even eats that much at all, i can believe that Digimon can get fat/chubby like guilmon but to me it only makes sense if it's part of their character.
I feel the right way to write her is to be as close to the renamon we all know, and not someone that just looks like her, otherwise it's just an imposter that took her name. Also the fact she's jsut into having sex with you is odd, i think many who wish to be with a certain fictional character want to have a normal married life, it's nearly there with the cooking but i would like for them to be more of a couple than fuck buddies. Perhaps you could give a reason as to why she wants your cum so badly, maybe that if she doesn't get your seed on a daily or weekly basis, she's degenerate, and maybe there's a time limit to the relationship, that eventually she'll be sent back to the digital world , or not.
To me, if i was a better artist and didn't get frustrated with renpys coding, i would write the situation eerily similar but renamon closer to her original portrayal: You come home from work, she's laying on her flat stomach reading one of your dirty magazines, you've told her time and again to stop snooping but she's too curious not to look, her ass bare and her only clothing was a tied up apron, waiting for the food to be ready. you move over to her and without turning her head, she asks coyly "what do you think you're doing?" you get closer and begin touching her soft yellow cheeks and she asks another question in the same manner, without moving an inch "i don't remember giving you permission to touch my ass." ignoring her arrogant attitude, you slip in some fingers with your left hand whilst massaging her rump with the other. you her her groan and claims defeat "Am i to assume you're a tad pent up from work? Well i suppose i could give you my consent, but be quick, our dinner's almost done."
Not telling you what to do, i just hope that maybe if you make another waifu story, it'll be more close to the character so we can see the character people wanted as a wife, to act like one and not some horny home wrecker. A minor point but can help the immersion, perhaps add a function to name the main character.
I feel the right way to write her is to be as close to the renamon we all know, and not someone that just looks like her, otherwise it's just an imposter that took her name. Also the fact she's jsut into having sex with you is odd, i think many who wish to be with a certain fictional character want to have a normal married life, it's nearly there with the cooking but i would like for them to be more of a couple than fuck buddies. Perhaps you could give a reason as to why she wants your cum so badly, maybe that if she doesn't get your seed on a daily or weekly basis, she's degenerate, and maybe there's a time limit to the relationship, that eventually she'll be sent back to the digital world , or not.
To me, if i was a better artist and didn't get frustrated with renpys coding, i would write the situation eerily similar but renamon closer to her original portrayal: You come home from work, she's laying on her flat stomach reading one of your dirty magazines, you've told her time and again to stop snooping but she's too curious not to look, her ass bare and her only clothing was a tied up apron, waiting for the food to be ready. you move over to her and without turning her head, she asks coyly "what do you think you're doing?" you get closer and begin touching her soft yellow cheeks and she asks another question in the same manner, without moving an inch "i don't remember giving you permission to touch my ass." ignoring her arrogant attitude, you slip in some fingers with your left hand whilst massaging her rump with the other. you her her groan and claims defeat "Am i to assume you're a tad pent up from work? Well i suppose i could give you my consent, but be quick, our dinner's almost done."
Not telling you what to do, i just hope that maybe if you make another waifu story, it'll be more close to the character so we can see the character people wanted as a wife, to act like one and not some horny home wrecker. A minor point but can help the immersion, perhaps add a function to name the main character.
This reminds me a lot of Monster Girl Quest, in a good way~ One of my favorite H-Games.
I wouldnt mind helping you out with some of the text dialogues too, if you needed it. Some of the English is still kind of broken and can bring people out of the 'experience'.
I wouldnt mind helping you out with some of the text dialogues too, if you needed it. Some of the English is still kind of broken and can bring people out of the 'experience'.
I had no idea what I was getting into, but this is amazing! I'm sure someone somewhere will find a way to criticize it, but I can appreciate the massive amount of work it takes to do something like this. GREAT JOB!
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