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Perfect addiction
The look in your eyes,
Some would call evil,
But the beauty I see
Is all but unreal
The imige I see
When seeing your body's I'mpressions
Some would claim flaws
yet I see perfection
Deep in your heart
None truely see
you think it damaged
yet see not the beauty I see
One look and I fall
to your every whim
yet you don't use that,
and that's tourtures no end.
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Perfect addiction
The look in your eyes,
Some would call evil,
But the beauty I see
Is all but unreal
The imige I see
When seeing your body's I'mpressions
Some would claim flaws
yet I see perfection
Deep in your heart
None truely see
you think it damaged
yet see not the beauty I see
One look and I fall
to your every whim
yet you don't use that,
and that's tourtures no end.
This was a old work I wrote for a friend, who, at the time, couldn't understand my obsession with him. well, i had lost it in some paperwork, and happened across it today, so here it is. and hopefully, I won't get hit in the head for my bad spelling.
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thanks. It's not all that great, really. but it was kinda one of my better ones. I'm planning to make some more poems as soon as I get some inspiration or get hired. As well as post some of my stories up as well.
Well I could definitely feel the emotion in the poem, and I look forward to more poems. Though I may not have the time to comment on them, because time is tight nowadays for me, unfortunately.
It's ok. I'm just looking for somewhere where people will actually see my work.
You've refined it substantially...it's much better now.
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