This was the first VN I ever started reading a couple of months ago, and I really love it. It's absolutely my genre: horror/drama. I like the main character, but sometimes I hate him and shout some nasty words against the... monitor . ;)
due to my mental health, i wont be able to continue going down the path that the main character is heading in, but i hope this vn does well! it deserves nothing but the best, and i deeply respect the amount of effort that goes into every detail of the storytelling & art
Hello. Is there a Russian language planned? The game is very interesting, but due to the machine translation I use, it is very difficult to understand it. Thank you for your reply.
I'm betting 1 or 2 or even 3 of the cast will die next update. Or even drevoni village (I forgot name) will be wiped out by demons when they get back. The red flags is as clear as day rn.
- No, I can't do this anymore, can you tell me what you think about it?
- FUCKING SPOILERS!!!
- People have lived side by side with beastmen for who knows how long, then a mystical mechanism appears on the planet from somewhere and people strive to decipher it, led by a mysterious whisper, so people decided to create a translator to decipher this whisper, but instead they created a strange AI, and guess what they did with it, that's right, they began to use it, and this AI developed with their help, it grew like a living baby, until self-awareness developed in it and it decided to "ascend", that is, to become real, and for this it needed to merge with the human self, why with the human one? Yes, because it was people who got into the work of that mechanism, however, beastmen are not made of soft dough, they decided, you see, to eliminate the root of all evil, namely, to exterminate all people... No, I'm serious, they chased people all over the world, hunted them, burned their bodies and ate their meat, first they did it for survival, then for hunting, and then just for the sake of sports, until there was no one left of the people at all. So, there was a man, and he lived with his family, mother, younger brother and sister, and of course they lived during ALL this, until one night, the beastmen approached their house, the man ordered his family to flee, and he stayed, they cried, but left when the beastmen they broke into the house, they dragged the man outside, they beat, kicked and mocked him, there was a lot of blood and the sounds of breaking bones, until they poured kerosene on him and burned him alive, saying how pathetic he was, weak, that it was all his fault, and the man himself swore to himself that he would make to pay them all, he swore to himself that he would make them go through the same thing, he swore to himself that he would burn them all.
- And now tell me, please, would you, experiencing all this yourself, not want justice? If not to yourself, then to your kind?
Absolutely mystifying beautiful. So fucking well written, the characters are amazing, and I have to say, love Tahri with all my heart. This story is a cake that I am Absolutely destroying. I can't wait for the next update! (Although it may take a while) but I am so glad I finally read this
The new update is incredible, and the path the MC is taking is very interesting, not to mention justifiable in a way (Not that I agree, of course, because Laken will definitely be sad when he finds out, and I don't have the heart for that).
this trip... Why do I feel like someone is going to die on this trip? Great update, looking forward to the rest!!
Ps: Has anyone who plays on PC also noticed an image that didn't appear in the game in the "game" folder, "You_let_me_d ie"? I don't know if she appears at any other point in the game, I'm pretty sure she doesn't appear at any point. Does it show up for anyone else?
I felt the same thing, for sure someone will die on this journey, and I think it will be Takhi due to her history with blackzones and how her entire plot was built around that, now we have a chance for her to overcome her trauma and conclude her character journey....in the end we won't get the "naked spar" she want
I have finished the new build and MAN did everyone involved absolutely popped off.
Writing, art, tension, humor and horror were so on point.
I am both loving and warry of what our mc is becoming, it's an interesting tale of a rightful revenge twisting one morals and that eventually might turn him into what he swore to destroy, a demon.
The art absolutely popped off i loved the lake SO FREAKING MUCH, and also the nigthmare??!? so fucking good.
I really can't remember the last time i've been THIS hyped for a story in a VN, this chapter might possibly solidify Soulcreek as my favorite vn.
Much love and great work to all of those involved.
Hahahahahaha! I am so satisfied and excited! Finished the latest chapter and it was awesome! The plot thickens every time! I can't wait for the next chapter again, not after that!
My friend recommended this game and it's really nic I have to say not a fan of the creepy noises but I like relaxing reading everything while watching true crime really sets the mood lol, it's a great read and even better high, I can't stop laughing in the best way possible the honey badger is my favorite so far!!!
- There will be fucking SPOILERS and a little bit of opinion about the game.
- This pathetic empty-headed chewing toy for hounds, I swear to God, I wanted to personally strangle him a thousand and one times, not only does he contradict himself in search of his own, but after learning the truth about who he is and what happened to him, he is like «fuck people, I'll go fuck dogs» the most pathetic crybaby narcissus who starts to get hysterical only raise your noice at him Loken is really a degenerate once he fell in love with him because if I were on his mesa, I'd wring his neck!
