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Meloney Dunning

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Needs more polish

Overall
3 out of 5 stars
Performance
4 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 02-22-23

The story was relatable to a point, but there were times when I felt I wanted to hurry the author along. As with many authors who incorporate smoking into their characters, the focus felt very heavy on that ritual while the focus on any other ritualistic details of characters seemed light. Lastly, the attempt to refer back to the Monica Lewinsky story and encourage the reader to draw parallels felt forced, popping up out of nowhere from time to time. Overall, the story was good and the time of life it refers to is an area of growth that is always interesting, but it felt like it needed more polishing.

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