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Dear lord real life crud and drama can really get in the way of things! But at long last not only is my newest submission available for reading but it's the long overdue third chapter of my big sci-fi story!
In this chapter folks we are introduced to some key figures that will indeed play some pretty significant roles as the story goes on. Some will be good..some bad..you'll just have to wait and see.
But also..something I think many of you were really waiting for; In this chapter I debut the big villain of the story! I hope you all like this little teaser of them and their motivations. I hope you enjoy this one folks, let me know how it goes.
In this chapter folks we are introduced to some key figures that will indeed play some pretty significant roles as the story goes on. Some will be good..some bad..you'll just have to wait and see.
But also..something I think many of you were really waiting for; In this chapter I debut the big villain of the story! I hope you all like this little teaser of them and their motivations. I hope you enjoy this one folks, let me know how it goes.
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Koie: Excellent chapter! Your story is really taking shape. I can’t wait to see where it goes from here. I really liked how you showed both the confusion and amazement of the each party. Keep up the good work! :)
Tooie: Very good! The best chapter yet! I really love how you make the human in the story to be the alien. That's how I feel about 'em sometimes. ^_^ Furries are awesome! Look forward to the next one!
Pretty good. :) It's nice to see you following my advice about writing shorter paragraph, I really think it improved the flow. Eager for the rest! ^_^
Well uh..thank you. ^_^ Glad to hear your liking the story! Expect the next chapter soon
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