- Glitch is the best character of all! He was TOO good for this whole world of fucking idiots, so he didn't really resist at the time of his death. Respect to Glitch!
With all due respect, I don't see the problem with the MC. (I haven't reread this VN a while so my information may be lacking.) Sure, the beginning of the story introducing the MC was a rocky start. I don't like the MC at first but as I read through the story, I see some character development. (Villain arc.) If I may ask, what problems are you having on the MC? Your comment didn't really explain it for me that well. (Or I'm just dumb.)
Dont mind me, just saying stuff thats totally spoilers and praising the game, dont read this new person, it may spoil the surprise :)
May I just say? whenever there is an encounter with one of those demons, there is something... weirdly familiar about them? I think they personally remind me of Giygas from earth bound, very strong, but barely sentient beings of pure rage and pain, contorted and absolutely fucked up. Love it, perfect amount of messed up. also I totally have a gut feeling what our personally little head buddy is... keeps us safe, and is unlike the demons... almost like a...
Guardian angel???
Anyway, absolutely loved this, perfect amount of unease from the audio samples used. Also weird that blackrunners seem to have had human traits that make them stand out, like human eyes, or hair... or even remembering things that they shouldn't hmmmmmm I like where this is going... Pray, keep up the outstanding work!
(In my opinion some times mc is a bit...but from the other hand I don't know what would I do if I would be in his shoes ,just some time it feels a bit forced to drive the story further but still I like him a lot.)
I really like your work and I'm waiting in anticipation for new updates!
I'll be honest. I don't do very well with horror, especially of the eldritch and cosmic varieties. It's one of those things for me. So I might get my own visit from Glitch tonight. But also - I took a chance on this story, and it was worth the risk. The horror wasn't too strong or intrusive, it built up naturally, and it was, well, good. The story flows incredibly well, and I'm frankly inspired by what you've done here. Nothing was out of place. And, well. I might not make it to the end of this ride, for my own sake - but I'm very eager to see where it goes.
I think all the Blackrunners are in some way. Mylo has this 'super-genius' talent, and he doesn't understand the purpose of hierarchies, which is a common trait you can see in autistic kids. Blackrunners have their mutations, the things that mark them as different as children... until they grow up. Like how an autistic person might learn to mask it when they get older. And apparently they usually excel in one of the Four over the others.
Nitro admittedly doesn't quite fit into the theory for me but also him having ESP - having psychometry - certainly is something different.
I started the game and I'll tell you what - it's just a masterpiece. The beginning was not bad, and then - just incredible! The moment of meeting with you-will-find-out will give you goosebumps. What can I say about the characters: most of them are extremely interesting, as is the setting. Aeyon and Takhi are my favorites (of the minor ones, of course, Loken is forever in my heart). And as it turned out, playing the "apeshit" rout (despise, fight, stand your ground) was funny and surprisingly good. I wish the author or authors good luck in continuing their work and hope they will be fine! P.S. I forgot about the Byte. The favorite trope of the AI character. His presence is comforting T_T.
Just finished the current build. Absolutely amazing job. I can tell you put a lot of work into this. It's very polished. The story and characters are interesting and engaging. Can't wait for more.
I have finished the current build and i must say this is was an FASNTASTIC experience. I'll go ahead and list things i have loved as well as somethings i thinks that could be worked on:
CHARACTERS;
The characters are all very engaging and none of them felt boring or out of place, it truly feels like the creator took time with the connections between characters and their Backstories. I also love that Loken has signs of being on the spectrum, i found him to be such a conforting character and i really well writen one. The MC is also such a fascinating thing and the main driving mystery.
SOUND DESIGN/MUSIC;
I actually REALLY love how quiet this VN is. I love the use of ambient sounds instead of constant soundtracks, i think it really helps build tension and gives you that feeling of emptiness of the world, it also makes moments where there are ACTUAL soundtracks playing feel much more impactful. I also LOOOOVE the sounds that were used with the demons, truly horrofying sounds.
STORY/THEMES;
I like the themes of humanity and the meaning of "being human" in the story. We get a lot of those moments with BYTE and even with other characters, as the MC doesnt time to realise just how "human" everyone else actually is, making him feel alone in this world. I like the philosophical debates that happen with BYTE alot as well such as question the nature of what it means to be truly alive. I ALSO love that the sexual content is not too intrusive and actually has relevance in the story.
