Y'know I was going to do a joke review for this game because "haha funny protogen titties" and also cause I did all of this mostly as a bet, but to be honest the game was somewhat enjoyable so I'll give it an earnest review. (mostly cause it's getting a sequel too). I don't play visual novels often either, my last one was Komorebi because it had Shinji Ikari's VA.

I think what My Furry Protogen suffers from is massive exposition dumps and horrid pacing at times. Like I could give a rats ass that i'm the "chosen one", you haven't given me a reason to relate to the character whatsoever. And also at the end it feels incredibly rushed. Do I really need to see FOUR "plot" scenes within the span of 10 minutes, back to back? Unfortunate doesn't even begin to describe how awful that pacing is. Underneath the glaring issues though, it has merit and I believe with the sequel it could be a genuinely good story. The story itself is interesting and I thoroughly enjoyed it throughout, so i'm giving it a positive review since there is a sequel coming out next month. If the exposition dumps were cut down and the "plot" scenes were actually spaced out, I think you've got a nice static visual novel. The art was fairly good, though the backgrounds need to be less blurred, at times I felt my eyes straining.

Overall, I'd give My Furry Protogen a solid 8/10. Could use some work on the story side, with some minor touchups on the art side and the sequel could be an amazing visual novel. Ending was nice too.

Y'know I was going to do a joke review for this game because "haha funny protogen titties" and also cause I did all of this mostly as a bet, but to be honest the game was somewhat enjoyable so I'll give it an earnest review. (mostly cause it's getting a sequel too). I don't play visual novels often either, my last one was Komorebi because it had Shinji Ikari's VA. I think what My Furry Protogen suffers from is massive exposition dumps and horrid pacing at times. Like I could give a rats ass that i'm the "chosen one", you haven't given me a reason to relate to the character whatsoever. And also at the end it feels incredibly rushed. Do I really need to see [b]FOUR[/b] "plot" scenes within the span of 10 minutes, back to back? Unfortunate doesn't even begin to describe how awful that pacing is. Underneath the glaring issues though, it has merit and I believe with the sequel it could be a genuinely good story. The story itself is interesting and I thoroughly enjoyed it throughout, so i'm giving it a positive review since there is a sequel coming out next month. If the exposition dumps were cut down and the "plot" scenes were actually spaced out, I think you've got a nice static visual novel. The art was fairly good, though the backgrounds need to be less blurred, at times I felt my eyes straining. Overall, I'd give My Furry Protogen a solid 8/10. Could use some work on the story side, with some minor touchups on the art side and the sequel could be an amazing visual novel. Ending was nice too.