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Ok, on the good side, the author knows their limits and does not rush. The VN development is still in progress, am I right?...

You can not bloom good ideas without lots of input. Read more stories and mark down what interests you; it will give you ideas sooner or later. 

Apart from the story, authors have firm basic painting skills, and the characters are attractive to me (A bit more NSFW may be better?). The totally handmade background is amazing, but some pictures lack detail, making it a bit hard for readers to immerse in the story. 

Besides, the animation at the beginning of each chapter and in the character dialog reflects the author's ingenuity.

In all, it is good work, and I hope authors can keep loving this work.

The rhythm of the story is intensive, the information is logical, and the updates are frequent. I believe that the authors have a mainline in mind so that this story could have a convincing ending in the future. I wish this story could have a proper ending as it started.