ARTSTYLE;
I absolytely LOVE the artstyle and how it feels like we are looking and an oiled painting, at some moments it reminded me of DARKWOOD, specially inside the blackzones.
WHAT COULD BE WORKED ON;
Honestly, there aren't many negative things to say about this VN, but i will say that i wish to see more use of CGs and-or ilustrative artwork of crucial moments. I feel like moments like when Loken was telling the story of the badger of carmine there could be a simple, not so explicit CG showing us the POV of Tahki or perhaps just showing a small snipet of it; At the same time i get it that the UNKOWN plays a huge part in creating tension and fear unto the player and i personally think the decision to not show much is FANTASTIC, but perhaps in the future there could be a biiiiit more MINIMALISTIC CGs, nothing too telling.
ANYWAYS, this VN is fantastic and honestly one of the best experiences i've had reading a furry VN, i wish only the best for all of those involved in creating this project.
Ahhh nice to see another fan of Darkwood, truly underrated game! And yeah when i first saw the first blackzone all i could think of was that game, WHICH IS A HUGE COMPLIMENT.
I have never been interested in visual novels before. I found them boring and uninteresting. Not all of them, but most of what I had downloaded. Not this.
This is far - no, beyond my expectations. I anticipated a story that would just be sex all round, but no, THIS is better than that. It's more than that. It's a story that not everyone might comprehend but I did. It's not just a plot, it's a whole different world. And I love it.
The characters have their own sets of personalities, each distinct with the other's. It's interesting, If you dig deeper. I have never been this invested in a game before, I have been captivated. This is what I want. I didn't even realize that I had been playing for 16 hours and 47 minutes.
It's more than my mind can properly wrap around in. It brought me to a different realm that bore fear, uncertainty, anticipation, and fury into my soul. Therefore, I shall wait for the new update. Not patiently, but I will wait. Thank you to the developers.
I've made it a routine to read this for an hour before bed so I was disappointed to learn 10min into tonight's session that I caught up! Im super invested in this story and can't wait for further builds
Just finished what is currently there... And wow! I was worried when I got to the end of act 1 because it felt like it was finishing, glad it has an act 2.
This made me cry... The part before the second dish, Tabi. Very good.
How I wish Alex would tell Byte and Loken about stuff though... Something is gonna go wrong because of him keeping secrets, hoping it won't burn any bridges.
But also the way Alex acts is very human with everything that happened, so while I wish he would share stuff; I understand why he struggles to.
However I do have a question, I don't know if I missed stuff or misinterpreted it? The Blackzones instil a constant Flight or Fight in anyone who doesn't have vigour or unattuned vigour. However there have been multiple examples of people without vigour just not being in that state? Not noticing they are in a blackzone? Like the people of Carmine(Oxtail?) building within one and not noticing. As well as mentions of travellers accidently going into one and dying because they didn't know. And Loken saying he struggles to tell where borders are sometimes because of weak wit?
I guess it could be that the borders have a much weaker psychic effect unless people have Wit? But I feel like people would notice if everyone in their group was feeling even a little anxious all at once.
If anyone knows or interpreted stuff differently then let me know.
Unrelated, Miya has human hair mutation! 0 Wit because of her getting scammed with a bit of trash though... And Takhi sort of has human hair too... She has like long dreads which were more noticeable in the fighting CG, I guess maybe you could make long dreads out of fur but badgers don't have really long fur...
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This was the first VN I ever started reading a couple of months ago, and I really love it. It's absolutely my genre: horror/drama. I like the main character, but sometimes I hate him and shout some nasty words against the... monitor . ;)
due to my mental health, i wont be able to continue going down the path that the main character is heading in, but i hope this vn does well! it deserves nothing but the best, and i deeply respect the amount of effort that goes into every detail of the storytelling & art
holy shit just finished 0.7 downloading 0.8 cant wait
Hello. Is there a Russian language planned? The game is very interesting, but due to the machine translation I use, it is very difficult to understand it. Thank you for your reply.
SPOILER
I'm betting 1 or 2 or even 3 of the cast will die next update. Or even drevoni village (I forgot name) will be wiped out by demons when they get back. The red flags is as clear as day rn.
- No, I can't do this anymore, can you tell me what you think about it?
- FUCKING SPOILERS!!!
