Talk:Plaxton Pointer

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This article or parts of it were created based, in whole or in part, on this version of the English Wikipedia article. The complete history of the article can be found there. –Davey2010^Talk 11:44, 27 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Lede

I had no idea what a Plaxton Pointer (PP) was. I read the first sentence, and so I thought PP was the general term for bus bodies. Even though the rest of the lede clarifies what is meant, a reader could be confused. That's why I've made the first sentence a bid more complicated -- but, I think, clearer.Kdammers (talk) 20:36, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, Thank you for your changes, The lead currently says "The Plaxton Pointer is the body of a bus." - To me that tells the reader everything they would need to know ?, I see where you're coming from but imho your version reads more confusing than what's already there but others may disagree, You'd be more than welcome to go to WP:Simple talk and seek opinions on this, Thanks, –Davey2010^Talk 22:36, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]