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Summary: A tiny victim gives us commentary on her situation.
Just practice mostly, trying to get back in the swing of things. I'm not particularly proud of this, but it's not too often I am. You may like it, but I don't.
Loosely based off of this image: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u.....heela_gulp.jpg
Lysithea belongs to me.
Google docs link if you can't be assed to download: https://docs.google.com/document/d/.....it?usp=sharing
Summary: A tiny victim gives us commentary on her situation.
Just practice mostly, trying to get back in the swing of things. I'm not particularly proud of this, but it's not too often I am. You may like it, but I don't.
Loosely based off of this image: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u.....heela_gulp.jpg
Lysithea belongs to me.
Google docs link if you can't be assed to download: https://docs.google.com/document/d/.....it?usp=sharing
Category Story / Macro / Micro
Species Unspecified / Any
Gender Female
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 55.9 kB
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Lysi never stops ticking the squirm spots in my mind. \o/
And here I thought that I'm quite good at writing such kinds of stories. But alas, I'm lacking in ability to make my stories more... "realistic". I have so much to learn. And you're quite a good role model in that.
You story, good sir, is immensely enjoyable to read. For a moment I felt as if I was that little unlucky miss in Lysithea's shoe. An ability to write such addictive stories is is a gift. Develop and improve it as much as it is possible.
Good luck in your future works.
You story, good sir, is immensely enjoyable to read. For a moment I felt as if I was that little unlucky miss in Lysithea's shoe. An ability to write such addictive stories is is a gift. Develop and improve it as much as it is possible.
Good luck in your future works.
You're way too kind. I still feel I have much to learn and I don't think I'd make a role model for anyone.
However, I thank you for the praise and kind words. I'll certainly keep doing what I do.
However, I thank you for the praise and kind words. I'll certainly keep doing what I do.
You deserve every word of praise that's directed to you and don't you forget that.
True, it's a part of human's life... pokemon's life too... to learn. For me, however, you learned enough to be called "great". But don't stop at "great", seek "the best".
I'll wait for your next story. I care not how much I'll have to wait! I'll wait as much as it's necessary. I know it's worth it...
I hope it didn't sound like a sign of obsession, because I don't have one...
True, it's a part of human's life... pokemon's life too... to learn. For me, however, you learned enough to be called "great". But don't stop at "great", seek "the best".
I'll wait for your next story. I care not how much I'll have to wait! I'll wait as much as it's necessary. I know it's worth it...
I hope it didn't sound like a sign of obsession, because I don't have one...
Not a bad piece given how unfamiliar you seem with the style, you sell yourself short a lot dude. Loved this, and it is nice to see you use some of your other characters. Glad to see you trying to get your rhythm back
I'm not unfamiliar with it. I started out doing nothing but 1st person before moving into the 3rd. It just came out bad.
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