- People have lived side by side with beastmen for who knows how long, then a mystical mechanism appears on the planet from somewhere and people strive to decipher it, led by a mysterious whisper, so people decided to create a translator to decipher this whisper, but instead they created a strange AI, and guess what they did with it, that's right, they began to use it, and this AI developed with their help, it grew like a living baby, until self-awareness developed in it and it decided to "ascend", that is, to become real, and for this it needed to merge with the human self, why with the human one? Yes, because it was people who got into the work of that mechanism, however, beastmen are not made of soft dough, they decided, you see, to eliminate the root of all evil, namely, to exterminate all people... No, I'm serious, they chased people all over the world, hunted them, burned their bodies and ate their meat, first they did it for survival, then for hunting, and then just for the sake of sports, until there was no one left of the people at all. So, there was a man, and he lived with his family, mother, younger brother and sister, and of course they lived during ALL this, until one night, the beastmen approached their house, the man ordered his family to flee, and he stayed, they cried, but left when the beastmen they broke into the house, they dragged the man outside, they beat, kicked and mocked him, there was a lot of blood and the sounds of breaking bones, until they poured kerosene on him and burned him alive, saying how pathetic he was, weak, that it was all his fault, and the man himself swore to himself that he would make to pay them all, he swore to himself that he would make them go through the same thing, he swore to himself that he would burn them all.
- And now tell me, please, would you, experiencing all this yourself, not want justice? If not to yourself, then to your kind?
holy
Absolutely mystifying beautiful. So fucking well written, the characters are amazing, and I have to say, love Tahri with all my heart. This story is a cake that I am Absolutely destroying. I can't wait for the next update! (Although it may take a while) but I am so glad I finally read this
The new update is incredible, and the path the MC is taking is very interesting, not to mention justifiable in a way (Not that I agree, of course, because Laken will definitely be sad when he finds out, and I don't have the heart for that).
this trip... Why do I feel like someone is going to die on this trip? Great update, looking forward to the rest!!
Ps: Has anyone who plays on PC also noticed an image that didn't appear in the game in the "game" folder, "You_let_me_d ie"? I don't know if she appears at any other point in the game, I'm pretty sure she doesn't appear at any point. Does it show up for anyone else?
I felt the same thing, for sure someone will die on this journey, and I think it will be Takhi due to her history with blackzones and how her entire plot was built around that, now we have a chance for her to overcome her trauma and conclude her character journey....in the end we won't get the "naked spar" she want
Goat build
I have finished the new build and MAN did everyone involved absolutely popped off.
Writing, art, tension, humor and horror were so on point.
I am both loving and warry of what our mc is becoming, it's an interesting tale of a rightful revenge twisting one morals and that eventually might turn him into what he swore to destroy, a demon.
The art absolutely popped off i loved the lake SO FREAKING MUCH, and also the nigthmare??!? so fucking good.
I really can't remember the last time i've been THIS hyped for a story in a VN, this chapter might possibly solidify Soulcreek as my favorite vn.
Much love and great work to all of those involved.
Extremely cute CG
FFFF That soundtrack is dope
Damn! Build 8 was fantastic! I can't wait for what you have in store for us.
Hahahahahaha! I am so satisfied and excited! Finished the latest chapter and it was awesome! The plot thickens every time! I can't wait for the next chapter again, not after that!
<333
Is it out yet?
Just need to wait for 4 hours before it reaches 6PM BST. I can't wait! Ahhh! Eat my soul before I die from waiting!
Wait, 6PM? Crap. I thought it was 6AM. Time zones, man...
My friend recommended this game and it's really nic I have to say not a fan of the creepy noises but I like relaxing reading everything while watching true crime really sets the mood lol, it's a great read and even better high, I can't stop laughing in the best way possible the honey badger is my favorite so far!!!
- There will be fucking SPOILERS and a little bit of opinion about the game.
- This pathetic empty-headed chewing toy for hounds, I swear to God, I wanted to personally strangle him a thousand and one times, not only does he contradict himself in search of his own, but after learning the truth about who he is and what happened to him, he is like «fuck people, I'll go fuck dogs» the most pathetic crybaby narcissus who starts to get hysterical only raise your noice at him Loken is really a degenerate once he fell in love with him because if I were on his mesa, I'd wring his neck!
- Glitch is the best character of all! He was TOO good for this whole world of fucking idiots, so he didn't really resist at the time of his death. Respect to Glitch!
- Rest in peace, buddy..
- Oh, oh, oh, how did my words upset everyone, does it really hurt your eyes?
- Well, listen, I have nothing against minor characters, it's the main character THAT pisses me off!
- The plot, the picture, the sounds, the visual, everything is wonderful!
- But tell me, dear author, was it necessary to make the main character such a piece of shit?!
