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ha thank you (i think)? but thanks for giving it a try!!

thank you so much :)

Not abandoned but I totally get that. 

Hi! I’m sorry you don’t like F. The love interests are set, I won’t be adding any more. 

All great points and definitely adding them to my list of things to consider and/or add. I really appreciate your feedback and your time! Wishing you the best in the meantime :)

Thank you so much for your support!! You are awesome. Looking forward to hearing your thoughts after future updates :)

Thank you so much for your support. I hope you are doing well or will be soon!

Thank you and yes, I wish us all to be at ease <3

Hey! Thank you so much for playing and for this comment. I love hearing thoughts from everyone, good and bad, and I really appreciate your sharing yours! Since it's early game, there are many decisions that won't show up for a while but it's definitely my intention that choices should matter as much as they can. 

I definitely intend to further flesh out many characters, both LIs and others. Just like MC, they have likes, dislikes, pain, happy memories, etc. I want people to enjoy the story whether or not romance or friendship is involved. One reason I'm so so so slow with writing is because I try so hard to capture that character's voice and make them unique and true to themselves. The first version of my demo, I got a lot of comments that the characters flirted the same. That was good feedback because it was unintentional. I had to really dig deep into their psyches. 

Anyway, sorry for the long response. If you read all this wow. Thank you again for taking the time!!

- Vi

Thank you, cottoncandy. <3 I appreciate your kind words and for your patience. It's very much appreciated. The coding is already in place for this game, it's just that I need to finish writing some of the demo. I do hope to be able to do that soon. But yes, mental health is really important and I'm doing my best to get it sorted. I hope you will be able to do the same. Sending you lots of care and positive vibes!

as someone who loves playing IF, I get the feeling. But speaking for myself, I didn’t pause working on the game because of “asks drying up”. I have around 100 asks that have been sitting for months because I have too much going on. I’m barely holding it together and my therapist said writing is pushing me further the wrong way so I stopped writing for now because I actually want to get my mental mindset right so I still wake up tomorrow and the next day and the next. I understand your frustrations but every author putting out games, especially the ones that are free or will always be free, has a life and things happen just like they do to everyone. I’m extremely sorry for disappointment I have caused to anyone because I haven’t provided a demo. I do my best to pop in and let people know I am not MIA but I’m not prefect. Did I make a mistake many authors make and put out my new idea without a ready demo? Yes, yes I did. Does that mean I will never release the demo or game? No. 

Wishing you the best. 

thank you <3 your message means a lot. 

yeah, that's totally fair. I will add that to my update list. Thank you for bringing that to my attention. 

hey, thank you :) when i get back into working on the game, I will review the Latin, your notes, and do more research. Appreciate you making the post and giving it a shot.

sorry bout that. When I get a chance, I'll just take this page down so it's not bothering you anymore. 

Hi - I'm sorry. It's not going smoothly at the moment. My mother in law is very sick and hospitalized and I don't have the capacity to spend a lot of time outside of work and family matters. That said, it's definitely not abandoned. I'm sorry that I can't dedicate more to this right not.

I love the name!!

so glad to hear that! Hope it helps. You’ve got this and I hope to read your game in the future :)

lol

Thank you, that's very kind of you. I also hate when games are WIP lol. Feel free to message me on Tumblr or Discord or email me at [email protected] and I would be happy to provide advice for Twine. But yes, as someone else stated, many authors have free resources on their blogs. This is still a WIP, but I do have a spreadsheet here with some resources: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/9/d/15vgEwV8lOyYZPM-BF61zkO3HAxKOSBDdT7-2...

Thank you so much, I appreciate your kind words!

Sorry - working on fixing this!

Sorry about those and thanks for flagging. I will try to update this soon. I appreciate the time you took to share them with me.

Hi - yes. I've been on a break recently due to my mother in law being diagnosed with cancer. That said, I am definitely not abandoning this game :) hopefully I can get the rest of chapter 2 done shortly. Thanks for playing!

Hi - sorry for the delay in responding. I'll look into this and respond back when I believe it is fixed. Apologies again and thanks for letting me know.

hey! I’ll take a look at the coding this weekend. The option is still there! I did change how attributes work so I might have just messed up the variables. You do have to do something particular to get that choice. Let me check and I’ll come back and tell you what has to be done :)  I think you have to have either the deception or suspicious attribute but I might have messed up that on the backend so I’ll check! 

And thank you so much for playing and for showing your friend! That means a lot to me <3

Sorry about that - looks like a coding error. I will fix it soon. 

haha thank you! Margaret and F are very different but great in their own ways. I hope you enjoy learning more about them in future updates. 

you’re so sweet, thank you so much! I hope you get the amazing results you deserve on your A levels. But if not, remember, everything will definitely be okay. It will all work out how it’s supposed to. thank you so much for playing Next in Line <3 hope you get some rest! 

it’s being worked on, slowly. My primary focus is finishing chapter 2 of my main game. 

omg I forgot I wrote that

haha I’m glad you enjoyed the update though! 

thank you 💙 I really appreciate your kind words!! 

Thanks - this was a small error on my part and should be resolved!

Thank you - these should be fixed now as I found and tested after resolving, 

haha I’m glad to hear that! Thanks for playing :)

thanks :) I will fix that before I update the game on Friday. I appreciate you letting me know. 

Haha! Well you have a couple of options:

• do more than one play through
• romance both at the same time and create a love triangle and eventually choose one
• romance both at the same time, create a love triangle and then break both of their hearts 
• that's all i got but i felt like it needed another bullet

Anyway, thanks for playing. :) Stay tuned for chapter 2 in July!

Thank you! I can't wait to finish the demo. 

yes, you can romance Arthur! 

Yes, I've been doing updates for my game for almost a year and never had this problem before. When it happened again, I closed out and refreshed and it somehow worked. Hopefully it's resolved soon.