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So those of us who originally purchased it here can no longer get it? That's disappointing...

Please disregard. While it was throwing those errors during extraction, the game still ran perfectly........and I loved it! Wonderful writing and the animations seem so much better! I hadn't heard anything about this story in a long time and had started to fear I might not. But now I see what took so long. Fantastic work my friend. I will wait patiently for the rest. Bravo!

I was really excited to finally see the next chapter was ready. But then I got two bad downloads in a row. Different files within the archive failing CRC checks. Is there a known issue or something I should double check?

I cannot tell you how much I absolutely enjoyed this. You folks are extremely talented storytellers. The way your scenes are set, the narration, the buildup, not to mention the art and animations.......it's masterful work. You guys really, really have a nack for storytelling. I do want to find out if you folks have a Patreon or Discord community because we need to support talents like yourselves so we can continue to enjoy your works. 

I have had problems with script error messages in the Steam version which seems to be related to Steam achievements. It's a minor bother. If I could make one suggestion (not a complaint by any stretch), it would be this. The painstaking detail you guys use to weave the erotic scenes is palpable mostly because of the narration & dialog. However, the kissing scenes really don't seem to match the tale of what's happening at the time. Perhaps this is a limitation of the engine being used. For example, you have a moment like that in this most recent Chapter (7) between Alex and Jaye. The hunger and desire being told at the time isn't being done any justice by the paltry visualization of the kissing. In real life, two people with that sort of hunger would be wrapped in deep kisses for a long period. You could see in their faces. But unfortunately, all we see are what seem to just be pecks and maybe the tips of tongues touching each other. If its possible to better illustrate the kind of hungry, passionate kisses that your narration is weaving, please look into that. I don't want to have to imagine it in my own mind because what I'm seeing doesn't really match it. If it is a limitation of the engine, then please disregard. I can imagine how badly you might wish you could do such things in that circumstance. This is just such a masterful work; I would love to see it illustrated to match what the words & music are telling. 

This is some of the best work I've ever beheld in an AVP and I truly hope to be able to see more. Thank you for sharing this vision with us :) 

Soooo good once again!!! But killing me with that ending! I cursed out loud! Needless to say, awaiting the next chapter with bated breath.

This is very upsetting. I've been so looking forward to your update for this. I hope the suggestion that one of the other members made does work. I really hate that they are doing this too such great story writers.

Ok so I will try not to gush too much, but this game was brilliant! I haven't played this well written and produced type of game since Leap of Faith and Artemis. I really got connected with the characters and the setting. I love the humor! The music and audio is also superb. I can't say   enough good things about it. Only negative is how jarred I was when I got to the end of 0.5. I literally shouted, "NO!!!"

Well done my friend! I cannot wait to get the rest of this game :)

Thanks. I did another download in a different browser and finally got a good one. Great game, BTW. I love the reference to Lexi from LoF :)

So not a good start. Unfortunately, when trying to extract the folder to my HD, it's failing a CRC check. Tried redownloading, but no good. File issue?

I'm loving the story so far. Best one since Leap of Faith.........and I LOVE the crossover! The end of Chap 4 hit harsh though. Hope I can live til the next one.