With all due respect, I don't see the problem with the MC. (I haven't reread this VN a while so my information may be lacking.) Sure, the beginning of the story introducing the MC was a rocky start. I don't like the MC at first but as I read through the story, I see some character development. (Villain arc.) If I may ask, what problems are you having on the MC? Your comment didn't really explain it for me that well. (Or I'm just dumb.)
ive been sleeping on this game for years and now that ive started it im enthralled
Dont mind me, just saying stuff thats totally spoilers and praising the game, dont read this new person, it may spoil the surprise :)
May I just say? whenever there is an encounter with one of those demons, there is something... weirdly familiar about them? I think they personally remind me of Giygas from earth bound, very strong, but barely sentient beings of pure rage and pain, contorted and absolutely fucked up. Love it, perfect amount of messed up. also I totally have a gut feeling what our personally little head buddy is... keeps us safe, and is unlike the demons... almost like a...
Guardian angel???
Anyway, absolutely loved this, perfect amount of unease from the audio samples used. Also weird that blackrunners seem to have had human traits that make them stand out, like human eyes, or hair... or even remembering things that they shouldn't hmmmmmm I like where this is going... Pray, keep up the outstanding work!
Very good work 👍
Good character !
(Especially the Hound!)
Nice idea of the audio effects !
Excellent atmosphere !
Mc is likable and we'll written.
(In my opinion some times mc is a bit...but from the other hand I don't know what would I do if I would be in his shoes ,just some time it feels a bit forced to drive the story further but still I like him a lot.)
I really like your work and I'm waiting in anticipation for new updates!
I'll be honest. I don't do very well with horror, especially of the eldritch and cosmic varieties. It's one of those things for me. So I might get my own visit from Glitch tonight. But also - I took a chance on this story, and it was worth the risk. The horror wasn't too strong or intrusive, it built up naturally, and it was, well, good. The story flows incredibly well, and I'm frankly inspired by what you've done here. Nothing was out of place. And, well. I might not make it to the end of this ride, for my own sake - but I'm very eager to see where it goes.
10,000/10
Loken is autistic and I will die on that hill and rise as a lich
I think all the Blackrunners are in some way. Mylo has this 'super-genius' talent, and he doesn't understand the purpose of hierarchies, which is a common trait you can see in autistic kids. Blackrunners have their mutations, the things that mark them as different as children... until they grow up. Like how an autistic person might learn to mask it when they get older. And apparently they usually excel in one of the Four over the others.
Nitro admittedly doesn't quite fit into the theory for me but also him having ESP - having psychometry - certainly is something different.
I started the game and I'll tell you what - it's just a masterpiece. The beginning was not bad, and then - just incredible! The moment of meeting with you-will-find-out will give you goosebumps. What can I say about the characters: most of them are extremely interesting, as is the setting. Aeyon and Takhi are my favorites (of the minor ones, of course, Loken is forever in my heart). And as it turned out, playing the "apeshit" rout (despise, fight, stand your ground) was funny and surprisingly good. I wish the author or authors good luck in continuing their work and hope they will be fine!
P.S. I forgot about the Byte. The favorite trope of the AI character. His presence is comforting T_T.
this game will mess you up real bad in many ways
10/10
a very interesting and well-done take on cosmic horror as well, with some really immersive writing. sounds are great too
loken is a good hound :)
Yeah I can't give enough complements and praise on the immersion and story and the everything in this game. So we'll done.👌👌
I truly love this game, and this story is captivating. I cant wait to see more! I'm hooked.
If Loken is around 8 feet tall, how much does he weigh? I think he may weigh 500 pounds?
How do i read the whisper of carmine?
Thank you!!
Just finished the current build. Absolutely amazing job. I can tell you put a lot of work into this. It's very polished. The story and characters are interesting and engaging. Can't wait for more.
I have finished the current build and i must say this is was an FASNTASTIC experience. I'll go ahead and list things i have loved as well as somethings i thinks that could be worked on:
CHARACTERS;
The characters are all very engaging and none of them felt boring or out of place, it truly feels like the creator took time with the connections between characters and their Backstories. I also love that Loken has signs of being on the spectrum, i found him to be such a conforting character and i really well writen one. The MC is also such a fascinating thing and the main driving mystery.
SOUND DESIGN/MUSIC;
I actually REALLY love how quiet this VN is. I love the use of ambient sounds instead of constant soundtracks, i think it really helps build tension and gives you that feeling of emptiness of the world, it also makes moments where there are ACTUAL soundtracks playing feel much more impactful. I also LOOOOVE the sounds that were used with the demons, truly horrofying sounds.
