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Well, it took me a while, but here is the next snippet of Shards of Beauty. The first can be found here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/474502/
Rough draft, so again, critique welcome. I also wrote this at 4 in the morning, so for the love of God, someone, help me edit this.
This introduces a new character, Bataar, the saiga antelope. I haven't drawn a picture yet, but that's on the to-do list. Yeah, that... really long... and... I'll get to it someday. Meantime, here, for a visual.
http://laelaps.files.wordpress.com/.....7/08/saiga.jpg
http://gliving.tv/nature/wp-content.....a-antelope.jpg
For the Edge Project of Animals, put together by
farorenightclaw . If you want to know more, look here: http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/75051/
Or here: http://edge-project.deviantart.com
Rough draft, so again, critique welcome. I also wrote this at 4 in the morning, so for the love of God, someone, help me edit this.
This introduces a new character, Bataar, the saiga antelope. I haven't drawn a picture yet, but that's on the to-do list. Yeah, that... really long... and... I'll get to it someday. Meantime, here, for a visual.
http://laelaps.files.wordpress.com/.....7/08/saiga.jpg
http://gliving.tv/nature/wp-content.....a-antelope.jpg
For the Edge Project of Animals, put together by
farorenightclaw . If you want to know more, look here: http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/75051/Or here: http://edge-project.deviantart.com
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Gender Male
Size 120 x 87px
File Size 24 kB
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In all honesty I’ve fallen in love with story. There is a superb quality of character despite what little we have. The world brittles with potential from what we have here on FA. It is very fascinating. The pathos is all very alluring.
I hope you’ve done some more or you have this offline on a publishing block because it’s great.
I hope you’ve done some more or you have this offline on a publishing block because it’s great.
I'm very glad you've enjoyed this story. Originally I had planned more with these characters and setting, but lost the impetus.
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