STORY/THEMES;
I like the themes of humanity and the meaning of "being human" in the story. We get a lot of those moments with BYTE and even with other characters, as the MC doesnt time to realise just how "human" everyone else actually is, making him feel alone in this world. I like the philosophical debates that happen with BYTE alot as well such as question the nature of what it means to be truly alive. I ALSO love that the sexual content is not too intrusive and actually has relevance in the story.
ARTSTYLE;
I absolytely LOVE the artstyle and how it feels like we are looking and an oiled painting, at some moments it reminded me of DARKWOOD, specially inside the blackzones.
WHAT COULD BE WORKED ON;
Honestly, there aren't many negative things to say about this VN, but i will say that i wish to see more use of CGs and-or ilustrative artwork of crucial moments. I feel like moments like when Loken was telling the story of the badger of carmine there could be a simple, not so explicit CG showing us the POV of Tahki or perhaps just showing a small snipet of it; At the same time i get it that the UNKOWN plays a huge part in creating tension and fear unto the player and i personally think the decision to not show much is FANTASTIC, but perhaps in the future there could be a biiiiit more MINIMALISTIC CGs, nothing too telling.
ANYWAYS, this VN is fantastic and honestly one of the best experiences i've had reading a furry VN, i wish only the best for all of those involved in creating this project.
OH MY GOD I KNEW THERE WAS SOMETHING THE ART REMINDED ME OF AND THE MOMENT YOU SAID DARKWOOD MY WORLD JUST COMBUSTED LIKE-
GOD I LOVE THAT GAME TT
Ahhh nice to see another fan of Darkwood, truly underrated game! And yeah when i first saw the first blackzone all i could think of was that game, WHICH IS A HUGE COMPLIMENT.
Hello just asking so this novel release build every 3 months?
I want to slap the MC sometimes. But I guess if he didn't do dumb ish, the story couldn't advance. Seriously, great story.
Loken is precious. Great VN! I love it!
i can't believe myself to cry on some vn game , great work👍🏻 when he broke the algorithm, that damn thing.😢😣
I have never been interested in visual novels before. I found them boring and uninteresting. Not all of them, but most of what I had downloaded. Not this.
This is far - no, beyond my expectations. I anticipated a story that would just be sex all round, but no, THIS is better than that. It's more than that. It's a story that not everyone might comprehend but I did. It's not just a plot, it's a whole different world. And I love it.
The characters have their own sets of personalities, each distinct with the other's. It's interesting, If you dig deeper. I have never been this invested in a game before, I have been captivated. This is what I want. I didn't even realize that I had been playing for 16 hours and 47 minutes.
It's more than my mind can properly wrap around in. It brought me to a different realm that bore fear, uncertainty, anticipation, and fury into my soul. Therefore, I shall wait for the new update. Not patiently, but I will wait. Thank you to the developers.
I've made it a routine to read this for an hour before bed so I was disappointed to learn 10min into tonight's session that I caught up! Im super invested in this story and can't wait for further builds
Just finished what is currently there... And wow! I was worried when I got to the end of act 1 because it felt like it was finishing, glad it has an act 2.
This made me cry... The part before the second dish, Tabi. Very good.
How I wish Alex would tell Byte and Loken about stuff though... Something is gonna go wrong because of him keeping secrets, hoping it won't burn any bridges.
But also the way Alex acts is very human with everything that happened, so while I wish he would share stuff; I understand why he struggles to.
However I do have a question, I don't know if I missed stuff or misinterpreted it?
The Blackzones instil a constant Flight or Fight in anyone who doesn't have vigour or unattuned vigour. However there have been multiple examples of people without vigour just not being in that state? Not noticing they are in a blackzone? Like the people of Carmine(Oxtail?) building within one and not noticing. As well as mentions of travellers accidently going into one and dying because they didn't know. And Loken saying he struggles to tell where borders are sometimes because of weak wit?
I guess it could be that the borders have a much weaker psychic effect unless people have Wit? But I feel like people would notice if everyone in their group was feeling even a little anxious all at once.
If anyone knows or interpreted stuff differently then let me know.
Unrelated, Miya has human hair mutation! 0 Wit because of her getting scammed with a bit of trash though... And Takhi sort of has human hair too... She has like long dreads which were more noticeable in the fighting CG, I guess maybe you could make long dreads out of fur but badgers don't have really long fur...
just finished act 2. Damn, well done!